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The Avenger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-09 10:47 AM
Such an odd item, though logical in its own way. It falls into the problem of being simply too useful - why would they not make dozens of these with such a useful effect? Anyone with mangled limbs due to accident (or otherwise) would gladly deal with the pain to get back a fully functional limb.

I think the simple adjustment of adding 'realistic' regeneration rates - months as opposed to days, as well as losing significant dexterity, agility and strength as your body restore the nerves and brain connections would help balance it - especially for PC use/abuse.




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The Avenger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-09 10:48 AM
They were criminals being punished for a reason? Why should convenience be a consideration? Better they not have use of their fingers until their 'sentance' is up. Teach them dependency on others :)
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Bir Beshig
Locations  (Ruins)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 12:07 PM
How used? Simple - your party finds the ruins in some out of the way place. Perhaps some spirits or things drawn to chaos and insanity if you need the ruins to be a little less lifeless. I think the odd ruins sitting silently by themselves works.

It brings to mind the speculative cities the Chinese have been building, well before anyone is ready to occupy them, and now sit largely abandoned. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-05 11:01 AM
Wow!

These are a cool set of interrelated subs! Good job guys! Go to Comment
Boustefaille Cart Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2008-08-26 11:35 AM
This is an excellent tidbit to add to any world. Nicely done. Now I'm hungry. Go to Comment
Flame.
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:48 AM
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Protoss - A fantasy version
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-26 11:42 AM
I like the idea of including a Protoss analogue in one's game, and this does a good job of gathering the pieces of culture and technology to make it work.

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Saddah
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 07:47 AM
She certainly could be a regular in a campaign - an odd contact that could be dealt with as long as you avoid her games of chance.

Maybe events force one's hands, and you take the chance, for she knows something or someone critical to your mission/plot.

Neat stuff - I like her! Go to Comment
Elindor
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 11:28 AM
You have good advice here to work from - give it a shot! Go to Comment
Falhath
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-08 01:10 PM
Excellent world post! Go to Comment
Dreifach
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 02:32 PM
A great city - I can see it in my minds eye. Good stuff! Go to Comment
Alerion
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 09:53 PM
A good piece of color to add to ones world. Some could mistake them for Pheonixes.
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Nurin beads
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-08 10:13 AM
Suitable for the Garage Sale From Hell I would say :)

Nifty.
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The Stairs of Kienor
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-26 09:27 AM
One Scroll is The city has a thousand stories, which has far less then a thousand stories.. :) Go to Comment
Velvet Worm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-20 10:55 AM
I wonder what kind of project the Horde wasup to? Go to Comment
Velvet Worm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-20 10:56 AM
This is a strange one - but I like it. Go to Comment
The Bosques
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-26 12:04 PM
I am beginning to appreciate shorter submissions, and I think this one accomplishes the job of quickly painting a people. Go to Comment
Galron Stones
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-01 08:32 AM
I really like this concept, especially since the 'original' becomes a key factor and could easily become the focus of adventure.

eg. An elite unit equipped with enchanted armor and weapons guards the king/dingus/other notable. Due to government incompetence and cost cutting, rather then multiple scattered originals being used to provide the equipment, the entire units' equipment are tied to a single set. This set is fairly well protected, but still represents a single point of failure that could turn the nearly invincible unit into one much easier to defeat.


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30 Rangers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 08:52 AM
A good 30.
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The Order of Orders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 09:31 AM


I am of multiple minds on this one - it seems to be a good collection, but there might be other tools available to provide this grouping.



Freetext (order)



Region - Orders of Knighthood - a very specialized region, but perhaps okay.



Favourites Lists - Maybe.



Perhaps if each of the orders was given a brief blurb - even a copy of their summaries - this might improve this sub.



I'm torn.



At the very least , this may serve as a source for one of our new-fangled generators when those are available :)

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