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Simeon the Caretaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-12 06:44 PM
A very solid, though nasty, NPC. Perfect for what he is. Go to Comment
Condru-Hanra
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 01:50 PM
An amusing read and an interesting character. It brought to me visions of Heavy Metal in fact (the movie). Go to Comment
Hry'un
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-18 06:59 AM
A decent idea, and the secret would work better if the village was isolated. Go to Comment
Elven Green Tea
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-09 08:44 AM
This is a great and universal idea. This could easily spawn many adventure ideas - think how many voyages pursuit of such commodities in the real world has generated.
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Wolfkin
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-17 06:04 PM
If you are looking for a sub which is on the other side of the spectrum - not saying that is where to go, look at the Alun or the Asrok. Mine are overkill, yours need work.

At least make it better then a scroll entry. This entry would fit in a list of '30 Really Minor Races' or a Idea seed.

My big concern is you are not taking any of the advise given already to improve your posts. Not sure why. Go to Comment
Ice Caves
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 08:37 AM
A good reminder that not all dungeons need to be underground.

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Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 10:27 AM
Game of thrones indeed :) He reminds me of the Lannister patriarch Tywin, though even more martial. Obviously his career path has been quite different.

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The Kemlar Healing Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-21 08:23 AM
I personally would make the downsides more random and slower, to give time to deal with it, and to produce more characters who have been impacted by it.

At the risk of being overly 'scientific' - something I dislike when combined with fantasy, I could easily see an aggressive healing potion being capable of inducing quite virulent cancers.



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The Chalice Bearers
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 06:49 AM
A great piece of local culture to add depth. I can feel a few ideas forming..
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Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 06:14 PM
A decent item - I'd add a multiple-year 'charge' time to it which would serve to add some complexity. Perhaps it is hidden somewhere 'safe' to charge and the PCs are contacted to retrieve it.

Of course the PCs are bringing more then the rod to the villain - they may be a victim as well. Go to Comment
The Azure Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 08:23 PM
I agree also with Scras. That and all of the paragraphs. It almost seemed to be an attempt to be silly.




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Seyeverasin, the Waning-Moon Musicians
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-20 09:02 PM
I have not yet found a boring submission from Captain Penguin. This one is sutiably odd and mythic. Go to Comment
Lavas, the Raging Ones
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 10:09 PM
I love the descriptions - stolen beauty of harlots. Great stuff :) Go to Comment
Lidda the Show-Stopper!
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-13 07:19 PM
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The Old World
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-11 10:14 AM
This is awesome - I have a thing for high-magic campaigns and this is an excellent example of one. Go to Comment
What is a homebrew?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:18 PM
A rant perhaps, but it is a gaming article, and I have seen published articles which have written more and said far less. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 02:33 PM
How the heck did I miss voting on this one? It is awesome and going on my to add to list... Go to Comment
James Lorus
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-13 07:03 PM
Pretty well done, but it tapers off at the end. Go to Comment
Kastraad and New Pastello
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 07:35 AM
I agree with Muro on this one. Good details, but the plethora of parentheses is somewhat distracting. Go to Comment
Gesthari
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 09:00 PM
I love these though I would turn down the lethality somewhat. The visual is great! Go to Comment
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