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Doctor Ghanek
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-11 07:57 AM
This is really good! Go to Comment
Engine Prototype #4 (Catastroph)
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 10:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Vocran Palimpsest
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-14 01:07 PM
Only problem is that Vivisections are only performed on live subjects, not corpses.. Go to Comment
Dirziet Model-6
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 10:22 AM
The Lee-enfield of this world. Love the WWI feel this world has. Would love to see new stuff too.
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The Sculptress
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-26 01:32 PM
I think this is a great sub, though I think the entire handling of insanity is distracting and perhaps is fodder for another sub. Most systems have some rules regarding insanity. Simply indicating that those encased are subject to insanity over time would have been fine for me.

Regarding the physics being non-feasible, all it takes is to say the cement is indeed magic and forms a paper-thin coat that still happens to be as strong as concrete.

Or, the super-strong coating is created _by_ magic but is not in itself magic.

For all it matters, I'd have the coating be magic and be done with it.

I have never been a fan of expecting Fantasy subs to ascribe to closely to real world physics. Go to Comment
Styrics
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-10 12:45 PM
Agreed. There is a wiki that includes these details:

http://davideddings.wikia.com/wiki/Styrics







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Styrics
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-11 10:34 AM
Update: Submission should be your own work, not a repost/summary of others. Go to Comment
Managing [high-]level world demographics for D20
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 11:27 AM
If this could somehow be reworked to remove the very D20 oriented nature of the submisison, I think this could be useful.

Back to in-work you go.. Go to Comment
The Lash Serpent
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-23 12:34 PM
Nice treatment on a realistic 'sea monster'. As others have said, the exaggerations really help sell it. Go to Comment
Condori Dragonlings
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-16 09:32 AM
Good creature, but the summary could use a spellcheck. Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 03:02 PM
Another nice Monkey's paw item. Good job! Go to Comment
The Jongleurs Sanguine
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-14 06:10 AM
Pretty cool! An excellent option for your typical assassins guild. Can't improve on whats been said already, though a plot idea or two would be great. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-24 09:47 AM
A great organization that really could be used pretty much anywhere.
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Samahen Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-09 06:16 PM
Quite unique - I like it! Go to Comment
The Way of Fang and Claw
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-27 01:10 PM
Interesting. Go to Comment
Theater of Confused Arts
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 01:34 PM
I like the idea to a point - the use of a fixed point to contact customers will only last so long as no concerted intelligent effort is made to ferret them out. Just Cause is a fairly recent control over law enforcement. Go to Comment
Orick
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-05 02:47 PM
An interesting minor race. I found the text a little unclear but rereading helped. Go to Comment
Falani Tersk
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-23 12:40 PM
A good solid lifeform to add depth to any campaign. Good job! Go to Comment
Buck-Ogre Rum
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-03-04 01:33 PM
Good in a twisted way... :) Go to Comment
The Puchinegs
NPCs  (Extras)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-30 06:58 PM
These folks are awesome Muro! Would be nice to know what there secret is, but I'll live.

Can be used to fill the same role as gypsies. I like this one! Go to Comment
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