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Captain Jona Widebealm
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2008-09-11 09:18 AM
Damn, how'd I miss this one!

Nicely done Wulf - miss yours stuff! Go to Comment
Lady Gemma of Atkinshire
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-16 07:43 PM
Well done!

A truely well crafted and complete NPC. Go to Comment
The Annalia
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-11 08:49 AM
This is some seriously deep background material.
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Senach I, King of Tir Earrach
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-14 02:24 PM
Now this is the way to present an NPC. If I could make this a Golden Submission, I would.

Excellent job! Go to Comment
The Civic Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-14 02:25 PM
Good solid post. Not too much of a wow factor for me though.
A useful piece of history. Go to Comment
Annoying Cursed items
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-14 02:28 PM
I do have a soft spot for minor cursed items, and these are quite good.
The amendments made to it really help in my opinion. Go to Comment
Order of Silence
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-14 02:33 PM
An excellent religious post. I love how it can be tied easily into other existing religons. 4.5/5 Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 06:53 PM
Good solid items, but I'm not a big fan of hidden powers on posts. You could indicate that few know the true story, but for us as GM's, etc, it would be nice to provide the real deets :)

Not that we can't fill in our own details, but I would like to know your ideas. Go to Comment
The continuing tale of the Bard
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-29 09:29 PM
I think you need to wrap these in something (use them in a backstory for another sub, for example.)

Just reposting the songs seems a little incomplete. Go to Comment
Princess Reisha
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-22 11:05 AM
Great background character. I'm not convinced that storm was natural :P
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Items of Legend; the Wanderer’s equipment and tools
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-10 02:09 PM
I like how the equipment is characterized. A good description of items of quality, but not magic. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-12 02:13 PM
My thoughts are halfway between Cheka and Moonhunter. I'd suggest reediting it as per moonhunter, then I'll vote. It is definately a good start, with lots of detail, but not enough in some areas. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-09 11:15 AM
Quite interesting. A lot of detail! Go to Comment
Shaltier Gremtre
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-02 01:01 PM
Interesting, though it appears that Trigu is a god who believes in overkill :) Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-04 06:15 PM
Holy detail batman!

Nicely done! Wow. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 10:51 AM
An interesting and useful race. Different, powerful in their own way. I like this! Go to Comment
Konelis Larach
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-23 08:58 PM
Not bad indeed. Good comment Chaosmark. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 01:05 PM
A good take on the wandering immortal. Very well done. Go to Comment
Beard of the Magus
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-09 01:52 PM
How come I have visions of someone cruel animating one of these things???
:) Go to Comment
Mathius the Great King
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-10 03:49 PM
An almost too perfect historical figure. More useful dead then alive :)
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