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Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 08:06 AM
Incorporated Longspeak's addition into the main text - thanks Longspeak!

If anyone else wants to sound off on things to avoid on your first sub, feel free to add em! Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 10:55 AM
Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 01:47 PM
I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 02:12 PM
No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 07:40 AM
Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 06:56 PM
Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 10:44 AM


Update: Cleaned it up a little, casting it back out into the world.



Not quite sure _why_ it is showing up on the main page.

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Gravediggers' Legacy
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 11:14 AM
Nifty - this could be a very interesting encounter to add when pcs are hunting undead. Little would they suspect this added complication.

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A Dozen Unusual Flowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 07:32 AM
I love these! I Certainly will be incorporating them into my Unseen Fortress revamp..

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Parna's Cradle and the Golden Stamp
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 08:16 AM
A cool location though I think it could benefit from a little more going over.

Some of the paragraphs suffer from being a bit too large, and the same could be said for a few sentences.

Others are a bit odd - I can't quite follow this one:

"Pasha is atypical physical specimen an Ator."




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30 Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 07:06 AM
An arrow with a shape like frog's crotch. eg: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Fleches-japonaises-p1000615.jpg

Basically U-shaped. Used for cutting ropes and rigging. Not sure of other purposes.
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The Cosmetologist
NPCs  (Minor)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-08 01:06 PM
Some thought provoking stuff here - really points to the subjective reality that is the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
Encounter 45
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 08:53 AM
Brutal. Awful. Sadly believable when you think of such things as radiation testing in the 50's and other immoral scientific studies carried out even in 'enlightened' times.
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Destroyer Type Tank
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 08:34 PM
Straight forward enough, though there are very few advantages to a twin barrel tank.

In the Battletech universe, where 1-hit kills are not the standard, it makes sense, but in the modern(ish) world where a single MBT hit is generally a kill, a second barrel is unnecessary and a waste of space to use for ammo.

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Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 07:29 AM
Great tribute, and nicely integrated!

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Lescelina the Witch Queen
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-26 11:18 AM
An interesting character - though it seems her own decisions had very little impact upon her fate. Why did she so readily take up the queen-ship of the beings that slew her mother?

The setting is well developed and the writing good.

A great addition to Decathros!
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Xen'da'rik
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 08:22 AM
This is very good, though I think a clear explanation of what happened to cause the desert to grow so precipitously would help - that part seemed to beg for more details.

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7 Things About Criticism
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-20 12:21 PM
This should be linked very close to the submit button on comments. Useful stuff.

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Shang Lao
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-06 02:29 PM
This is a perfect Cosmic Era villain. Props for Big Trouble in Little China. Loved that movie.

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Armored Units of the Cosmic Era
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-25 07:30 AM
A large submission, with lots of great little details. I would add linkages to various other entities when mentioned for the first time, especially if Acronyms are used (OCP, etc).

I guess I wonder how some of these 'tanks' aren't. :)



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