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Zora, Sorceress Queen
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-07-07 08:25 PM
That said, I would probably use the more verbose form with each sentence followed by a bit of expansion.
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Zora, Sorceress Queen
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-07-07 08:27 PM
I like her - a simple straightforward NPC that can easily be used. I think Cersei is very close to this one :)
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Face Dancer
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-10-18 10:08 AM
Great - but I think it could go a little further to work properly.

In addition to the musculature of the face, changes would need to be made to the underlying bones. Bone would need to be removed in multiple places to allow for ratio changes between the various facial feature to allow for expansion or compression. In these joints would be placed either implanted servos (bad for lots of reasons) or tissue that could be caused to swell or contract as needed. This would allow for dramatic changes in appearance but would have the side effect of reducing the structural integrity of the face.

Another side effect of this is the facedancer loses their original face. Their resting face would be an odd one - contracted with with features a bit too close to be natural. So, they would always normally be acting.

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Items  (SpaceShips)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-01 01:10 PM
A good utility post. Go to Comment
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-28 08:26 AM
Some pretty deep thoughts here :) Scary it may come to pass.
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Static Smoke
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-20 11:23 AM
This is interesting, and would best be combined with IR blocking smoke as well.

Countermeasures could include the simple expedients of fans, or mini-drones with trailing ariels.

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Static Smoke
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-20 11:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
CQC in the Cosmic Era
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-09 10:07 AM
A good rundown on these.

Rippers seem a lot less useful to me after seeing these exist -

Technobabblish nanofiber to make it even more effective. But then we replace the teeth on the saw with Hyperblades .. :)
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Twin Eye Spectacles
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-25 11:35 AM
I love simple items like this! Go to Comment
30 Books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-02 11:58 AM
This is a good way to highlight many of the other great submissions that you can find on this site. Its a little meta in places, but overall good.

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25 Things to Find in a Nook, Alcove, or Grotto
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-30 08:31 AM
Indeed, very old school! Awesome, dreadful stuff here!

Oubliette is of French origin - to forget. Lock em up and throw away the key.

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Ring of Beast Shapes
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-24 10:21 PM
Excellent! This is good stuff.Indeed, welcome aboard.

Introduce yourself here if you would like -,19.0.html
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Caught in the Vortex
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-18 08:32 AM
This does a great job of conjuring up madness. As a piece, I guess it lacks a final punch/twist that would put it over the top.

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Jacob 'Polaris' Richter
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-13 01:24 PM
I'm very, very impressed with this. Excellent voice. I didn't mean to read it all in one sitting, but I did. I got a strong Watchman vibe from this as well, if not as dark.

Top marks! You must run a damn good campaign.

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Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-10 09:06 AM
Of all of Cosmic Era submissions, I find this one the scariest.
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Arrow of the Winged Sparrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-05 09:09 PM
The target could be inanimate, and you could tie a note to the arrow :P
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Items  (Computers)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-06 09:21 AM

This is one way to make the Oculas a lot more practical. Thinner, lighter, more durable. Really its a logical progression.

As for vulnerability to digital hacking, it would not be hard to work in analog displays as well as non-digital fiber optic channels.

You could also have smart materials which can shift between opaque and clear, which could switch between full VR (full opacity with display), none (full transparency) or augmented reality (full transparency + display).

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Ildas's Guildmasters
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-04 09:32 PM
He's actually my Occult guild persona... :P
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Ildas's Guildmasters
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-05 11:07 AM
He's in work, but here's his current physical description:

Illdus appears as a well-to-do middle-aged merchant, perhaps one with ties to, or at least aspirations towards nobility. Tall, thin and straight backed, with salt-and-pepper hair and a flamboyant mustache, he stands out in a crowd. He speaks loudly and almost always passionately on whatever issue has caught his attention at that point in time, and frequently rails against vice and sloth.

Those who deal with him behind closed doors see him as a profane, foolish, vice-ridden hypocrite - he accepts bribes, drinks heavily, and is frequently with escorts.

There is a third layer to him, the truth hidden by a clumsy lie, and the careful lie. He is not the slightest bit foolish or emotional. The thin public face, his weak 'private' face lie about a true private face of steel. Go to Comment
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