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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-08 12:20 PM
Great idea, but it needs cleaned up a little. For example, if you use chrome as browser you get instant and free spellcheck.
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30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-05 06:54 PM
I will need to come back at this a few times, but what I've gotten cements this score for me.

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The Heads of Zaid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-03 11:31 AM
I am a big fan of submissions that suggest things eons past. Well written and detailed.

Welcome to the Citadel! Thanks for posting!

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Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-23 12:34 PM
I like this character - can serve as an antagonistic patron or enemy easily enough.
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Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-15 11:36 AM
This is a great villain. He feels worse than both Dr. Doom and Dr. Octopus.

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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 10:23 AM
A very good writeup - lots of details and the tendency for these people to store stuff extradimensionally helps tie up the loose ends of where the heck are all the artifacts.

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Glassenheim Foundation
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 09:26 AM


Quite the society, seeming to be unassailable. A virtual Death Star for your hero's.



CC-1

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PrimaryAssociateProfiles.tex
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-29 07:31 AM
A nice assortment of characters - I love the hints at your game world these folks bring. Seems they would also fit well in Scras's Cosmic Era - it has a similar vibe.

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30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-27 11:14 AM
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30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-09 06:56 AM
That actually was a problem with the site's link posting code. Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 07:49 AM
This is a great sub, though the power of the ring is overshadowed by its origin and details.

Will this disparity be addressed in the upcoming submission you mention?

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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 09:59 AM
Bleh can't believe I minced Prince and Princesses :)
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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 07:23 AM
This is a good adventure/campaign setup. Not too detailed, but then its not too tied to a specific setting.

For princesses, there are several 30's that could be used:

30 Princesses

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Necropolis
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-19 09:22 AM
Wow, excellent use of graphics and interesting puzzles. It is very old school style - the dungeon existing mainly as a test, with insta-death being common. Since you cite Tomb of Horrors as an inspiration, that part is not too surprising, and I would hope PCs going in would know this.

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Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-14 01:48 PM
Getcher Magic beans here! Cheap! 7 beans for an old cow! Go to Comment
Necrotrons
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-14 11:38 AM
I like these - brings back visions of Starcraft with infested units, but its still very cool.

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Teratology
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-12 08:57 AM
This is an excellent treatment of the Giant Monster vibe, apart from the creatures as deadly contaminates being as strongly put as they being a source of food/fertilizer. Though, given the low value of the individual in the Cosmic Era I guess they are not necessarily at odds.
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Balor's Embrace
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-05 09:21 AM
This hints at more, and I think covers the bases nicely. The bit about the dark spirits aiding the smith is a good one - I like this.

The nature of its chief ability - to counter pain - is loose enough to fit to many game systems mechanics, so really the determination of its power is up to the GM.
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228th Federation Infantry Battalion
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 11:02 AM
A very detailed rundown of the unit, though there are not really any people detailed enough to make it much more than an equipment list. Being virtually wiped out, this seems more useful as a historical event in your campaign then anything else.
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Heraldry of the Underworld
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-05 09:44 AM
Hmm, thought I commented, but apparently did not click OK.
This has a lot of uses, and is a perfect fit with Tattoos.

These can be used also to adorn items to provide subtle clues to their abilities.
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