What an odd little item. It takes a bit to get my head around it, especially about the emotional vs actual need.

I would consider a time when the wearer could have their head lopped off as a critical one.

There are bits of promise to this one, I like the idea that to see into the future comes at the cost of seeing things now.
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A minecraft bucket before minecraft :)
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Not a bad post at all. An interesting locale.
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A great sub Echo. Love the legendary atmosphere.

Please let me know if you still want the Barbarian Horde comments excised.
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A good sub - quite original. There are still a few typos and oddities that could be fixed improve it. Go to Comment

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This is pretty cool, and could be a lot better with work! Go to Comment

A great item, though the origin could be better.
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Well, isn't this a buried gem! I love it! Go to Comment

BH! Go for it! We won't bite.... Much. Go to Comment

Heh, those evil threads could be VERY handy for assassins specializing in hunting mages.

It would be worth well above it's weight in gold as it sound like even segments of threads could be deadly.

Take an arrow and wrap one thread behind the arrowhead.... Go to Comment

Definately. Needs some polish though. Go to Comment

Excellent little herb! Go to Comment

A decently detailed PC background, though it falls into the broken home/rape cliche that seems designed to do away with the complexities of having an actual family and all that entails.

Simpler to have no ties, yes, but cuts off an area for drama. Go to Comment

I can see the effort was made to create this character, but I would almost go as far as Moonhunter on this one.

Loners make _terrible_ bounty hunters. You are doomed to have to find your mark by simple blundering, as no-one will give you the time of day.

A frankenstien monster will be treated as a monster, not hired and feted.

While not hopeless, it fills the description for a 1/5

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I really like this idea. Adds details to a culture, especially if it is a local adaptation instead of a world-wide affair. Perhaps these were adopted due to a specific spirit or group of spirits that happens to be haunting this region for generations.

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Very Good! I should have found this one yesterday! Go to Comment

There is a germ of an idea here, but unless it was intended to be a LOTR submission, the use of Radagast is distracting.

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Interesting. Not having seen the original version, I can't comment on improvement, but its got a pretty good backstory. Go to Comment

Nice evil item... Me likes. Go to Comment