I like this a lot! I was thinking about something similar. Go to Comment

I do like this take on the Nightmare, I happen to like greek mythos monsters and this is an excellent treatment of the creature.

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A key location in a campaign if I ever saw one. Nicely done!

I'd like to see some specific NPCs - either short and included in the sub, or new ones linked, would help flesh it out more. Go to Comment

With or without the silly demonizing of Drow, it is still good. It is not hard to remap the race since it plays little part in the nature of the item.
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Not bad but it could use some more polish. Go to Comment

Missed this one when it came out - not bad! Go to Comment

Needs a bit more work I think, though the evolution from a wooden practice weapon to a true weapon of war is an interesting concept. Go to Comment

Now, for why someone would need/make something like this, I have one word:

Chainmail.

A smaller version of this device would be a godsend, as the best chainmail armor had riveted links. I've make chainmail the lazy way, by squishing links together with pliers, and that was tedious enough. I can't imagine the amount of work required to make a riveted suit with medieval technology... Go to Comment

Simple, effective and realistic - many real-world cosmetics include toxic materials, just in low (hopefully) doses. Go to Comment

Interesting, though I am reminded of the sharks in Finding Nemo.... Personally I think vampires should not be sugar-coated. They are anti-life and evil. But that's my opinion.

There are blatant spelling errors that should be addressed and some of the sentence structures need rewor - like
"In a world where rival vampires would like to get you out of the way to be on the safe side and where the inquisition hunts anything not 'natural' not to mention fledgling vampire slayers trying to start on less vicious vamps first they find there is safety in numbers. "

This should be three sentences - too much is being conveyed in one.

My advice - Take Moonhunter's Advice wholeheartedly. Go to Comment

A random result which is quite nice - it has a very oriental feel to it.
Crouching dragon hidden dragon come to mind though without quite the magical feel. Go to Comment

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I do like your take on Demons. Go to Comment

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I think this one needs to come to the fore again. Go to Comment

An decent item, though what does it specifically do if you make an earnest attack on the living? Bounce off? Go to Comment

Pretty cool. I got a modern day equivilent that (tries) to project christmas and halloween images on the house. Would never have though it could be used this way. Excellent! Go to Comment

I like this odd item! Go to Comment

Sylvyr's comment is for me the most likely use for this for me. A good list that could stand being added to. :)
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