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Gazzo Sleep-Eye
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 10:55 AM
I like this sad fellow. Not all heros are heroic.

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Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-11 10:54 AM
This is good, but I think imbedded links as opposed to the single freetext would be better.  Go to Comment
The Swollen Shadow
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 10:49 AM
Ok, going to do my part and bring this gem to the fore. Now, I'm personally unlikely to run this adventure as is, but it contains so many elements of value that I can't let it sit hidden.

So here we go!

(For some reason I can't vote???)

Edit: But I can HOH and this great collection deserves it! Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-01 09:11 AM
Cool! I like these. Though the visual description puts me in mind of Daleks. Go to Comment
Nortwalk Irregulars
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 10:32 AM
A decent group - odd enough to stand out a little.



Commented on for Comment Challenge!


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Greiges' Killer Shrews
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-22 08:58 PM
We are Shrew! See us and Dispair! Go to Comment
Space Combat - Weapons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 07:42 PM
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Spirit World
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-16 01:35 PM
A great collection of ideas! Nicely done Manfred! Come back and stay a while! Go to Comment
Poor Josias
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 10:56 AM
A neat NPC that could be worked into the tapestry of one's world. Adjust the gods as needed.

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Dreamweaver Cassiopia
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-26 08:35 AM
Mmm. Dreams.

Nicely done Moon. Go to Comment
The Silenced Ones
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-14 11:00 AM
Wow, these are truely unique. Great job! Go to Comment
Shadow Bestiary
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 10:43 AM
The variety and type of creatures on this sub is impressive. I think Moons suggestions on making it a scroll and codex is a good idea. Also, some of the references can be turned to true links.


I wonder why this whole set of subs seems undervoted... Go to Comment
Verner
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 12:31 PM
An interesting one, though the frequent use of quote for emphasis I found distracting.

A good creature.
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The Altar of the Sun
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-18 08:16 PM
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The Rotter
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-11 10:32 AM
That weapon is simply, wicked.

You are quite the evil one.

I *almost* pity your players :) Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-12 10:30 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cloud Wall
Locations  (Fortification)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 02:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Torch Spider
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-06 10:31 AM
I agree on the size with Dragon Lord. This is Fantasy and they could be the size of a cow and I would not see a problem with that :) Would'nt want to meet one though.

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The Sisterhood of Aruvielle
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-17 10:49 AM
I would have liked to have seen the provided feedback incorporated in this submission - there are some good building blocks here.

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The Church of the Merciful and Glorious Ion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-17 09:30 AM
The other comments really say what is needed here. Right now they feel like cardboard cutout villains to fill the 'burn the witch'. There is good drama potential with how they deal with heretic priests and the like.
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