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Valadaars demoted subs
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-09 08:56 PM
Spider gernade Go to Comment
The Great White Dragon
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-20 08:02 AM
I'd say this is infinitely better then the original submisson, but I need to echo others concerns on grammar, etc. I do have a problem with a Dragon named Dracon. Go to Comment
The King of Hingrad
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 10:50 AM
A good start, though the power level of the Robe puts this into the 'mythical' category and seems more like fiction.

There is good detail here, but its virtually all background and little on how this nearly indestructible fellow would be used.
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King Arkon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-24 10:09 AM
I think Wulf said it best. An interesting scenario made possible by magic.

Perhaps when he is released there was need of him again, due to prophesy or some other factor. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-18 07:34 PM
Wow. An excellent, if disturbing, submission. Reminds me in passing of Kane the Puritan, but no where near as much honor.

Nicely done! Go to Comment
The Devourer Of Here
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 03:14 PM
How did I not vote on this - I certainly remember it.

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30 Curses
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-16 08:52 AM
Curses! Didn't see that older submission :) Go to Comment
30 Curses
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-16 11:32 AM
Okay, Looks like I'll have to prune this list down to remove the duplicates. Just need to come up with about 10 more or so....

These 30's are hard :) Go to Comment
30 Curses
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2009-03-31 01:35 PM
Updated: Switched out #16 since it is described elsewhere Go to Comment
30 Curses
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-04 11:30 AM
Update: Link to generator added. Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 08:14 PM
Not a bad critter! Go to Comment
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-24 11:26 AM
I agree with Silveressa on this one. There is really very little required to make them an alien race. Go to Comment
30 Princesses
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 12:26 PM
Very interesting. I like how the different bird traits translate to personalities! Go to Comment
30 Necromancers
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 10:40 AM
Awesome 30! I've been working on one and it is a lot of work. Kudos on this one! Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 10:48 AM
Another awsome submission. I love the image that these conjure up! Go to Comment
The Enori
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 10:44 AM
I agree with Captain Penguin. Also, there are some pretty bad run-on sentances:

The hunter left the wood and spent the rest of his life looking for the creature he never saw it again but many hunters to try to find it and some saw it, but their horses could not out run it and its mental power repelled anyone who got close. Go to Comment
Daltorz of the inferno
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-09 09:21 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Heart of a Warrior
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-06 03:02 PM
Great premise - and you could use it to bring back familiar, if decomposed, faces.

Oh crap, not that guy again!
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The Wrath of Anut-Khanut
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-13 07:58 PM
Wow. Truely impressive. I really like it.

Wouldn't want to meet him though... Go to Comment
The Headsman
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-12 08:25 PM
I know this fellow is a little one dimensional, but I had to get him out of my head and into a submission.

:) Go to Comment
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