Of course if magic existed, this would be an obvious use. Good one!
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I agree with the majority here - this is a location, not a plot, and is a great canvas against which the GM can paint his own picture.

Need a patron's home? Great - here you go.

 

 

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A good background character that could suddenly become much more should the need arise.
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A nice little worked up adventure. A tad heavy handed, but with careful handling it could work. Go to Comment

Like hearing how people use subs from here :) Go to Comment

I like this - though I'd have liked to have more ideas on the Dark Mysteries. Go to Comment

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I like it too and there could be many uses for such a device. For example, it could be a good anti-material type weapon - set fire to mantlets, siege equipment and the like, and used to terrible effect against calvary.  Maybe a regular arrow might not cause a war horse to throw a rider, but a red hot one?

 

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Okay Agony - there is some good advice here among the critique. Give it another shot if you would.

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I really like this item. Personally, I think that magic items should sometimes arise outside of the efforts of high-level spellcasters. The whim of the gods, magical accidents, by the hands of skilled artisans or the workings of lower power spellcasters. Go to Comment

Really neat - I need to read more of the shards now.

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It's a good start - feels a little incomplete. The core idea is interesting, though the motivation of the mages in incorporate the little fellow seems a little weak. Go to Comment

A nice, simple item which can be tossed in pretty much anywhere. Go to Comment

A role-model for pathetic underlings everywhere!

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I can forgive cliche - I tend in that direction from time to time, but the lack of attention paid to spelling and grammar (Again, I am no saint on that front) is somewhat less forgivable. Go to Comment

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Existing comments cover what I would say, apart from _guessing_ a springbolt is a gun.
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Wow, unvoted is bringing up gems.  I love this one! Top marks!

 

 

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I don't know, this is really cool!

I love subs which paint a mental pictures of places, and this is one of those. Go to Comment