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Preserver Thought
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-08 07:21 PM
Good solid Kerran post. You have put an awful lot of work into this world and it shows! Go to Comment
Inns and Taverns of Antioch
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 12:07 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Old Code
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:28 PM
Very useful sub! Go to Comment
Jaith, the Message
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 01:57 PM
Great Job! Go to Comment
Boldrei the Barber-Chiurgeon
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 09:02 AM
I have to say this is the best NPC I've seen on this site.

The picture painted of his shop is wonderful.

5/5! Go to Comment
Darome Rikael
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:26 PM
An interesting sub, though some of the paragraphs seem a little long, at least for me.

Well described. Good job! Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 01:59 PM
A great story, and I love the choice of period.

Well Done! Go to Comment
Encyclopedia Kerrenica
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:19 PM
An interesting read - not too useful to me directly, but also an excellent inspiration. Go to Comment
Sagas of Kerren
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 07:55 PM
I think taken as a whole they are an interesting and detailed submission. Good inspirational material! Go to Comment
Against the Storms - The Kerren Setting
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-03 07:14 PM
I find the amount of work and breadth of this world truely impressive. Now, I am not going to run a Kerren campaign any time soon, but it is very good source of inspiration.

Strangely, I've never read any of the Pern series. Perhaps it's time to take a look at them. Go to Comment
The Star of Eleuthisa
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 01:05 PM
The writing is excellent, but I am having a bit of trouble sorting out the details.

What is provided is good for use as legends to provide to PCs, etc when researching the item, but the real details of the item would be useful. At some point we need a little more then pure narration. Some of the other formatting tools - Bold, Italics, BlockQuotes, in moderation, would help as well.

Where did it really come from and what are it's abilities?

That said, for a 1st submission, it is really good. Go to Comment
The Banner of the Golden Serpent
Items  (Art and Music)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 12:30 PM
Great job Wulfhere! Go to Comment
The Banner of the Golden Serpent
Items  (Art and Music)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 08:16 PM
K, those revisions really improved the submission! Awesome job - as usual :) Go to Comment
Corvius Haereticus
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 12:29 PM
Wow.

Nothing to add here - Awesome. Go to Comment
Hachnars Demon Blood
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-27 03:34 PM
Clearing out my long list of in-work... Go to Comment
Hachnars Demon Blood
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 12:39 PM
K, now I admit I've no idea when to provide a backstory and when not to.

Suggestions? Go to Comment
Hachnars Demon Blood
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 07:24 PM
Not sure why this one got so few votes. Is it really that bad? Go to Comment
Hachnars Demon Blood
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-21 01:29 PM
Not my finest, but I think it needs a little shameless BUMP! Go to Comment
Hachnars Demon Blood
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-21 02:45 PM
Thanks - that is some food for thought. You think it should be impossible to obtain demon blood?
A lot of spells, rituals and such seem to call for the stuff, so I figured it was a commonly(???) accessable material. Go to Comment
Celenia of the Everchanging Eyes
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-29 09:19 PM
A truly excellent NPC! Go to Comment
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