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The Crystal Retort
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-07 06:45 AM
Drat - the links worked before! :)

They are fixed now! Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-07 01:21 PM
I had touched a little bit on the outgassing in the Main Lab section - the ventalation is the most Magic heavy aspect of the location. Since having toxic gas clouds appear in the middle of a city can bring undue attention to one's facilitity, magic can be used to send the clouds elsewhere.

A secret dumbwaiter between the two buildings is a good idea - and another above-ground front to sell the illegal wares is also good. I was focusing on secrecy above all, but I'll adjust the sub with your ideas in mind. The underground lab will stay, but a secondary location (containing the Parlor) will be added.

Thanks Wulf! Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-11 02:44 PM
Yes! Alchemical Substance! Thats the ticket :)Pure Elemental Carbon would do nicely.... Maybe hanging down in every doorway like 1960's bead curtains! Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 08:02 AM
Thanks for the HOH Ted! Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-11-02 10:24 AM
Update: Changed up the formatting.. Go to Comment
Wand of Illusory Sound
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-05 11:24 AM
A useful little item.

On sentance needs to be chopped up a little or restructured:

The sound cannot be located simply because it is an illusion and is entirely in the person's head, part of the mild insanity caused by such an unnerving sound can cause the target to think he has an idea as to the direction of the sound only to prove him incorrect (which can be unnerving).

Otherwise, useful and logical. Go to Comment
Institute for Studies of Environmental Trends
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 12:22 PM
This is a pretty nifty group - I like the idea of these doom-mongers.

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Garith's Vineyard
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-10 08:01 PM
This would be perfect for a priest of Dionysus! Go to Comment
Magic Cigar Challenge
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-04 07:26 PM
Magic Cigar Challenge
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-04 07:46 PM
Sentries Stogies

Recognizing the threat that cigars present to sentries everywhere - giving away their position when lit, ruining nightvision by their flare, and signaling others by their smell.

These special stogies are enchanted to provide to the user the illusion of smell, and light, but in reality the effects are not perceived by those not smoking them. They are ignited simply by puffing on them but again no flare is visible to anyone except the user.

They are still burning, but very dimly. They do radiate heat which may still give the user away. Go to Comment
Pillar of Presceni
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:53 PM
Nice - Not overpowering and has a definite cool factor!

Well done! Go to Comment
Steriks Island
Locations  (Other)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 06:26 PM
Good semi-solid Island.

Since they tolerate salt water they would be extremely useful to some people. Someone might even use them for desalination purposes :) Go to Comment
Butter of Disbelief
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 11:41 AM
An interesting submission - much better then a simple potion of the same powers.
Good job! Go to Comment
Butter of Disbelief
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 08:08 PM
You should create that Codex Chaosmark - I've got a couple to add to it! Go to Comment
Piash Nildar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 11:52 AM
My first comment is that it needs spellchecked. There are enough problems to prevent me from objectively assessing the content itself.

Second would be with some of the sentence structures - you may wish, as MoonHunter often recommends, reading it aloud to yourself to see how the sentences flow. Go to Comment
Piash Nildar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-04 07:50 PM
I can't help but be reminded of Vulcans - not that there is anything wrong with that. In this case we have a half-elf very much like Spock during Pon Faarsp.

Post is much better then it started, but it still needs a bit of work. Go to Comment
The Heirs of Polimanus
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-31 09:16 AM
Excellent!

One of these folks would make a great addition to the Menagerie of Madness! Go to Comment
Miscasting Black Essence
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-19 03:49 PM
Tis a big one - need to revisit! Go to Comment
Miscasting Black Essence
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-03 11:56 AM
Ring of Disappearance
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 03:52 PM
As to seperate dimensions or a single one, I didn't think about that, but one seems logical to me.

The 'body' would be in an odd state - being fire,earth and water - basically a 'Caloric' elemental, but it would lack any 'spirit' to animate it. I suppose an evil spirit could poach the Caloric body, again trapping the ring user in it's semi air form.


From Theory of Elements
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Thirdly come the four tertiary elements, the great fluids that permeate all things. These are each formed by the fusion, in equal parts, of the quintessence of three primary elements. They are Caloric (Earth, Water, Fire), Ether (Air, Water, Fire), Phlogiston (Fire, Earth, Air) and Vital Essence or Vitality (Water, Earth, Air).
..


It is built with the concepts discussed in Ians' Theory of Elements in mind or more specifically, the rebuttal I added to his sub insisting that Spirit is indeed a pure element, and not a combination of the four (which, by the way, this ring would prove by it's existance :) ) Go to Comment
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