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There, upon the mountainside...
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-12 11:20 AM
A call

"What was that?" Your ears picked up just the hint of an echo. Was it the sound of someone in distress? Someone calling a warning to others, ready to ambush? Or was it some trick of the terrain making wind sound like a voice.

Who knows. Does one wish to dash off on these rocky crags to go check it out? Go to Comment
There, upon the mountainside...
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-12 11:21 AM
Another good idea for an encounter list! Go to Comment
The Zwitter Islands
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-10 06:12 PM
Yes, a very good location to get PC's used to, perhaps even as a home base.

And then, of course, something bad will happen to it. :) Go to Comment
The Cannibals
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 09:16 PM
Ah, these folks could easily play the part of the villain, or the deadly rival.


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Whistle of Big Game Summoning
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-08 04:46 PM
Actually, he's a looter, not a hunter :) Go to Comment
The Dawn Of Avarice
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 07:47 PM
I would agree on the name (unless the intention was to be silly - which this piece patently is not..) but it is a solid canvas to build upon.

Good job! Go to Comment
ISL 9000
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-07 09:34 PM
Er, not so unique - Abadra Siege Barrel... Go to Comment
The Tower of Ash
Dungeons  (Other)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-06 06:35 PM
Impressive! Most impressive :) Go to Comment
The Lady Leshach
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-04 06:46 PM
I think this is really good.

And where can we see the map? :) Go to Comment
Rustcaller Toxin
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-04 06:38 PM
Nasty, I like it! Using it on arrowheads would be so nasty. I think I'd have to add some more restrictions to keep it from being too common.

Heh, I know a really good use for this, but I'm not going to directly plug my own sub. It does rhyme with Siren Bike Slalom! Go to Comment
Alowin Brackwater
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 06:39 PM
This is quite interesting - his origin being the best part. Go to Comment
Star of Rage
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-01 07:43 PM
You forgot to check the War checkbox Cheka!

You might want to delete and resubmit before you get votes. Go to Comment
Star of Rage
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 06:28 PM
I think is a really good post Cheka! Go to Comment
The Cursing Jar
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 02:57 PM
Absolutely Fiendish! I love it!

Though I think it is actually pretty cheap to use as is - a pinky is not worth a death in my opinion. Nonetheless, I think it is truely excellent. Go to Comment
Goblin Snuff
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 03:00 PM
Well done and amusing! Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 04:14 PM
I agree with wulf's comments, but I have to point out a few issues with the text:

The opening sentence is an example of a run-on sentence:

"The local forest has been plagued with animal attacks and few venture far off the path, but the magistrate of the town is willing to pay adventurers who wander into town a small reward if they will venture into the forest, find the state of three merchants, the strawmiller, the woodsman, and a brickmaker, and kill whatever is causing the attacks, he will inform them that the town gates will close behind them when they leave but will give them some provisions and a bit of equipment, including a net."

This needs to be a couple of sentences, not one. I've often repeated Moonhunter's advice, and the best point here is to read your sub out loud back to yourself. Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 04:15 PM
Forgot to vote.. Go to Comment
The Fairy Castle
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-27 08:23 PM
Holy smokes Wulfhere. You've got to write a book! (Well, you've a good start on one already....) Go to Comment
MUL-FS550 Fire Support Robot
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2010-11-11 07:38 PM
MUL-FS550 Fire Support Robot
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-23 03:40 PM
Suggestions for terms used above I should add to a glossary? Go to Comment
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