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The Sending of Axtrami
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-13 10:51 AM
Spectacular visuals on this one. A miracle to add to one's worlds.

It would seem Gods with foresight are a rare things, and hardly conducive to a good story.

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Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-29 11:45 AM
This is truly an impressive sub! Great work! Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 08:40 PM
A lovely treasure of a sword, with lots of possibilities!

Miss your stuff Wulf! Come baaaaack!


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A Gasp of Glass
Dungeons  (Other)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 10:02 AM
Have nothing to add that has not already been said.

You should write a novel with this... :) Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 10:05 AM
This is an OK item. I guess I have been spoiled by your other submissions... :) Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 02:01 PM
Wow, I lost 3 XP for deleting my old vote...

Anyway, I like the change :) Go to Comment
Venom of Endless Life
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 02:58 PM
I guess I would want some idea of where this snake came from? It's power indicates definite divine intent but why? Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 10:45 AM
Excellent sub - a ready to use mini-module in my opinion.

Two points:

1. Too much of the sub is stuck in bold.
2. King Gygax - this a deliberate reference to poor old Gary? :) Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 06:58 PM
Ah, battered dice.

I had some D20s that were so battered, they were more marbles then anything else. The poor quality may have had something to do with that too. Go to Comment
Goddess of the Desert Cats
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 10:52 AM
Wow Wulfhere!

Do you do something related to this for a living? I have yet to see a sub from you which fails to deliver. Go to Comment
Goddess of the Desert Cats
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 03:02 PM
I would grant that - I've only been DMing since 1986 or so :), and much less frequently these years. Go to Comment
Hak-Hakunin
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 03:04 PM
Excellent!

Man, there is a LOT of evil going around these days :) Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-25 02:47 PM
Good luck getting close enough to do so :). The winds are hurricane force and debris could smack you necromancer before getting close enough. The souls are also damaged and individually incoherent, the effects of the Soul Rending wands used against them. Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-25 02:50 PM
It could be limited by powerful, probably artifical, weather conditions. The strength of this composite being is such that conditions which normally control hurricane movement (water temprature for one) do not have a great effect. It will not stray too far inland, but since so much of humanity generally lives on the sea, this still provides ample opportunity for destruction. Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-03 07:52 PM
I did not mention sky ships - it was a pure blue-water battle.
and yes, the Aldruku ships are a minor variant on a longboat. They were a lower tech level then the Nyoran fleet - more tribal vs the greek/romanesque.

And to be honest, I had more fun writing the naval battle over the storm. Think I'll need to add toit sometime. Sigh. I keep saying that :)

Edit: Adjusted names of races. Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-29 01:43 PM
Updated: Supplemented with Stubs & supplementary subs! - Ku!,Nyoria and Wands of Soul Rending. Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2008-11-07 07:49 AM
What specifically with the Ku!? Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2008-11-07 11:22 AM
The ! is supposed to be a click sound. There is a lingistic term that escapes me at the moment for it. Go to Comment
Claymore of a mourning son
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 09:55 AM
This is interesting, though it falls into cliche with the powerful sword that feeds on souls, ground which has been gone over a few too many times.

The text is rich with unusual adjectives and adverbs - feckless, myopic, etc but needs work on general structure and spelling.

It shows potential. Since its been more then seven years since this was written, It would be awesome to see what you can do now.
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Ylithain, the Drowned Queen
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-25 10:18 AM
Wow, but I have to echo Maggots comments about this being more of an NPC. No matter though, I give a 5/5 for this excellent submission! Go to Comment
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