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X-Jacks
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-15 02:00 PM
So, Tohm Bones would be an example of a Bonejack... :) Go to Comment
X-Jacks
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-16 07:38 PM
My Iron Spike Golem could qualify as a -Jack as well - it is not one solid block of meterial.

Perhaps you can convert this sub to a Folio? Go to Comment
X-Jacks
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-16 07:58 PM
Scroll + Codex = Folio? (I think it's Moonhunters term, Scrodex seems rather.., well :)) Go to Comment
The War Walkers
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 06:47 PM
An interesting sub, though when compared with your excellent X-Jack sub, this one seems lightweight.

Still, I like the idea. Go to Comment
The Assault on Kerrengen Keep
Plots  (Hired)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 09:12 AM
Straightforward and adaptable - nicely done! Go to Comment
The Mace of Sisral
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-13 01:03 PM
Heh, when I voted on the main sub, this mace was still in it. As it stands it's quite good but really needs to be used with the main submission. Go to Comment
The Mace of Sisral
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-13 02:01 PM
I agree with moving it apart - just that the mace is greatly enhanced by the details in the other sub. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 06:54 PM
Quite interesting - as Wulf says, the use of the potions to take full advantage is a good limiting factor. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-15 03:37 PM
Have linked it to Items of War.... Go to Comment
The Centaurim
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-13 11:27 AM
Well, thats one way to go about saving money on saddles :)

Great job! Go to Comment
The Chosen of Uep-Hawet
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-13 11:25 AM
Hmm. And Scrasamax considered his Centurim submission disturbing.

Ugh!

But this is an excellent villanous organization and the tone of the piece is great!

Do you see the condition being curable once it has progressed to its full potential? Go to Comment
Pocket Ironbones
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-12 11:13 AM
Hmm.

It does require some editing, but the idea of the swarm of little nuisences has great appeal.

The creation of skeletons from cloth and gemstones does seem rather convinient (perhaps they were able to find an ancient pixie burial ground and animated those instead of human-sized corpses. Or maybe assembled the dimunitive skeletons from cat/chicken bones) but I do like the concept of the small size being due to contractors cutting corners.

See, I'm rambling too. In short (pun intended) I think this is a good sub which needs editing. Go to Comment
Pocket Ironbones
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 06:28 PM
K. Not sure where that came from Cheka! Go to Comment
There, upon the mountainside...
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-12 11:20 AM
A call

"What was that?" Your ears picked up just the hint of an echo. Was it the sound of someone in distress? Someone calling a warning to others, ready to ambush? Or was it some trick of the terrain making wind sound like a voice.

Who knows. Does one wish to dash off on these rocky crags to go check it out? Go to Comment
There, upon the mountainside...
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-12 11:21 AM
Another good idea for an encounter list! Go to Comment
The Zwitter Islands
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-10 06:12 PM
Yes, a very good location to get PC's used to, perhaps even as a home base.

And then, of course, something bad will happen to it. :) Go to Comment
The Cannibals
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 09:16 PM
Ah, these folks could easily play the part of the villain, or the deadly rival.


Commented on for Comment Challenge!

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Whistle of Big Game Summoning
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-08 04:46 PM
Actually, he's a looter, not a hunter :) Go to Comment
The Dawn Of Avarice
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 07:47 PM
I would agree on the name (unless the intention was to be silly - which this piece patently is not..) but it is a solid canvas to build upon.

Good job! Go to Comment
ISL 9000
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-07 09:34 PM
Er, not so unique - Abadra Siege Barrel... Go to Comment
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