Then that requirement needs placed in the main submission preamble. I did not make this uber short because I was lazy. The ad was meant to provoke the question of Why was the tomb never used? Perhaps the would-be occupant disappeared, became immortal, etc.
Several other of the submissions are easily as abstract as this one, perhaps more evokative, but have no obvious begin/middle/end. Go to Comment
Atrimis the sage is conducting geneology research and recently discovered an old, abandoned graveyard on the grounds of a large manor. He suspects that many of the gravestones will help him complete his research. However, it is occupied by various undead. It is located outside of the jurisdiction of any town, and the local nobility could not be bothered to help. Can you? Go to Comment
I agree with Cheka on this, and there is room for improvement on some of the sentence structures. I'd suggest you read the sub out loud back to yourself.
All in all, this is a good first sub and the toxin quite useful. Arrow delivery of poison is not the best unless you are assuming people normally survive being hit by arrows. I'd see it more useful as a contact or ingested poison myself. Much more subtle. Go to Comment
A culture believes that souls are recycled. One child gets half of a soul, another child gets the other half. However, this means that with each passing generation, the amount of soul in the child will become less and less (Through division)until their culture will die in the future because of their soulless offspring.