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Traveler Spirits
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-04 10:44 AM
A good way to add additional restrictions to a world where resurrection is perhaps too easily accessable. Go to Comment
Oraki - A New Look at Robots
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-03 01:08 PM
A good solid take on a new race. Strikes me more as a replicant then a robot. Go to Comment
Ashala Neritha
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-04 09:15 PM
Thanks folks!:)

When she entered my head, I had to put it here. Not entirely sure where she came from.

I like your addition, even though in my mind she would not resort to direct violence. But then again, people change! Go to Comment
Saint Smaragdine
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-04 04:11 PM
Nicely done Scras! I see a shot fired at a few real-world relgions here :) Go to Comment
Chimcherae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-31 06:29 PM
Very much a unique creature, and it will be interesting to see what comes of your answers to wulf. Go to Comment
Chimcherae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-07 07:55 PM
Any changes planned? Go to Comment
Bellissa's plea
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-19 03:18 PM
A VERY good first post indeed!

My only concern is the with absolutes - the curse is 100% unremovable, etc. Don't agree with those, but I can easily change that :) However, if the curse was removed, the benefits would go too, possibly causing the adventurers to revert to their true age.

Nicely done and well written! Go to Comment
Dwarven War Chariot
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-31 07:42 PM
This and a few other posts have me wondering what the speed and endurance of armoured horses are. I like the image this post presents, and the effect of having chariot-loads of dwarves dropped en mass though I can't help but think of this for short-range, shock engagements. Go to Comment
The Nervampires
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-31 07:37 PM
An interesting idea, though some sentances are a little run-on.

There have been demons which feed off of emotions as well, though undead which does so seems unique. Go to Comment
The Bloodflower Shroud
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-03 01:56 PM
A grusome tale indeed. Well done! Go to Comment
Hounds Of War
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-01 08:03 AM
I think the problem is that it takes significant effort to read, and there does not seem to be a big stomach for that.

The combination of oversize sentences, and paragraphs make it a difficult read. Now, my own posts are often not paragons of brevity, and I try to break them up a lot to improve the readability.

That said, the imagery conjured is excellent, and if it were an easier read,I don't doubt the voting would increase greatly! Go to Comment
The Order of Dalraaen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2015-07-22 12:02 PM
Another great collaboration here - this religion makes sense and has obvious value.

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The Sisterhood of the Pelagic Queen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-30 02:33 PM
A well detailed religous order - I like it! Go to Comment
The Cultus of Vautu
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-30 01:28 PM
Awesome, but I have one question:

What happens to the soul of the person who kills the Paragon? If their soul ends up being pushed out by the current Paragon's soul, there really is no motivation to killing the Paragon. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-30 10:45 AM
Ah, a Magnus Opus indeed. As with Scras I'll need a bit of time to dig into this one.

Well done! Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-29 06:02 PM
Wow! Will say more soon. Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-05-07 06:03 PM
Only one HOH? For shame!
:) Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-05-08 08:16 AM
Well, regardless, it deserves more then one! :) Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-17 08:12 PM
Winning 150 will do that :) Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-12 03:43 PM
Did I ever mention how awesome this one is??? Go to Comment
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A circus is in town and while parading down the main street the animals suddenly break free from the cages. After surviving and assisting during the breakout the PCs are hired to help with the investigation. Who did this and why?

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