An excellent, nasty plant. There are a few typos which could be straightened out -
"They usually avoid the deep groves where it grows, but if someone is taken by it. It is thought of "
This sounds like it should be one sentence with a comma in place of the period.
Grusomely, this is not too far from reality. We have a court case in canada where a serial killer allegedly fed the remains of about 40(!) prostitutes to the hogs on his pig farm.
Presumably, the hogs were used to produce, among other things, sausages.
No hoax, this is a real case in our headlines... Go to Comment
After reviewing the Code of Conduct, I've removed a post which was more emotional then this one
Given the amount of work that goes into a lot of individual submissions, this one seems short.
Things to add? Plot ideas for example, an NPC noteworthy for using the weapon, whatever.
What constitutes a 2.5 vote or 3.0 vote, or whatever is subjective to the voter. Based on feedback I've seen on other posts, and my own, I have an idea as to what I consider to be in the different ranges. I have seen posts with multiple scroll entries which were as complete and longer that have not recieved high marks. I think that this weapon description is more appropriate as a scroll entry for Ankorillian weaponry then as a complete sub. Go to Comment
Articles (Humor/ Editorial) (Game Mastering)