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Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 10:02 AM
Excellent writing. Such good storytelling.

You are not just sharing an idea, but really telling a story. Awesome.
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30 Fairies
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:35 AM
Wow, this is another excellent 30, each one deserving of greater detail - perhaps their own subs.

The positioning of the Fairies as short-lived, relatively stupid creatures is interesting and creates a dynamic between these and other Fae.

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Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:25 AM
A great sub that belongs in a worldbuilding folder for sure! Go to Comment
Patrol Pod
Items  (Transports)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-21 02:24 PM
Cool Squared :) I think Derek would like one of these...

This also seem perfect for adding an AI to.
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Quortek Baat'leb
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-29 03:08 PM
These are really good - though I can't imagine something powerful enough to snuff souls not being detectable as magic.

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18 Gifts from Elder Gods, Outer Gods, and Cosmic Horrors
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 03:35 PM
Very good! Love it!

No need to reward me though! Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 12:31 PM
A great grab and go character. Good job.


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Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-01 12:59 PM
Hmm, should put a Yarnuk expansion into the in-work.. Go to Comment
The Gorgon Rune and the Flirting Dress
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-26 11:20 AM
This is neat. I had to read it all the way to grasp everything though. The exact mechanic she used to kill should have been presented when Kaiser bought it, rather then it being a 'reveal' further below.

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Elizabeth Sheybad and the Flirting Dress
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-01 03:43 PM
I think fiction is fine here - we have a section for it, so don't let that hold you back.

A novel use of the dress, and a good one.
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Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-22 03:37 PM
For the Genre, this is a great in-depth exploration of the character - really a work of fiction that frames her. I like the tone of your world and your writing - it is very coherent and very consistent. Top quality work here.

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Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-30 01:42 PM
A revealing little sub. Lots of uses for the idea. Go to Comment
Rulund Drussel (1st Vassal)
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-07 03:46 PM
A good, very detailed NPC, with lots of traits and bits and pieces.

Not in love with sentences continuing into blockquotes - I find the transition a little jarring.

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The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 01:39 PM
Great stuff - made me smile!

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Sarah Voltaire
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 01:26 PM
Very good - rides the line between NPC and fiction though. Quite well written.

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Rage!
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-10 12:16 PM
I'm interesting in seeing what you all think of this idea, including pointing out systems where such a thing exists - I have a fairly small breadth of systems I am familiar with.

I'd like to see:

Additional Rage Effects
Magic items detailed with what Rage Effects they may unlock. Go to Comment
Rage!
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-10 03:51 PM
Certainly - this has only a little besides crunch, though I hope it is generic enough to be usable. Go to Comment
Ysra Fulsven Vineblud (Noblewoman of Parna)
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-31 09:21 AM
A very well detailed and presented NPC. Go to Comment
Royal War Train
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-02 12:45 PM
These are neat, apart from the lethality of the rails. I would have the rails only energize when a train was a mile or less down the tracks. Otherwise this will cause massive economic damage - you would need tunnels or overpasses everywhere.

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Augscannen
Items  (Computers)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-09-16 10:08 AM
I agree with Axle.

The scanner could even use short pulses of UV to see how the tissues of the eyes react. Frankly this technology seems almost a certainty as we slip closer to the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
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