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Deadleech
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 09:01 PM
Great payment for your crime. A great submission. I have an appreciation for enchanted invertebrates :)
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The Dragon And Its Nine Offsprings
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-05 12:25 PM
I like the feel of this piece - the sparse descriptions in places give a springboard for other developments.

With these myths as a basis, you can use them in lots of places - place names, nick-names, insults, weapons, etc.

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Crawling Giants
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 10:17 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Crawling Giants
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 10:16 PM
This is an interesting piece - the giants are unique and i like the tone. It gets me thinking. Perhaps if you gave one a voice?

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Specialized Fungus Cultures
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 09:15 PM
This is really good! There neverr can be too many odd fungii :)
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Dreams-of-beauty Minotaur Bard
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 07:43 PM
Well woven, I do like how you've tied these together and she could easily play a part in many adventures.
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Flickerwik
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-04 07:40 PM
An excellent remake of the Willo'the'wisp. I could see rather than a servant, a witch or warlock the FlickerWikk had come to an 'understanding' with bearing the lantern.

Under control most of the time, it would a nasty surprise to those who offend. Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 12:09 PM
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-25 03:20 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-25 02:59 PM
All wishes are game destroyers if the GM lets it. So don't let it.

A decent sub, though there are a couple of words missing. Go to Comment
Helstone Treasures
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-17 08:08 PM
Update: Okay, back out there with a couple new additions to fill it out to cover all of the gemstones. Go to Comment
Dwarven Sapper
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-24 10:22 AM
I like this submission - it adds a necessary dimension to the dwarves. When survival is on the line, many taboos drop away. Go to Comment
Kittens_Sir_dup
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 07:06 AM
Not sure what happened on _this_ one. Wierd.
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30 Symbols for Various Societies or Shop Signs
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 07:26 AM
A couple of suggestions.

1. The orphaned freetexts should blend naturally into the sentance, rather then hang loose at the head or tail. 

 eg: 

 1. An upside down tea cup- printed on signs hung outside funeral services all around the Kingdom, meaning “visitors not welcome”. Such a custom arises from the belief that it will decrease mortality rates.


2. Test your links, several lead to grues.   Freetexts are linked using {freetext|actualword} where { = [, freetext is extactly that text, and actualword is the word in question.



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30 Symbols for Various Societies or Shop Signs
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 07:30 AM
Aaand, I see this is a wiki.... So I probably should take that into account :) Go to Comment
30 Symbols for Various Societies or Shop Signs
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 07:32 AM
Links embedded in paragraphs and the like are a bit of a tradition here in Strolens, and in my opinion the links at the end are distracting. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-26 12:45 PM
Missed this one first time through. Great job and love the use of the artwork!
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Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-11 09:09 AM
Look on the right of the screen. There is an icon. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-11 09:10 AM
If you are interested, check some of my older subs. Brevity is a new development :) Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-11 04:44 PM
If you don't mind her snacking on the silverware... :)
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