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valadaar's comment on 2015-01-27 01:00 PM
The sentiment is good, but as muro said, these types of discussions really should stay in the forum. Go to Comment
Armor Restrictions Apply....Of Course
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2015-12-07 01:18 PM
I find it funny the discourse on this nearly matched that of the submission, which I think did a great job of using the supplied artwork.

A little late, but am voting now.
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Art Quest Demon by Jack Holliday
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-23 11:37 AM

I think we should accept Artwork submissions as valid submission types, so long as the work is properly credited.

I'll put a vote on this one, even though Jack is a bit of an insider, because it deserves attention.


And as a comment on the work - it has a huge feeling of scale, but to me suffers a little due to too much dark making it hard to see all the details.


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The Last Mind Flayer
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2017-03-22 09:20 AM
This is really good, though the voice is a little unusual.


As for pop culture, keep in mind that Cthulhu is fairly prevalent now ("Why vote for the lesser evil..") and that was the inspiration for the mind flayer.
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Hobbit Chair and Eat Racing
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-13 03:09 PM
Great, now I'm hungry.
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Drofor's Grotesquery
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-08-09 08:15 AM
One of those subs that gives great insight into a new world. This is quite awesome! Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-05 03:50 PM
So, the neutrons are essentially charged with excess 'strong' force and essentially fuse to target atoms?

Given some Hydrogen plasma to provide protons and electrons and you could use this to transform metals.

I'm not sure this is really an explanation of particle accelerators as it is a novel version of one. It is certainly different than the examples of particle accelerators I'm familiar with.
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valadaar's comment on 2017-02-09 11:25 AM

Wow, this is quite the exhaustive work.

Excellent use of artwork, though you could go a lot lighter on the formats in the scrolls. I typically use header 3 and 4 since the larger ones are just too large. Solid bold text -apart from headers and keywords - should be avoided

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valadaar's comment on 2017-01-23 10:16 AM
Um, I think you just described a metal detector :P

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valadaar's comment on 2015-01-07 09:50 AM
If you could create a substance/device that would actually gain net-energy(heat) from neutrino collision, then you have something far more useful than a navigation tool!




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valadaar's comment on 2015-06-23 08:57 AM
I'm not sure why you would limit it to video feeds? A smartphone has more. Given the tech level implied, EM, gravity, and radiation meters would be small and cheap enough to be standard. And of course the video would extend into both the infrared and ultraviolet spectrum. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 12:07 PM
Not bad, the idea of subatomic decay is interesting.

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valadaar's comment on 2016-04-14 11:10 AM
A nice snippet of technobabble :)
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The Anunnaki
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2015-05-06 03:49 PM
Great details - I like that the core are actually powerful genmods. Lots of potential here.
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Cosmic Era Shopping Catalog
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-14 01:15 PM

I have a catelog in work with items such as:

Emergency Decompression Hood.

This system is worn as a thin, sweat-resistant necklace, available in many colors. Upon detection of a catastrophic pressure drop, tiny adhesive ampules rupture and a seal is produced between the necklace and the wearer's neck. Two small handles extrude nearly instantly and the wearer then quickly pulls both above his head and brings them together. This action brings up a molecularly thin transparent hood that will self-adhere and form an airtight seal. Milliseconds after the seal is established, a small quantity of an O2-helium mix will be expelled into the hood restoring atmospheric pressure and providing 30 additional seconds of breathing capability.


I think a more general catelog might draw other contributors then the specific Cosmic Era one.


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Cosmic Era Shopping Catalog
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-24 11:31 AM
Okay, what is here is already impressive, and what it could be, well.

I still vote for a more generic Near-future equipment list however :)
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30 Military Vehicle Flaws
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-25 12:14 PM
Straightforward and well described. It is a little esoteric, but good for use with sci-fie world-building and setting up scenarios for Battletech.

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31 years IRL(33 ish!) of my Mysantia Campaign
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2017-02-01 12:58 PM
Personally, I see no problem with this being where it is.

It is very interesting and brings back some of my first experience with roleplaying. Have not had a campaign run any where near as long this one. Also, I didn't start roleplaying until Grade 7-8, around 1988.




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The Dwarven Beard Explained
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-17 03:44 PM
Agree with Tusserk on this one. Completely. :)
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A simple start for a new dungeon
Articles  (Scenario)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 11:00 AM
A good Dungeon Hook. A nifty take on this. Good stuff!
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