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Royal War Train
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-02 12:45 PM
These are neat, apart from the lethality of the rails. I would have the rails only energize when a train was a mile or less down the tracks. Otherwise this will cause massive economic damage - you would need tunnels or overpasses everywhere.

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Snow Devil
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 01:44 PM
A good critter, though I would play up the strengths and weaknesses of each of the three forms.

Has a good Old-school feel as a monster-of-the-week
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3 coins
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 03:07 PM
A decent item with lots of potential.


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30 Goblin Gifts
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-03 11:13 AM
A good list! Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 01:25 PM


It must be said that this has been in my work folder for a very, very long time and is not in response to any recent submissions.



Also, Moonhunter has a wide range of excellent advice columns you can peruse, especially if you are seeking the Golden Standard.



These are also my own Opinions, not hard and fast rules, and come from my observations looking at thousands of submissions.

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Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-13 12:03 PM
Update: Fixed some formatting in the section on ....formatting. Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 09:06 AM
Incorporated Longspeak's addition into the main text - thanks Longspeak!

If anyone else wants to sound off on things to avoid on your first sub, feel free to add em! Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-28 03:26 PM
As mentioned at the start of the submission, these are quips and comments. If you consider those to be Conclusions, you are going to be disappointed.

If my summary was "Rules for 1st time posters" or something like that, you would be correct in your assessment.

And, I'm happy to debate any of these points :)



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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 11:55 AM
Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 02:47 PM
I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 03:12 PM
No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 08:40 AM
Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 07:56 PM
Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 11:44 AM


Update: Cleaned it up a little, casting it back out into the world.



Not quite sure _why_ it is showing up on the main page.

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Gravediggers' Legacy
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 12:14 PM
Nifty - this could be a very interesting encounter to add when pcs are hunting undead. Little would they suspect this added complication.

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Chrysander
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 03:16 PM
A perfectly reasonable 'cavete' for an intelligent magical sword to have, with significant cultural and political implications.

A daughter of Royalty might seek this item out in order to break out of her prescribed place in their society.
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A Dozen Unusual Flowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 08:32 AM
I love these! I Certainly will be incorporating them into my Unseen Fortress revamp..

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Parna's Cradle and the Golden Stamp
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 09:16 AM
A cool location though I think it could benefit from a little more going over.

Some of the paragraphs suffer from being a bit too large, and the same could be said for a few sentences.

Others are a bit odd - I can't quite follow this one:

"Pasha is atypical physical specimen an Ator."




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30 Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 08:06 AM
An arrow with a shape like frog's crotch. eg: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Fleches-japonaises-p1000615.jpg

Basically U-shaped. Used for cutting ropes and rigging. Not sure of other purposes.
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7 Horrifying Curses
Articles  (Scenario)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 12:31 PM
I agree with Scras and Axle on these. Go to Comment
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