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Valadaars First Submission Advice
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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-13 12:03 PM
Update: Fixed some formatting in the section on ....formatting. Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 09:06 AM
Incorporated Longspeak's addition into the main text - thanks Longspeak!

If anyone else wants to sound off on things to avoid on your first sub, feel free to add em! Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-28 03:26 PM
As mentioned at the start of the submission, these are quips and comments. If you consider those to be Conclusions, you are going to be disappointed.

If my summary was "Rules for 1st time posters" or something like that, you would be correct in your assessment.

And, I'm happy to debate any of these points :)



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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 11:55 AM
Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 02:47 PM
I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 03:12 PM
No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 08:40 AM
Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 07:56 PM
Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 11:44 AM


Update: Cleaned it up a little, casting it back out into the world.



Not quite sure _why_ it is showing up on the main page.

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Gravediggers' Legacy
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 12:14 PM
Nifty - this could be a very interesting encounter to add when pcs are hunting undead. Little would they suspect this added complication.

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Chrysander
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 03:16 PM
A perfectly reasonable 'cavete' for an intelligent magical sword to have, with significant cultural and political implications.

A daughter of Royalty might seek this item out in order to break out of her prescribed place in their society.
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A Dozen Unusual Flowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 08:32 AM
I love these! I Certainly will be incorporating them into my Unseen Fortress revamp..

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Parna's Cradle and the Golden Stamp
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 09:16 AM
A cool location though I think it could benefit from a little more going over.

Some of the paragraphs suffer from being a bit too large, and the same could be said for a few sentences.

Others are a bit odd - I can't quite follow this one:

"Pasha is atypical physical specimen an Ator."




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30 Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 08:06 AM
An arrow with a shape like frog's crotch. eg: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Fleches-japonaises-p1000615.jpg

Basically U-shaped. Used for cutting ropes and rigging. Not sure of other purposes.
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The Nind Tah'Siltrin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-23 03:34 PM
A nice reskin (snort, snort :)) of your common skeleton. Some nifty details. I like it.
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Self Propelled Turret
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-21 10:00 AM
It is not a tank, it is simply a variant of self-propelled artillery.

Nice technical description. Superheavies always win the on cool aspect, less so when they need to move using civilian infrastructure. Bridges, roads and the like don't particularly like those things :)

Something like this - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/T28_Super_Heavy_Tank

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The Cosmetologist
NPCs  (Minor)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-08 02:06 PM
Some thought provoking stuff here - really points to the subjective reality that is the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
Encounter 45
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 09:53 AM
Brutal. Awful. Sadly believable when you think of such things as radiation testing in the 50's and other immoral scientific studies carried out even in 'enlightened' times.
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Destroyer Type Tank
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 09:34 PM
Straight forward enough, though there are very few advantages to a twin barrel tank.

In the Battletech universe, where 1-hit kills are not the standard, it makes sense, but in the modern(ish) world where a single MBT hit is generally a kill, a second barrel is unnecessary and a waste of space to use for ammo.

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Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 08:29 AM
Great tribute, and nicely integrated!

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