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Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 10:02 AM
Excellent writing. Such good storytelling.

You are not just sharing an idea, but really telling a story. Awesome.
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30 Fairies
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:35 AM
Wow, this is another excellent 30, each one deserving of greater detail - perhaps their own subs.

The positioning of the Fairies as short-lived, relatively stupid creatures is interesting and creates a dynamic between these and other Fae.

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Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:25 AM
A great sub that belongs in a worldbuilding folder for sure! Go to Comment
Patrol Pod
Items  (Transports)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-21 02:24 PM
Cool Squared :) I think Derek would like one of these...

This also seem perfect for adding an AI to.
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Quortek Baat'leb
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-29 03:08 PM
These are really good - though I can't imagine something powerful enough to snuff souls not being detectable as magic.

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18 Gifts from Elder Gods, Outer Gods, and Cosmic Horrors
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 03:35 PM
Very good! Love it!

No need to reward me though! Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 12:31 PM
A great grab and go character. Good job.

This comment brought to you by the letter G

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Elizabeth Sheybad and the Flirting Dress
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-01 03:43 PM
I think fiction is fine here - we have a section for it, so don't let that hold you back.

A novel use of the dress, and a good one.
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Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-22 03:37 PM
For the Genre, this is a great in-depth exploration of the character - really a work of fiction that frames her. I like the tone of your world and your writing - it is very coherent and very consistent. Top quality work here.

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Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-30 01:42 PM
A revealing little sub. Lots of uses for the idea. Go to Comment
Rulund Drussel (1st Vassal)
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-07 03:46 PM
A good, very detailed NPC, with lots of traits and bits and pieces.

Not in love with sentences continuing into blockquotes - I find the transition a little jarring.

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The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 01:39 PM
Great stuff - made me smile!

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Sarah Voltaire
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 01:26 PM
Very good - rides the line between NPC and fiction though. Quite well written.

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Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-10 12:16 PM
I'm interesting in seeing what you all think of this idea, including pointing out systems where such a thing exists - I have a fairly small breadth of systems I am familiar with.

I'd like to see:

Additional Rage Effects
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Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-10 03:51 PM
Certainly - this has only a little besides crunch, though I hope it is generic enough to be usable. Go to Comment
Royal War Train
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-02 12:45 PM
These are neat, apart from the lethality of the rails. I would have the rails only energize when a train was a mile or less down the tracks. Otherwise this will cause massive economic damage - you would need tunnels or overpasses everywhere.

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Snow Devil
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 01:44 PM
A good critter, though I would play up the strengths and weaknesses of each of the three forms.

Has a good Old-school feel as a monster-of-the-week
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3 coins
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 03:07 PM
A decent item with lots of potential.

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Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 01:25 PM

It must be said that this has been in my work folder for a very, very long time and is not in response to any recent submissions.

Also, Moonhunter has a wide range of excellent advice columns you can peruse, especially if you are seeking the Golden Standard.

These are also my own Opinions, not hard and fast rules, and come from my observations looking at thousands of submissions.

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Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-13 12:03 PM
Update: Fixed some formatting in the section on ....formatting. Go to Comment
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