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30 More Minor Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-09 11:58 AM
Did this escape your in work folder? 8 is somewhat less than 30 :)

Also, could you use full sentences as opposed to fragments?


This broad sword appears to be made from grey stone. It is magically protected from all harm.

The use of fragments makes it seem more like quick notes and brainstorming rather than a completed submission.

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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-08 01:20 PM
Great idea, but it needs cleaned up a little. For example, if you use chrome as browser you get instant and free spellcheck.
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30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-05 07:54 PM
I will need to come back at this a few times, but what I've gotten cements this score for me.

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30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-12 11:35 AM
27) The Lone Architect

So saaaad :( Go to Comment
The Heads of Zaid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-03 12:31 PM
I am a big fan of submissions that suggest things eons past. Well written and detailed.

Welcome to the Citadel! Thanks for posting!

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Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-23 01:34 PM
I like this character - can serve as an antagonistic patron or enemy easily enough.
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Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-15 12:36 PM
This is a great villain. He feels worse than both Dr. Doom and Dr. Octopus.

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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 11:23 AM
A very good writeup - lots of details and the tendency for these people to store stuff extradimensionally helps tie up the loose ends of where the heck are all the artifacts.

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Glassenheim Foundation
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 10:26 AM

Quite the society, seeming to be unassailable. A virtual Death Star for your hero's.


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NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-29 08:31 AM
A nice assortment of characters - I love the hints at your game world these folks bring. Seems they would also fit well in Scras's Cosmic Era - it has a similar vibe.

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30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-27 12:14 PM
Out wit ye! Go to Comment
30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-09 07:56 AM
That actually was a problem with the site's link posting code. Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 08:49 AM
This is a great sub, though the power of the ring is overshadowed by its origin and details.

Will this disparity be addressed in the upcoming submission you mention?

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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 08:23 AM
This is a good adventure/campaign setup. Not too detailed, but then its not too tied to a specific setting.

For princesses, there are several 30's that could be used:

30 Princesses

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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 10:59 AM
Bleh can't believe I minced Prince and Princesses :)
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7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-24 01:45 PM
This is one of the great ones! Good for well organized groups of players, writing, and even putting together a convention event.
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Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-19 10:22 AM
Wow, excellent use of graphics and interesting puzzles. It is very old school style - the dungeon existing mainly as a test, with insta-death being common. Since you cite Tomb of Horrors as an inspiration, that part is not too surprising, and I would hope PCs going in would know this.

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Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-14 02:48 PM
Getcher Magic beans here! Cheap! 7 beans for an old cow! Go to Comment
Federation Ship Types
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-09 03:14 PM
A nice set of ships. Very detailed. Love this kind of stuff. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-14 12:38 PM
I like these - brings back visions of Starcraft with infested units, but its still very cool.

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