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Mistflowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 10:03 AM
I cleaned out the junk, but you need to fix your browser -it is corrupted and potentially introducing malware to you - and through the added links - potentially others. Most of the links appeared to be trackers, but they could do worse.

Please fix your browser. You should also virus scan your PC.
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Queen Nekcrola the 47th (a Tale of Mysantia)
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 07:29 AM
A good Old School villain with lots of possibilities. She seems a little too powerful, but given its vintage (1981), it works. It certainly has far more depth than anything I would have put together at the same age. I had not started gaming yet in 1981, much less worldbuilding.

There is a lot of detail packed into this one - hints and hooks into your campaign.
I'd like to see more of this!


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The E-Stix
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-24 08:11 AM
Good - this feels like something that would fit in a Harry Potter type universe due to its modern feel but magical effects.

Since they go off on impact, they would have a lot of potential use in booby traps.

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Marked One
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 07:37 AM
This character is very well ... painted :). Many potential uses, not all adversarial.

And a fine entry into the Tattoo quest - it would certainly been in the running when that one was active.


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Spritestones
Items  (Materials)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-10 09:22 AM
This is neat, though the sprites appear to be vulnerable to abuse. Go to Comment
Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 08:06 AM
Update: Add blockquotes since the editor ate my tabs... Go to Comment
Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 06:31 PM
Many of these generators tie back to lists. If there are some generators you wish were lists, let me know :) Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part I
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-30 10:28 PM
These two subs are very high quality, through this one does not quite strike me as much as the other. In any case, it is excellent.

I would have built this out of smaller pieces myself, as massive works like this tend not to get voted on. Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part I
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 05:12 AM
Its about the sale, frankly. II caught my attention more as it was a plot, alive, and the maps were very well done. This sub is excellent background material but less alive.

As for how I would have rated Father basil seperately? Not too high - i would have put all the NPCs in a sub by themselves.

This is a deference to practicality on my part. Yes the sub flows better as one whole piece, but with the intent to elicit feedback, sometimes compromises need to be made. Overlarge submissions are something I tend to get caught up in myself.

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Silverfox Mill - Part II
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 06:42 PM
This is so well done, that even with some of my reservations, I must award top marks.
Reservations?

Linkage. If you use other submissions on this site, consider this a blanket request that you actively link them. Let me know if you need a hand with this, but linkage is how this site works.

Game specific stats

Thats about it, its a really awesome submission. Go to Comment
The Threat of Sugar
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 01:15 PM
Sweet use of the media. Modern. New. This is cool.

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Bishop Saul O'hara
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 09:33 AM
Excellent! I am very partial to the Bonesticher!
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30 Super-Villians
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-14 09:19 AM
I'd put this one into Advice Requested and see what can be added! Go to Comment
30 Super-Villians
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-23 02:15 PM
I agree- we certainly could do something with this one.
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valadaar's comment on 2014-10-14 06:50 PM
You really need to solicit some more entries to this before posting it as a votable sub. Post in the forum Fields of Challenge for help.

In the mean time, Public Draft would be the correct state for this sub - let me know if you want me to move it there.
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Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 11:58 AM
I like this fellow - lots of possibilities. Go to Comment
Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 11:12 AM
Right there. Did I say how many parts? NoooOOOoooo. :)

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Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 08:24 AM
Indeed, this is excellent. It came to an end too quickly for me :)
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30 More Minor Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-09 10:58 AM
Did this escape your in work folder? 8 is somewhat less than 30 :)

Also, could you use full sentences as opposed to fragments?

eg:

This broad sword appears to be made from grey stone. It is magically protected from all harm.

The use of fragments makes it seem more like quick notes and brainstorming rather than a completed submission.




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30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-05 06:54 PM
I will need to come back at this a few times, but what I've gotten cements this score for me.

Awesome EM. I am jealous! Go to Comment
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