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Silverfox Mill - Part II
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 06:42 PM
This is so well done, that even with some of my reservations, I must award top marks.
Reservations?

Linkage. If you use other submissions on this site, consider this a blanket request that you actively link them. Let me know if you need a hand with this, but linkage is how this site works.

Game specific stats

Thats about it, its a really awesome submission. Go to Comment
The Threat of Sugar
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 01:15 PM
Sweet use of the media. Modern. New. This is cool.

What exactly is EP? Go to Comment
Bishop Saul O'hara
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 09:33 AM
Excellent! I am very partial to the Bonesticher!
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30 Super-Villians
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-14 09:19 AM
I'd put this one into Advice Requested and see what can be added! Go to Comment
30 Super-Villians
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-23 02:15 PM
I agree- we certainly could do something with this one.
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valadaar's comment on 2014-10-14 06:50 PM
You really need to solicit some more entries to this before posting it as a votable sub. Post in the forum Fields of Challenge for help.

In the mean time, Public Draft would be the correct state for this sub - let me know if you want me to move it there.
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Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 11:58 AM
I like this fellow - lots of possibilities. Go to Comment
Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 11:12 AM
Right there. Did I say how many parts? NoooOOOoooo. :)

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Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 08:24 AM
Indeed, this is excellent. It came to an end too quickly for me :)
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30 More Minor Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-09 10:58 AM
Did this escape your in work folder? 8 is somewhat less than 30 :)

Also, could you use full sentences as opposed to fragments?

eg:

This broad sword appears to be made from grey stone. It is magically protected from all harm.

The use of fragments makes it seem more like quick notes and brainstorming rather than a completed submission.




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30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-05 06:54 PM
I will need to come back at this a few times, but what I've gotten cements this score for me.

Awesome EM. I am jealous! Go to Comment
The Heads of Zaid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-03 11:31 AM
I am a big fan of submissions that suggest things eons past. Well written and detailed.

Welcome to the Citadel! Thanks for posting!

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Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-23 12:34 PM
I like this character - can serve as an antagonistic patron or enemy easily enough.
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Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-15 11:36 AM
This is a great villain. He feels worse than both Dr. Doom and Dr. Octopus.

A welcome addition to the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 10:23 AM
A very good writeup - lots of details and the tendency for these people to store stuff extradimensionally helps tie up the loose ends of where the heck are all the artifacts.

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PrimaryAssociateProfiles.tex
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-29 07:31 AM
A nice assortment of characters - I love the hints at your game world these folks bring. Seems they would also fit well in Scras's Cosmic Era - it has a similar vibe.

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30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-27 11:14 AM
Out wit ye! Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 07:49 AM
This is a great sub, though the power of the ring is overshadowed by its origin and details.

Will this disparity be addressed in the upcoming submission you mention?

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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 09:59 AM
Bleh can't believe I minced Prince and Princesses :)
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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-25 07:23 AM
This is a good adventure/campaign setup. Not too detailed, but then its not too tied to a specific setting.

For princesses, there are several 30's that could be used:

30 Princesses

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