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Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 07:29 AM
Great tribute, and nicely integrated!

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Lescelina the Witch Queen
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-26 11:18 AM
An interesting character - though it seems her own decisions had very little impact upon her fate. Why did she so readily take up the queen-ship of the beings that slew her mother?

The setting is well developed and the writing good.

A great addition to Decathros!
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Xen'da'rik
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 08:22 AM
This is very good, though I think a clear explanation of what happened to cause the desert to grow so precipitously would help - that part seemed to beg for more details.

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Armored Units of the Cosmic Era
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-25 07:30 AM
A large submission, with lots of great little details. I would add linkages to various other entities when mentioned for the first time, especially if Acronyms are used (OCP, etc).

I guess I wonder how some of these 'tanks' aren't. :)



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The Brotherhood of the Land of Nod
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 11:02 AM
These are a good villain for the Cosmic Era. Lots of potential.

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The Wishing Well
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 10:50 AM
This could be a common 'con' in a world where magic is demonstrably real. Go to Comment
30 Mecha Design Flaws
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-17 01:33 PM
This listing made me want to see what a homebrew battletech game with all of these modifiers available. Go to Comment
Military Clones
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 10:46 AM
A great assortment of clones, and I like the use of euphemisms. Go to Comment
30 Cosmic Era PC Occupations
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-18 10:10 PM
Wow, a great assortment of professions, though some feel like Prestige classes or races (mutants).

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30 Cosmic Era PC Occupations
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-18 10:10 PM
Wow, a great assortment of professions, though some feel like Prestige classes or races (mutants).

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Fexxco & Tristrin
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 08:38 AM
Fexxco is better detailed than Tristan, as Tristan does not have any real personality traits listed.

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The Town of Inexplicable Babies
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-11 01:25 PM
Wonderfully weird!



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The Blackwings
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-07 10:32 AM
Hmm, I had text around that at one point.

They make _terrible_ slaves, requiring nearly constant supervision - it is why undesirables are either banished or slain. Some fall into deadly depression if somehow knocked below their station.

You know, I think substance abuse might be a problem with these fellows as well.


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The Blackwings
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-10 12:24 PM
They are flightless (tweaked the description to make this more clear), so they use walls and guards to keep from being burgled.

As for Christmas, that is an excellent question. They are as a whole a very secular race.

I think they may celebrate the 'Coming of Order', when the Skycrowned, their God of Dominance, took control of the squawking multitudes and enforced the new, rigid society.

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Trash Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-06 07:29 AM
And now, ze voting...
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Trash Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 06:28 PM
Oh, this is more than acceptable Pete - perhaps just add the details in your response to Dozus and post-er-up!

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Trash Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 06:28 PM
Mechanical Life in the Cosmic Era
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 08:26 AM
Great background detail. The intermingling of Arcanatech helps make this more unique.

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Jampiri
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-06 07:28 AM
This is a great way to have a relationship between human and elf populations. The elves feel appropriately mysterious and alien - as it should be.

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NCO Zak 'Zed' Leterrier
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 07:51 AM
A nifty character for your epic Cosmic Era.. Go to Comment
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