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Courtesan's secret weapon
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 08:41 AM

This is well described and detailed.

It does, however, very strongly echo the themes of a fairly recent submission.

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Courtesan's secret weapon
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 08:43 AM
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Courtesan's secret weapon
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 10:56 AM
You can change it back to private in work if you must, but adding an acknowledgement to the original source should be fine. Your take is a bit different so does not need to be cast away into the darkness :)
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The Face on Every Coin, Dini the Goddess of Currency
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-02 08:32 AM
A very impressive submission! I was going to say first but you've been a member for a while - nice to see you posting.

A great idea - goes coin in purse with Dozus's The Way of Divine Wealth, with that religion's focus on commerce. Plots, detail, interactions with the PC's - great job!

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The Demon's Grove
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-02 08:35 AM
Simple, well cited with lots of potential. This is good stuff Caesar.

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The Falling Castle
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-30 01:00 PM
cult of done. Begone.

Will fix the ? in the title tonight. Why did it do that?
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Thrice Damned
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-11 10:01 PM
Nice Hook! Great use of exactly 100 word, sans summary.
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Inns to remember
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 08:32 AM
Good locations, some good color. There is something slightly off in the language, but all in all an excellent post!
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Beastmaster's door
Dungeons  (Any)   (Doors)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-20 01:25 PM
This is very neat! Welcome aboard.

I really like this idea, and it is quite charming.

I think you meant to say 'best' in this sentence : "beast of its abilities." :)

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Burly Bill's Beautiful Beverages
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 10:10 AM
I like two-faced organizations like this and agree with the bio-polar nature of some people. Some folks are very good at compartmentalization of behaviour. Go to Comment
New Personal Best
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 10:02 AM
Excellent writing. Such good storytelling.

You are not just sharing an idea, but really telling a story. Awesome.
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30 Fairies
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:35 AM
Wow, this is another excellent 30, each one deserving of greater detail - perhaps their own subs.

The positioning of the Fairies as short-lived, relatively stupid creatures is interesting and creates a dynamic between these and other Fae.

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Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-22 09:25 AM
A great sub that belongs in a worldbuilding folder for sure! Go to Comment
Patrol Pod
Items  (Transports)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-21 02:24 PM
Cool Squared :) I think Derek would like one of these...

This also seem perfect for adding an AI to.
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Quortek Baat'leb
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-29 03:08 PM
These are really good - though I can't imagine something powerful enough to snuff souls not being detectable as magic.

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18 Gifts from Elder Gods, Outer Gods, and Cosmic Horrors
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 03:35 PM
Very good! Love it!

No need to reward me though! Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 12:31 PM
A great grab and go character. Good job.

This comment brought to you by the letter G

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Elizabeth Sheybad and the Flirting Dress
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-01 03:43 PM
I think fiction is fine here - we have a section for it, so don't let that hold you back.

A novel use of the dress, and a good one.
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Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-22 03:37 PM
For the Genre, this is a great in-depth exploration of the character - really a work of fiction that frames her. I like the tone of your world and your writing - it is very coherent and very consistent. Top quality work here.

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Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-30 01:42 PM
A revealing little sub. Lots of uses for the idea. Go to Comment
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