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Lescelina the Witch Queen
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-26 12:18 PM
An interesting character - though it seems her own decisions had very little impact upon her fate. Why did she so readily take up the queen-ship of the beings that slew her mother?

The setting is well developed and the writing good.

A great addition to Decathros!
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7 Ways To Control Monarchs
Systems  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 02:35 PM


A decent list that can spur some plot ideas with regards to royal succession/infighting.



I find the Good King is the exception rather than the norm, both in fantasy and in reality.



I don't see how many of these would forestall civil strife/infighting. Just because the king was lawfully removed does not address the power vacuum that results.

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Xen'da'rik
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-05 09:22 AM
This is very good, though I think a clear explanation of what happened to cause the desert to grow so precipitously would help - that part seemed to beg for more details.

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7 Things About Criticism
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-20 01:21 PM
This should be linked very close to the submit button on comments. Useful stuff.

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Shang Lao
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-06 03:29 PM
This is a perfect Cosmic Era villain. Props for Big Trouble in Little China. Loved that movie.

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30 Judges
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 09:45 AM
A good set of Judicial archtypes. Great list! Go to Comment
Armored Units of the Cosmic Era
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-25 08:30 AM
A large submission, with lots of great little details. I would add linkages to various other entities when mentioned for the first time, especially if Acronyms are used (OCP, etc).

I guess I wonder how some of these 'tanks' aren't. :)



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Guild Game Group 5
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-17 12:07 PM
Wyatt DeMark - his background almost(?) is satire, 7th son of 7ths son with crazy coincidences.

Durg Shumaker - 'Typical' half orc birth condition, though that is really no surpise, but going into magic is relatively rare.

Gulgrim Mountainside - Alcoholic, Agoraphobic dwarf. Entertaining but very close to the stereotype.

Usable all, though none revolutionary.


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Guild Game Group 4
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 12:56 PM
Some useful tidbits here. Could use some more formatting. Go to Comment
The Brotherhood of the Land of Nod
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 12:02 PM
These are a good villain for the Cosmic Era. Lots of potential.

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The Wishing Well
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 11:50 AM
This could be a common 'con' in a world where magic is demonstrably real. Go to Comment
30 Mecha Design Flaws
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-17 02:33 PM
This listing made me want to see what a homebrew battletech game with all of these modifiers available. Go to Comment
Military Clones
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-19 11:46 AM
A great assortment of clones, and I like the use of euphemisms. Go to Comment
Guild Game Group 3
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-29 01:23 PM
The orc is the most interesting of the lot - the other two are rather forgettable. I haven't seen too many orcs become enslaved, and it does turn the whole 'my village was destroyed by orcs' cliche around a little.

Language is a little weird - you have their genders switch in the same sentence -
"That doesn't mean that he is strict in her moral code...


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30 Cosmic Era PC Occupations
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-18 11:10 PM
Wow, a great assortment of professions, though some feel like Prestige classes or races (mutants).

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30 Cosmic Era PC Occupations
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-18 11:10 PM
Wow, a great assortment of professions, though some feel like Prestige classes or races (mutants).

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Felicia 'Fever' Cortez
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-23 01:41 PM
Excellent! This is a great super - you must run a kick-ass campaign :)
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Youma
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-04 01:53 PM
This is appropriately horrible and useful for the right campaign. Good job!

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The moral compass
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-19 07:46 PM
Heh, an immoral compass. I like :) Go to Comment
Guild Game Group 2
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-20 01:15 PM
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