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valadaar's comment on 2014-01-31 07:06 PM
Bah, image scaling...

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30 Power Armor Suits
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-04 08:34 AM
Well, this is very impressive. Lots of detailed pieces - I felt like I was perusing a catalog for the Bubblegum Crisis/Robotech universes.

Great stuff!




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Power Armor Types
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 07:47 AM
A good handling of this stuff.

We are getting close in the real world:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=vdhUpR-dzgk Go to Comment
Neo-Soviet Power Armors
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-04 08:23 AM
I like the cultural flavour added to these suits. And the in jokes :P

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The Eye of Seenu
Items  (Jewelry)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-28 07:14 AM
I think this is a really cool item, though I personally tend to avoid such things as 'impossible to resist, though that is a trivial modification.

It certainly would make a good catalyst to make things happen in your world.

Nicely done and welcome back!

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UAC Power Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-28 08:17 PM
A great set of power armors - so much detail. Awesome! Go to Comment
Old Vardipor, the City of Pigs
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-28 08:21 PM
The city must stink... Go to Comment
Old Vardipor, the City of Pigs
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-28 08:22 PM
A great backdrop - perhaps not somewhere to run a campaign, but a great place to drag the PCs to,
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East Carolina
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-29 02:33 PM
I like all of the detail on this one - how it evolved and changed over time.


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East Carolina
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-29 02:34 PM
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A New Pass...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-29 02:27 PM
I can understand how that happens, still there is a lot to work with here. I like it!
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Larvae of the Outer Gods
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-27 01:50 PM
These things feel almost like something out of Men-in-black. A category of enemy to be hunted by the organization. Could fit in many different genres.

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Bird Brains
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-04 06:58 AM
A decent magic item - more atmospheric and plot-usable then spells that just transmit the message. Good.

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Alexandra Stacja
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-23 09:21 PM


This stops mid sentence at the end. Her personality does not seem detailed beyond mischievous.



What were you looking for advice on?

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Fleabirds
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-22 12:26 PM
Yee Haaa Boys! Lets get rollin'.

For additional inspiration, a canadian offering - Trailer Park Boys
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trailer_Park_Boys

From my neck of the woods, or thereabouts.
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Fleabirds
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-22 12:26 PM
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30 Androids, Gynoids, and Mechanoids
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-21 11:36 AM
A great assortment of ideas on how robots could be incorporated into future society, even without considering their role in the Cosmic Era.

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30 Generals
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-21 08:31 AM
I think stripping the generals a little more of their historical actions and concentrating more on what made them different would have improved this list and kept it from being little more than very short wiki entries.

For example, Rommel was far more than a Desert General. He was an innovator, a mans-general. He was partly responsible for the heavy defence of Normandy, and had he been given the resources he asked for, things may have been quite different.

My point is not to add that to the entry, but to focus on what made him different from other generals and strip out the WWII events.

Crazy Horse is another example. What made him different from other generals apart from he was an American-Indian? If you dropped him into a medieval setting, how would you tell.

I think this is an excellent list idea, and a lot of work was done, but I think a focus on the personalities would render a far superior submission.

Oh, and Hitler was never a general, as much as he wanted to be. Puling out the political leader types and replacing them with more generals would also improve the sub (No Monty? No Eisenhower? Like them or not, these two had strong personalities which would serve well as archtypes)


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30 Generals
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-21 08:32 PM
If I thought it was hopeless, I would not have commented, especially not with that much detail.

I think you could make this a 4.5+ sub if you concentrated on what I suggested - there is so much potential with these individuals.

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Monks of the Bearded Moon
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-21 09:55 AM
This great, given the fairly restrictive premise - moonbeard. Of course I am a little biased towards it.

I echo the need for slightly more wierdness or perhaps darkness. Perhaps more strongly lean on the madness aspect of the moon - lunacy.



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