A very detailed rundown of the unit, though there are not really any people detailed enough to make it much more than an equipment list. Being virtually wiped out, this seems more useful as a historical event in your campaign then anything else. Go to Comment
Yes, this could be strengthened with more time spend on the examples - I meant them to not be cookie cutter creatures, but as individual as humanity in their natures. Also time and energy for the old Val standard has been lacking.
You can change it back to private in work if you must, but adding an acknowledgement to the original source should be fine. Your take is a bit different so does not need to be cast away into the darkness :) Go to Comment