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Ring of Beast Shapes
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-24 10:21 PM
Excellent! This is good stuff.Indeed, welcome aboard.

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Caught in the Vortex
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-18 08:32 AM
This does a great job of conjuring up madness. As a piece, I guess it lacks a final punch/twist that would put it over the top.

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Jacob 'Polaris' Richter
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-13 01:24 PM
I'm very, very impressed with this. Excellent voice. I didn't mean to read it all in one sitting, but I did. I got a strong Watchman vibe from this as well, if not as dark.

Top marks! You must run a damn good campaign.

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Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-10 09:06 AM
Of all of Cosmic Era submissions, I find this one the scariest.
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Arrow of the Winged Sparrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-05 09:09 PM
The target could be inanimate, and you could tie a note to the arrow :P
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Items  (Computers)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-06 09:21 AM

This is one way to make the Oculas a lot more practical. Thinner, lighter, more durable. Really its a logical progression.

As for vulnerability to digital hacking, it would not be hard to work in analog displays as well as non-digital fiber optic channels.

You could also have smart materials which can shift between opaque and clear, which could switch between full VR (full opacity with display), none (full transparency) or augmented reality (full transparency + display).

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Ildas's Guildmasters
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-04 09:32 PM
He's actually my Occult guild persona... :P
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Ildas's Guildmasters
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-05 11:07 AM
He's in work, but here's his current physical description:

Illdus appears as a well-to-do middle-aged merchant, perhaps one with ties to, or at least aspirations towards nobility. Tall, thin and straight backed, with salt-and-pepper hair and a flamboyant mustache, he stands out in a crowd. He speaks loudly and almost always passionately on whatever issue has caught his attention at that point in time, and frequently rails against vice and sloth.

Those who deal with him behind closed doors see him as a profane, foolish, vice-ridden hypocrite - he accepts bribes, drinks heavily, and is frequently with escorts.

There is a third layer to him, the truth hidden by a clumsy lie, and the careful lie. He is not the slightest bit foolish or emotional. The thin public face, his weak 'private' face lie about a true private face of steel. Go to Comment
Cloak of the Thieving Hands
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-12 01:11 PM
One could find their own pockets populated by something from when wearing this cloak.

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The Peristeronic Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-11 02:32 PM
And, if you like the taste of Pigeon or Dove, well, you'll never go hungry :)
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The Peristeronic Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-11 09:05 PM
I see no problem :)
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The Peristeronic Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-23 06:10 PM
Glad you liked it!
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NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-02 10:08 AM
Great use of 100 words! Go to Comment
Ring of Subtle Injury
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-04 02:08 PM
I see no problem with a cursed ring with no upside. There are far worse dangers out there.

An alternate origin of this ring could be the Ring of Penance. Same effects, but its religious in nature, and used by monks/priests/pilgrims to show their devotion.

Good stuff and welcome aboard!

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Sanctum of Water
Dungeons  (Water)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-28 10:24 AM
Freaking A. I agree with Muro on this one wholeheartedly!
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Col. Michelle Inoue
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2016-08-09 08:11 AM
I like she is more Ghost In the Shell and less Bikini babe. Good stuff!
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Brass Man
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2017-06-14 12:07 PM
Not bad 100. Like it!
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Places to go in the Cosmic Era Solar System
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Space)
valadaar's comment on 2017-03-13 03:43 PM
CE is coming together here quite nicely..
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Luciana Holt
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-11 08:24 AM
Neat NPC. Feels like some of the over the top characters in anime, which I believe was the intent :)

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A demon that feeds on good feelings, causing those around to feel upset or angry all the time.

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