Incorporated Longspeak's addition into the main text - thanks Longspeak!

If anyone else wants to sound off on things to avoid on your first sub, feel free to add em! Go to Comment

Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment

I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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Update: Cleaned it up a little, casting it back out into the world.

Not quite sure _why_ it is showing up on the main page.

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Nifty - this could be a very interesting encounter to add when pcs are hunting undead. Little would they suspect this added complication.

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A perfectly reasonable 'cavete' for an intelligent magical sword to have, with significant cultural and political implications.

A daughter of Royalty might seek this item out in order to break out of her prescribed place in their society.
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I love these! I Certainly will be incorporating them into my Unseen Fortress revamp..

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A cool location though I think it could benefit from a little more going over.

Some of the paragraphs suffer from being a bit too large, and the same could be said for a few sentences.

Others are a bit odd - I can't quite follow this one:

"Pasha is atypical physical specimen an Ator."




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An arrow with a shape like frog's crotch. eg: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Fleches-japonaises-p1000615.jpg

Basically U-shaped. Used for cutting ropes and rigging. Not sure of other purposes.
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Some thought provoking stuff here - really points to the subjective reality that is the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment

Brutal. Awful. Sadly believable when you think of such things as radiation testing in the 50's and other immoral scientific studies carried out even in 'enlightened' times.
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Straight forward enough, though there are very few advantages to a twin barrel tank.

In the Battletech universe, where 1-hit kills are not the standard, it makes sense, but in the modern(ish) world where a single MBT hit is generally a kill, a second barrel is unnecessary and a waste of space to use for ammo.

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Great tribute, and nicely integrated!

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An interesting character - though it seems her own decisions had very little impact upon her fate. Why did she so readily take up the queen-ship of the beings that slew her mother?

The setting is well developed and the writing good.

A great addition to Decathros!
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A decent list that can spur some plot ideas with regards to royal succession/infighting.

I find the Good King is the exception rather than the norm, both in fantasy and in reality.

I don't see how many of these would forestall civil strife/infighting. Just because the king was lawfully removed does not address the power vacuum that results.

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This is very good, though I think a clear explanation of what happened to cause the desert to grow so precipitously would help - that part seemed to beg for more details.

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This should be linked very close to the submit button on comments. Useful stuff.

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