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Book Called Regret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-23 10:42 AM
Agreed. I think its prime time viable as well. Good stuff here!
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Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-20 07:18 AM
Cheka - I don't think _this_ submission is the 30 itself, only an entry in a bigger one, perhaps a codex.
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The Spitzkoppe Excavation
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-17 11:37 AM
This definately raises more questions then it answers, for sure. Mystery on top of Mystery.

Also "Armed with this knowledge, they took one of the larger codices, and successfully hooked a computer network to it, and promptly melted down the network. "

What kind of morons did they have for sysadmins? :) "You're going to hook _what_ up to my network? I don't think so."

Hooking it up to a single isolated computer as the first step would have been much more likely.

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Ta'Xet and Ultima
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-24 08:13 AM
This feels like classic Sci fie to me. Sad, but well done. Go to Comment
Ta'Xet and Ultima
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-24 08:13 AM
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Qbe
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-10 02:01 PM
Heh, this leaves the question wide open if you end up with an immortal copy of the individual, or the individual itself, and all the debate over that idea. In this case, I am in the 'Copy' camp.

A different take would be a slow replacement, neuron by neuron, from organic to artificial, without anything being turned off. The replaced organic neuron would be re purposed automatically to low-value memory, eventually disposed of. At some point the brain would be wholly replaced. Now, what would that do the the individual? What would happen to their 'soul'? :)




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7 Things About Fant4stic
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-10 10:12 AM
Nice analysis.

I liked the Fantastic four as a kid, haven't seen this movie yet. Not sure if I will - maybe if I run out of other things to watch on Netflix.

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30 Air Force Officers
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-14 11:29 AM
It is a fairly good list of pilots, though it bounces around quite a bit in genre and era.

I am somewhat put off by the single female pilot being The Feminist, and includes rape. Female characters can exist outside of the domain of Feminism and sexual violence. While they are still rare, there are several decent female archetypes apart from The Victim.



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7 Things About MacGuffins
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-12 11:30 AM
I like it! It is also good for identifying if you have indeed a macguffin in hand.

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Buckfowl
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-06 12:06 PM
I love how you have managed to completely normalize the idea of a chicken with antlers! :)

An excellent post with lots of details. I almost think these damn things could exist, I mean, these do - https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/6/62/Horned_Guan.jpg

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Metric Time
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-05 09:54 AM
Great detail piece for this world.

My only problem with this is that the term cycle is already strongly tied to technology in the form of CPU cycles, and are vastly smaller than a second. They are also not fixed and keep getting shorter as technology advances.

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The Sage Mugwort
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-05 09:50 AM
Great writing Sir! While the name Cliche might be a tad cynical, it seems a world worth detailing and visiting. Go to Comment
An Atlas of County Siogal
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-03 09:59 PM
Wow, thats a damns fine map and awesome submission! Go to Comment
So How Was That Made?
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-28 11:45 AM
Update: Yargh, Out wit' ye! Go to Comment
So How Was That Made?
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-28 12:39 PM
Absolutely! It is absolutely open for additions!

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So How Was That Made?
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-28 12:40 PM
And its now a wiki. I think you can add entries directly. Go to Comment
Loxoscep
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-25 11:32 AM
Agreed! A great starting point for a race that is quite different. They strike me as very useful for a lot of bits and can be a nice replacement for goblins.
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Fainter Stars: Blackwatch
Locations  (Regional)   (Space)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-23 11:11 AM
Another great submission! Lots of good details - I can really visualize the setting.

I find the second plot a little on the choreographed side, but I think that is just a matter of personal preference. Go to Comment
Fainter Stars: Ang's Crater
Locations  (Regional)   (Space)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-21 09:14 AM
An excellent submission. Love all the details.
The plot is good except for the forced nature of the shoot-down. I wouldn't expose the PCs own ship to a forced loss - better they be on some form of McCarron provided transport that gets knocked out of the air. If the PCs are in charge of flying and defense, you may have to 'force' them to fail at defense, especially against the crap fighters. I would personally hate that.



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Utterblack Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-18 11:16 AM
Update: Knocking stuff out the in work. A simple item, but I think useful. Go to Comment
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