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Divinity, Faith, and the Divine Significance of the Materium
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-21 12:11 PM
A good treatment of the subject - Faith as mentioned seems to be a fairly common mechanism. The need for physical avatars to act is a good one.

This chasing of faith has one side effect - it essentially predisposes gods to be selfish and capitalistic in nature, which somewhat precludes truly 'good' gods. Those gods which hold to 'good' principles will , barring some major change in humanity, be at a distinct disadvantages to those gods who will do anything they can to obtain Faith.

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The Sundered Fields
Locations  (Other)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-20 08:29 AM
A memorable location, though there are some nit-picky logistical details that spring out at me. I'm not sure how there could be enough fuel to burn for two years, unless it was an exposed coal seam or a tire dump :)

I'm also curious on what the goblins eat that they would thrive in such a region, where no live trees are. Did the massive deposits of ash provide fertile soil?

The fact that they have any desire to obtain ore implies they have a good source of some type of fuel, for carting firewood to smelt ore would be rather expensive. This points to the coal seam as being possible.

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NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 01:19 PM
Well, that is very Old School indeed! Reminds me of some of the PC's I've seen from that era.... :)

I think it needs a magic ring that replicates a Deck of Many Things and to somehow mix in a Sphere of Annihilation.

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The Aetherium and the Nature of the Soul
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-19 11:37 AM
A good discussion on the subject. Not revolutionary, but it helps tie things together. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 12:23 PM
You can add them as a link in your submission by simply enclosing them with square brackets.

I would not, however, put such links in the summary.

Once you have good number of submissions, we can create a region for you to use to gather these together. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 08:47 AM
This is a great creation story for your world - gives lots to build off of. Muros question and your answer are great.

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Halimath the Wanderer
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-13 08:26 AM
Awesome! I look forward to his accounts of your world.

My god, leveling up would have taken forever :)

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The Totem of Nahual
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 11:36 AM
That is certainly a cool take on Catwoman. Given how it destroys the host, how would you end up with Catwoman lasting long enough to become a fixture?

I hope, however, the Penguin won't get quite the same treatment :)

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Hammer Of Spirit Binding
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 01:38 PM
Update: Out with ye. Go to Comment
NPC List For 1640s Demon Hunting
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-04 01:44 PM
Great details! Excellent characters/ Good stuff! Go to Comment
Time Spent With Trolls
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-03 01:02 PM
An amusing account of the Troll behavior and adds needed depth to the creatures.

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The Headless Motorcycle Man
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 11:19 AM
The prior comments have hit all of the points methinks. It is quite cool and well presented.
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Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 10:03 AM
I cleaned out the junk, but you need to fix your browser -it is corrupted and potentially introducing malware to you - and through the added links - potentially others. Most of the links appeared to be trackers, but they could do worse.

Please fix your browser. You should also virus scan your PC.
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Queen Nekcrola the 47th (a Tale of Mysantia)
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 07:29 AM
A good Old School villain with lots of possibilities. She seems a little too powerful, but given its vintage (1981), it works. It certainly has far more depth than anything I would have put together at the same age. I had not started gaming yet in 1981, much less worldbuilding.

There is a lot of detail packed into this one - hints and hooks into your campaign.
I'd like to see more of this!

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The E-Stix
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-24 08:11 AM
Good - this feels like something that would fit in a Harry Potter type universe due to its modern feel but magical effects.

Since they go off on impact, they would have a lot of potential use in booby traps.

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Marked One
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 07:37 AM
This character is very well ... painted :). Many potential uses, not all adversarial.

And a fine entry into the Tattoo quest - it would certainly been in the running when that one was active.

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Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 08:06 AM
Update: Add blockquotes since the editor ate my tabs... Go to Comment
Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-20 06:31 PM
Many of these generators tie back to lists. If there are some generators you wish were lists, let me know :) Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part I
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-30 10:28 PM
These two subs are very high quality, through this one does not quite strike me as much as the other. In any case, it is excellent.

I would have built this out of smaller pieces myself, as massive works like this tend not to get voted on. Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part I
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 05:12 AM
Its about the sale, frankly. II caught my attention more as it was a plot, alive, and the maps were very well done. This sub is excellent background material but less alive.

As for how I would have rated Father basil seperately? Not too high - i would have put all the NPCs in a sub by themselves.

This is a deference to practicality on my part. Yes the sub flows better as one whole piece, but with the intent to elicit feedback, sometimes compromises need to be made. Overlarge submissions are something I tend to get caught up in myself.

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