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The Shadow Scribe
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
sasa1's comment on 2007-04-19 12:35 PM
Hmmm..I think the Grey scribe is an interesting character. The juxtaposition of the gruesome details of his appearance with the mention of a practicality is a good touch. One can imagine the maggots eating at him to be apt metaphors for the emotions eating away at his soul. The reminder of the Scribe's grovelling'( can I assume that?), menial nature in the last paragraph sums up the character well. Overall seems an excellent candidate for a creature that would alternate between self-deceptive loyalty and betrayal. Not unduly offensive in my opinion... Go to Comment
The Songpit
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
sasa1's comment on 2007-04-19 01:08 PM
Hmmm..i thought it was ok. Maybe to similar to the normal world for my liking with stuff about copyright haha and non-death penalty etc. The idea is pretty cool though Go to Comment
Hounds Of War
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
sasa1's comment on 2007-04-19 06:34 AM
hehe it sounds pretty good.. the description is really thorough, I wonder if any part was inspired or informed by 'Warrior's' behaviour? Go to Comment
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