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The Volgotoi
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-16 01:59 AM

Something I don't quite understand: You say they "hunt and devour members of other races". Then you state that they devour their fallen foes, as a way of purifying them. So do they actively hunt other races, or is it just those that oppose them who are subject to this behaviour?

Otherwise a wonderful sub!

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The Volgotoi
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
olontur's comment on 2010-11-03 09:32 PM
Very good (and quite fun) explanation! Thanks! :) Go to Comment
30 Courtiers
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Political)
olontur's comment on 2010-09-11 09:10 PM
A good 30 in general, though some, like the two brother, are not really entries by themselves. Go to Comment
30 Flesh Peddlers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-18 09:59 PM

A good post overall, but sometimes I feel there's too much of an in-joke involved, and I'm out ;)

None of them are really original, and they don't have to be. Yet, a bit of personality would do them good...

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Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
olontur's comment on 2012-05-15 05:45 AM
I come back to read this every once in a while, this most devious of traps in the Citadel! Beware the archeologist group of mine that will soon encounter herds of goats in the mountains overlooking the desert! Go to Comment
The Celestial Hypothesis
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
olontur's comment on 2010-09-12 08:14 PM
A solid foundation for a world to be built! Liking it a lot! Go to Comment
One Hundered Twenty Three Islands!
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
olontur's comment on 2016-04-27 06:59 AM
Fantastic sub. 5/5 Go to Comment
Mastere, the Necromancer Queen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
olontur's comment on 2010-11-14 02:38 AM

And she's feminist too! :D

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The Whalebone Forest
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
olontur's comment on 2012-06-11 02:53 AM
Only voted. Go to Comment
Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-22 01:37 AM

Quite usable this item(s). As for the spear, mace, axe problem, it should be relatively easy to seal a "bag" of sorts to cover them. Any brutal use would result in breaking the seal and thus raising alarm...

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The Mogrolyth
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
olontur's comment on 2017-07-19 04:21 AM
Everybody's already sung all praise, so just let me pick a nit, or nit a pick, or whatever:

*all living biengs a taste of what its very bieng was - Pain."
bieng -> being Go to Comment
Shelandra Batwind
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-04 12:23 AM
What other said, plus it could use a slight grammar check.

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Spectacles of All Seeing
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
olontur's comment on 2012-06-11 04:05 AM
What happened to the other ten specs? Go to Comment
Albus Sintaba
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-04 01:32 AM
One of my favorite characters here. Thumbs up! Go to Comment
Jorlek the Undying
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-05 05:10 AM
only voted. Go to Comment
Finghaart's Sausages
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
olontur's comment on 2012-05-29 03:04 AM
Ooh yeah! Deep, dark, plausible. Yumm. Go to Comment
The Breakfast of Champions
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-27 10:02 PM

It is important to note, that many civilizations distinguish between a daily breakfast and a breakfast on holidays.

Different meals might also be popular in various times of the year, and certainly the poor and the rich will feast differently.

otherwise yumm!


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The Bone Stitcher
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
olontur's comment on 2012-08-18 04:51 AM
Only voted. Go to Comment
The Hell of Dry Bones
Locations  (Desert)   (Other)
olontur's comment on 2010-11-13 04:48 AM

What everybody else said. Sweet!

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The Clock of Shadows
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
olontur's comment on 2010-10-19 07:35 PM

Depending on the religion in order, I would see many advocates for the destruction of this evil device (from an inquisitory point of view).

I could also imagine that access to this powerful artifact would be drastically limited.

I my gosh, this sparks so many ideas! I see at least an NPC or two, and myriads of plot hooks. I can't afford the time to write down an NPC just now, so...

Plot hooks:

The current leader of the faith and/or ruler of the land see images they interprete as themselves being dethroned be someone who may or may not be identifiable. Work in you PC group from here, as supporters or opponents. Maybe one of them can be identified as the "crown thief"?

The leaders of the church have changed, and the new, overly conservative regime wants to destroy the Clock

The neighboring land want to get hold of this item of miraculous power.

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       By: StrangeLands

A great treasure has been stolen from the Palace and taken to the nearby Temple to the Bitch-Goddess Atrath Klee. The King demands that the party go and retrieve it - the only snag is that the Temple is guarded by potent magic that will kill any male who steps inside. It's just as well that the King has a stash of Girdles of Gender Alteration for just this circumstance.

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