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Deathapple Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-05-08 05:17 PM
Very interesting...Never really thought of a tree someone...unless it fell on them of course.

Why is this a scroll? Go to Comment
Kalashnikov AK-217
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-04-29 12:24 PM
Gave it 3.5/5, because it is a "Good Solid idea" with a little extra added. I liked it. Knowing very little about guns, it all seems to make sense to me and I can't think of any way to make it better. Go to Comment
Oven of Unbreaking Edibles
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-24 08:38 AM
Ahem

LOL

Ahem

4/5, but missing the silly Freetext. I woke up early on my last day of Spring Break and was in a bad mood till I read this. Now I'm gonna be thinking about this all day. Go to Comment
Oven of Unbreaking Edibles
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-24 03:07 PM
well, it could be abused, but only if the PC's figure out that it works for weapons, too. And only if they fight their way past the giant Pillsbury Doughboys every time they want to harden a sword. Go to Comment
### Dragons
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-18 03:56 PM
1) The Angry Dragon This Dragon does not care about hoarding treasure, but only wants to kill stuff. Revenge or bad temper?

2) Golden Dragon A gold mine was attacked by a group of bandits. In order to protect the mine, the mage constructed a dragon out of the only substance handy: Gold. After taking care of the bandits, the dragon now walks around the countryside doing clost to nothing, due to the fact that it is to heavy to fly and does not feel mortal urges. It is now the prize of adventurers due to its value.

3) Volcano Dragon Most dragons are fire resistant, but this one takes it to the extreme. The volcano dragon lives inside an open peak volcano. Go to Comment
### Dragons
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-19 01:38 PM
12) Dragon Man An emerald dragon with one huge, muscular, human arm attached. It's up to you whether you call him Trogdor.

13)Pack Member Be warned...there's more coming to help him.

14) The Small Dragons Similar to a velociraptor, this small pack of dragons hunt as a pack. The each are as long as a human is tall, but cannot breath fire. They can, however, fly. Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-17 06:00 PM
Updated: Anything glaringly wrong before I submit? Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-17 06:19 PM
Updated: Takes Leap of Faith and Submits! Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-18 10:30 AM
Altair is the main Character from Assassin's Creed, a game for the PS3 and Xbox360.

The Whole intent is for someone who wants some basis in history for an assassin group. They have some strange points, such as not running and killing themselves. This is to show their devotion to their leader, which could make them difficult to deal with.

The game section is semi-pointless. It is mainly interesting tidbits for people who played the game to see how much the designers put into the game to make it historically accurate. It does not really have any use in an RPG, no Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-19 08:13 AM
Awww but Hashshashin sounds so cool :(

Ok, changed Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-21 04:48 PM
I apologize in advance for typo's This keyboard in Destin sucks.

Well Scrasamax im thinking of changing the name to "how not to make a sub"

Plagarism? No, I'm just putting stuff in their that I thought would be interesting to be used. The whole section on the game was mainly for people who actually played it. It is mainly pointing out the work of he developers and telling people abou things that the never would have guessed were historical.

No, I dont think that Altair would be a good sub. The Animus, a machine developed in 2012 tha allows you to visit your ancestors memories, would. However, I doubt will ever try to write that. At least no until m writing gets better.

And you give me too much credit. I have never seen nor heard of "the Assassination Bureau" Go to Comment
Assassin's Creed
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-21 10:56 PM
Thanks, I might fix it up, but Im probably gonna start work on my "Fiends" setting when I get home.

Yeah, the only reason i didn't buy one already is because Im in Destin right now, using my gramp's laptop. And I really can't afford $20 righ now...me=poor Go to Comment
The Undertaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-18 04:50 PM
Well way back then they were as stupid as this guy, only around 1% getting an education and all. Secondly, They would not know that he was killed with a shovel, just that he had a huge gash on his forehead and died from the blunt damage to his brain. They din't have the fornsics back then to know it was a shovel. Now someone might figure it out eventually, but its not obvious enough to find after the second person. Thirdly, I think he is at least smart enough to take the of his shovel.

So he would not "run around unchecked," but close to it. Go to Comment
The Undertaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-18 04:51 PM
A bit harsh, but that's ok. I came here to learn. Go to Comment
Whispers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-14 09:41 PM
It was pretty good. I personally can't think of a way to use it. It's almost indetectable. Does it give off an aura of some sort that priests/magic users can sense or something like that? I guess my only real problem is that it is hard for them to have an effect on the campaign with the PC's knowing what it is. Maybe if they were influencing there thoughts when they still had the brain power to use them or something. Go to Comment
101 Post Apocalyptic Cults
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-17 01:28 PM
5/5 Greatness in a can

For 101: Pi Cult

They worship a strange symbol. They wait for the world to be rulled by it. They say it will bring about "Change without end" Go to Comment
Creating Martial Art Styles
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-17 01:42 PM
4.5/5

I really liked it and it is pretty accurate. I have since gone through a few styles I know and was able to classify each using your guide. Although I would probably never create a style, this guide is still very well written and will probably help many a GM. Go to Comment
Magic Candles
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
mrcelophane's comment on 2008-03-19 01:20 PM
Good sub, never really thought of candles... 4.5/5 Go to Comment
Goblin Pole
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
mrcelophane's comment on 2007-10-03 04:48 PM
6)Prop two of them up next to each other, each with a contestant. Sudden death fight to the extreme.
7) Prop one up, good place to get away from it all
8) Scouting
9)Put some feed around it and use it for deer hunting. Go to Comment
Goblin Pole
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
mrcelophane's comment on 2007-10-03 04:51 PM
Its interesting to say the least. Added my own submission to the scroll. It sounds like something goblins would use. Though, why would strapping them in keep them more focused on the task? I don't get that part. Go to Comment
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