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Everlasting Chalk
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:42 PM


Everlasting Chalk, or Kidney Stone, made from the regenerative properties of a Troll.



I like this idea. Makes sense and humourously creative. Good job.


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The Language Archeoc
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:38 PM


Certainly a good, solid stub. I am interested to see more in the future.


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"Knock First" Door Trap
Dungeons  (Any)   (Doors)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-03-08 11:41 PM
Nicely done! Wish I could have thought of that. I can imagine the door kicking the guy back after a few attempts. Go to Comment
Metal Mask of Maeschnarr
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-02-19 07:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Burn Box
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-02-17 12:36 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Puppet Familiars
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 04:33 PM
I didn't realize my submission could be inspirational. Thank you for the credit. *thumbs up*

Excellently done, very good. The right twists used and subtle culture changes made this very well done. I can see the people trying different methods to duplicate the way one kingdom had. The puppets here remind me of small voodoo dolls. Nice way of adding culture to these things as well. I would not have thought of that in such detail. I should consider giving my post a look over to see if it can be done.

I give this submission 4.5 out of 5. Great stuff, but still has room for a bit more. Again, awesome work there. Go to Comment
Puppet Familiars
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-26 09:36 PM
Like how many times Juju groped women on his spare time? lol Go to Comment
Puppet Warriors
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-20 05:58 PM
Update: Added Extra information and more on the creation of the warriors. Go to Comment
Puppet Warriors
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-20 06:18 PM
Ah yes, the weaknesses. Forget to include that. Thanks for reminding me. I'll be sure to add a little section to possible plot hooks. It'll be a nice idea. Rogue warriors, evil villains having to fight a group of them in a dungeon, even finding the method in creating them.

I'll keep revising it for better use. Thanks against for the advice. Go to Comment
Puppet Warriors
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 09:17 PM
Yeah, I kind of got this habit of of switching tenses and not realizing it until much later. Which is why I would often need someone to actually point that out to me. Though I'll try to fix the grammar errors when I can. Go to Comment
Puppet Warriors
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:19 PM
Update: Added and changed a few words Go to Comment
Puppet Warriors
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:29 PM
Update: Plot hooks Go to Comment
The Last Zombie
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-18 12:08 AM
Update: I believe it to be a good submission now. Go to Comment
The Last Zombie
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 09:24 PM
That's for GMs to decide. While I might explain some of the things like the organizations or the locations, I left some parts vague for other people to play around with. Having it completely restricted path doesn't always work.

Some people might have different interpretations for the dead one. So I left it's past and abilities vague. Some might want him to be a badass killing machine, some want him to be a hero. Heck, he might not be a zombie at all. The possibilities are endless. Go to Comment
Atissi Worms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-18 03:47 PM
Interesting idea. Though what will happen if it infects something that can't die or something inorganic? Go to Comment
The Serpent's Teeth
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 05:23 PM
Nice job, though could use a bit more details. Like who is the Serpent of Darkness and more stuff about their history. Go to Comment
30 Medical Texts
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 05:17 PM
Nicely done! Go to Comment
Frosty's Silk Hat of Sentience
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
mimic12455's comment on 2010-01-23 04:50 PM
Very nice interpretation of a classical item. Could use more information like perhaps a backstory. Go to Comment
Treller Vine
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:50 PM


I think it's a good start, but I feel it could be improved. Perhaps making wooden shields that would take advantaged of the plant's properties.

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Regression
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:55 PM
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