I believe it is finished, thanks be to Strolen or it would have remained the same with nothing I could do about it. Just in case many of you have seen the movie Willow I did get this idea from the movie but expanded on it somewhat.
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Redid some of the history, got a new idea on it so. And as far as the spelling ran it through several times and all it came up with was the names Paladrim and glavus, so I don't know what to tell you there.
Enjoy
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Tetra the combination of the four elements of earth, wind, water and fire

Ice (bit of a ff fan) frezzing cold to the touch, incase in ice

energy or electricity massive balls of pure energy

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Just a thought.
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I took in mind some of your comments and edited it some. Hope it helps you all understand it more.
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Got an idea from a few other posts and decided to go with it. Anyway hope you like it.
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I thank you.
Even though it is a 3/5, it gives me a base to work on.
I am working on Malick, Vansfield, and Beligitior(the person), and a plot for this to so you knowv things happen.
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let me know what you think.
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I redid the weapon somewhat and am awaiting the results. I apoligize if their are any "miss-spellings" or "gammar" issues but no one is perfect. I really thank you for the critism and want to learn more about making items and other things for this site, so let me know if I can change anything else about my style. Thanks.
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This is just sometihng that I came up with, kind of a fighter with a selfconflict of sorts. Anyway hope you like it.
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before he attained the long ears, he was rather mischievious. he would toss behives in to open windows and cut part of ropes you know typically teenage pranks. but after words he still had the mischief but to a lessor extent, because now a strong wind will knock him off balance.
as a fighter he is fairly chivalrus he always looks after the little guy, especially those picked on because of diformities, and is now very vengfull, and depending on what is said will snap on must people about his ears.
he will also never strike on anyone that doesn't first strike on him.
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I know I am probably not one to be talking right now after all the critiqueing they have done to my post but this is a good item, although it does need a little work.
*Try more explanation.*
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I hope you like this idea for a weapon. just wanting to say that it doesn't have to always be a bastard sword but can also work well as a katana, but large or short swords draw away to much speed and that is exactly what Judgment needs to function right, because fate strikes fast if you cross it the wrong way. ~~ Go to Comment

Ancient Gamer explain to me what else I can add to it. but until then I will have to disagree with the 1/5 remark. but critizism is accepted I will work on it.
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I took in mind some of your thoughts and redid the item some I hope it works for you this time.
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ShadowEagle help me out. tell me things I can do to improve this.
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