Yeah, I may sound like I'm putting my self down but i found it kinda strange that i got 5/5. The problem is that I started good but at one point I had a hard time making it sound believable, but to make a long story short, Dorathoin's mace is kind of like William Wallaces freedom sword, except for the dwarves instead of 13 century scots. Go to Comment
Thank you all, I am sorry for a problem, I did not know where else to put it but I wanted this to be heard, it isn't only about having the most powerful item, its about the way you use it to help in any cause. For example, when a professional singer is on stage, we all know about them because they are famous, but do we hear much aboutthe backgroud dancers, no. Go to Comment
To Agar. I also said it was a delicious drink, and it musn't be to hard to make if it's in steady supply. Your right about the prices though, because of the danger of Undengrolk approaching, Vendors wish to upgrade their prices so they can get rich before the end. Go to Comment
I made it up my self!! how dare you acuse me of Playdgerism!! I said that Wiblië is easy to make,what I should have said was the ingredients do no take long to put together, or easy to prepare. I also said that it was also a dilicious drink, meaning not only is it a healing substance but also a drink at parties or something. Please try to understand that constant critisism doesn't help me in any way, are you able only to see the bad in my litterature? I thank Strolen for the compliments he gives, they inspire me to improve. Go to Comment
Look i said it fought the evil long ago. I'm fourteen dude, I just started writing, I may not Be J.R.R Tlokien but, geez, maybe you think that everyhing has to be as good as you. Go to Comment
Look, my writing skills need no improving though I was in a rush, I apologise myself for my lack of details but I shall do my best to correct my faults.
The staff is harmful as a stick when hit repeatitely on the target. The target will get hurt.
Um, have you ever had your liver burnt to a crisp inside your own living body? I doubt it's pleasant. Go to Comment
And the dragons and griffins are aware of their controle though they are like puppets and are helpless. They will be veangefull to the one who put controle over them when the controle reaches it's end. But most times, the wielder is running far away before the end of the enchantement. Go to Comment
Thank you miss Hawk, the peasant is named Joseph. A corrupted soul aidding the orcish king to get the staff first. In his mind the death of the king means thhat the land will be weakened. When the black king Vlame(Orcish king) attacks the country of Conqaz, Joseph wil be granted kingship and the love of Ranfral as his prize. Go to Comment
The falueth song is the song Vaxtar plays when others are weak. The melody strenghens the heart of the good and weakens that of evil. Vaxtars trails are, find out the name of Hathil' father and succesfully raid the dwarvish realm of Faz-Gnomedrax. Go to Comment
Sweet!!! this caracter's roleplaying ability means that you can only get valuble info if you have a decent item, very interesting. keep up the good work. Go to Comment
I love the fact that you have a character that is both akin to elves and that loves the forest. And also, when with her, the heroes while have to speak quickly before she transforms. Best i'ves seen in a long time. I ador Go to Comment
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