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Progressive Stiletto
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-23 08:22 PM
I'd like to see just a bit of expansion on the idea. My first thought was to have the blade fragment on detonation but with traces of rare earth magnets to mess with everything electronic it is near. Then I also considered a martingale around the wielder's wrist so you could make several stabs with it, but once the stiletto is released, the martingale will pull a pin to detonate.

I like the need for such weapons being explained. Well thought out. Go to Comment
Lady Delores Briggs
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-20 04:13 PM
I like the depth of this character and the full story you have given her. She will make a good woman for my adventurers to meet. I would like to see a few options for torture she might use on my party. Go to Comment
The Books of the Holders update
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-09 09:41 AM
For some reason it wouldn't let me update on the original post. Go to Comment
The Books of the Holders update
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-13 09:34 AM
It told me that The Books of the Holders already existed and I couldn't save that. I think it had something to do with how I originally set it up. I was doing it as an item (the screen when you create a new submission) then changed it to a location. When I tried to update it told me I hadn't filled out everything on the side so I did and then it wouldn't save. Go to Comment
The Books of the Holders update
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-15 06:08 PM
The update version can be deleted now. I don't see how to do so, however. Go to Comment
Raven Feather Wand
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-07 12:39 PM
Good point on that. In my mind the wand would need to be hidden by the individual, and the hiding place must be better than the last place. Eventually this should make it impossible to find. However, a group working together on this could circumvent the curse by helping each other. I'm good with that, however. Think of the drain on their resources. They also need to bring life to use the wand.

I am always concerned with using terms like HD or such, but I figure it's a generic enough term to allow anyone to translate it into the system of their choice. Go to Comment
The Circle of Culthus
Locations  (Area)   (Forest/ Jungle)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-06 05:22 PM
A very usable idea and drive behind a story. I can see having a PC fall into this, then taking that PC from the player and making it the enemy of the group (might even let that player play two characters at first without explaining.)

Thank you.

Subnote: Minor word correction "Maybe their hungry for power" should use "they're" instead. Go to Comment
30 Items You Need
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-03 03:05 PM
Update: Slowly adding my descriptions. Go to Comment
30 Items You Need
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-08-05 06:10 PM
Update: Okay, I've got a pretty good list of uses for my things. Let me know what you think. Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-07-10 05:41 PM
Very creative idea and well limited item. The story is as good as the item is. Go to Comment
The Gale Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-07-02 11:05 PM
Very usable item and hooks.

Can I use it to fill up a balloon or power a Gnomic "jet" engine? If I use it instead of a bellows cram, can I get a superheated fire?

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A Tale of Two Rituals
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-26 10:45 PM
The write up is good. It completely does not fit my game world, but I get the use. Go to Comment
Calypso of Caspia
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-26 10:49 PM
Oops, this is a case where the story happened in my head but I forgot to write it down. I'll... fix that. Go to Comment
Calypso of Caspia
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-27 09:09 PM
Update: Added several details and cleared up some of the language. Go to Comment
The Dreaming Chamber
Locations  (City)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-24 06:49 PM
Thank you. Go to Comment
The Dreaming Chamber
Locations  (City)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-07-10 11:19 PM
Update: Added change to the effect of dying in the city and started notes on the tower. Go to Comment
The Dreaming Chamber
Locations  (City)   (Other)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-07-11 09:38 AM
Update: More rooms in the tower. Go to Comment
Surya Power
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (World Wide)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-24 08:36 AM
The rumor makes this one for me. Go to Comment
Technological Parapsychic Powers
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Defining)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-23 10:10 AM
So many stories flooding my mind right now thanks to your article. This affected me philosophically: my ways of knowing. Thank you.

I would love to see further work here in the becoming of one of these. How does one become able to Ghost for instance. Is it innate, trained, or a little of both? Could it be forced upon someone, an implant or such? Maybe an accident like spilling your double latte onto a high powered RAM port and being killed by the power then electrocuted back to life by the machine "choosing" you.

There's also all the wondrous forms of mental illness of our times: perhaps some of these are actually explained by people having these natural talents or powers. You're not autistic, you just need to interact through Ghosting.

So many ways to go with this. Go to Comment
Zoe 3000
NPCs  (Extras)   (Artistic/Performance)
dustyjohnson's comment on 2013-06-23 10:16 AM
Speechless.

Ummm...

Nope, I got nothing. Just sitting here in awe. Sorry I can't give you more. Go to Comment
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