I found this to be a great post, I really like when supernatural items have almost mundane or utilitarian slant. Very every uber-item, when should have five or six of these easy to use magic items that serve the mechanics of magic first and foremost.
What bumps this up to a sweet post for me is the culturally and historical suggestive style of writing. With this one piece of materiall culture you describe a much larger world. Well done.
Boomsauce :"Few doorways are opened to the spirit world and most like to keep it that way. When someone dies it is so brief and so quick, the opening of a gateway between both worlds, it seldom allows anything to sneak through. However, when someone is brought back from the dead, that doorway is open much longer and that extra time is all that is needed for something to find that opening and sneak back."
You had me right there, not a novel concept but as Pieh said "solid and detailed". In fact I just echo Pieh's sentiments.
I can recognize what is wrong with this write up and what needs to improved, but still I found something rather seductive about the energy the author used in describing the battle scene. I could see in my mind the image of the author typing away all the while keeping thread of the battle in his mind. As the fighting gets more pitching the thumps and clicks of the typing become more frequent and frantic. SWEAT BEGINS TO DROP ON TO THE KEYBOARD, THEN THE TYPHOON IS SURROUNDed, ITS UNPOWERED HAUL SPEEDING TOWARDS THE PLANET SURFACE. IT LOOKS LIKE ALL IS LOST. ENEMY SHIPS SURROUNDED THE CRIPPLED SHIP, WHICH NOW RESTS IN A MASSIVE CRATER. BUT NO! THE RAPID DESCENT WAS PART OF THE CAPTAIN'S PLAN, THE TYPHOON FIREs ALL 200 SHORT RANGE ROCKETS AT ONCE. . .
This has a very Japanaimie feel to it, in as much as it is a space ship that is indestructable, has legs and gets "lost" after a great battle. But Valadaar is right it needs a lot of work, but the spirit of fun is there, and we need more spaceship entries.
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Roleplaying requires a shared false reality. Everyone in the table buys into the reality created by the dice the stats and the GMs own twisted logic and view of human behavior. (If it is not twisted then the guy is just running modules and using somebody elses on psuedo-logic). Dropping one of these into your battletech campaign would shake the very fabric of the game universe. It would really annoy those "simulator" players. Not a bad thing that.
Could be fun.