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7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-29 04:12 PM
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7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-30 10:00 PM
This is a fantastic roleplaying tool. It deserves more of a write up then I am giving it. This sets the narrative of the cosmic era well above a justification for the convergence of genre, nostalgic extrapolations and specific media references that is much of the content. It deserves a longer commentary which I will get to, but a game that sets out to explore these topics is more than a game and it is more than fantasy and escapism. Go to Comment
7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-29 10:15 AM
1. Everything is for Sale

At least until the alien invasion hits and the it is a flat out war for survival. Indeed it is war humanity is alway fighting via proxy. It is obvious that the A.I.s have managed to find ways to wed war and profit but what if war became less profitable. Would M12 allow peace to reign, all be it a profitable peace, if it made the planet more vunerable?

2. Life is Cheap

Yes because M12 has done a cost benifet analysis and found that millions of deaths now will save billions upon billions in generations to come. It is not so much cheap as it already been borrowed against by the powers behind the thrones.

3. Sex is in Everything

Keeps people distracted from the alien invasion...I guess...which has very little to do with sex...unless the aliens are going weaponize sex.

4. Frantic Pacing
-except for the alien invasion and the M12 conspiracy, that is glacial


5. Our Values are Antique

I love that your values stared with home and car ownership...did you vote for Ron Paul?

6.Nothing is real

Except the alien invasion

7.Everything under the surface is horrible

Yes, but as Cheka says it is a necessary evil...defeat the alien threat. So i suppose it isn't completely horrible. Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-29 06:22 PM
This is clearly written, well formatted and fun.

Are we thinking the pyro's just catalyze stuff to heat it up and catch it on fire, cause the way you seem to describe they are creating "fuelless" fires, which would suggest direct energy...something EMish. Does this mean they can create or channel energy? Could they make beams of light or gamma radiation? Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-29 06:23 PM
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Environmental Parapsychic Powers
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-30 11:22 AM
In a sci-fi setting though people will ask what is that energy. Could these fuelless flames work in a vacuum? Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Any)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 11:21 PM
Who is the novel about? Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 11:37 PM
"The Federation is known for it's unabashed militarism, space exploration program and being the first NEG, the pioneer of hypertechnology, and the point of origin for the CogNet. "
Who know these things? Your fictional geo-political summaries would carry more verisimilitude for me if they were less demonstrative and more controvertible. It would be more telling I believe to have two or three informed citizens of Scras's mind sit around and discuss the Atlantic Federation than these primary school textbok style summations that have single point of few for millions of people.

Having the enemy subs having free reign of the ocean provides a great story telling leaver, I like the idea of being able to drop agents from foreign powers in with relative ease. Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 11:38 PM
Well played sir Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-01-16 01:02 PM
Where does St. Louis fall among the North American states? Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-01-16 02:12 PM
You know I love the cosmic era, and on the whole I think your writing is insightful regarding the different media streams the Cosmic Era seeks to combines. You have also imbedded in the cosmic era a lot of intellectual goals both in terms of satire and expanding on the media of the 80s and 90s. I respect and admire that bar you have set for your work. I also hope that my comments give you new sympathy for George Lucas.

The problems with relating “demonstrable facts” as broad sweeping conclusions you have made in this post are two fold.

First, it undercuts the stated themes of the cosmic era. The cosmic era is defined in part by surrealism and corruption: points six and seven of (http://strolen.com/viewing/7_Things_About_Writing_for_the_Cosmic_Era). Thus any presented reality has to be viewed as dubious at best. You even make statements about this relationship when you characterize the human rights orientated policy making of the different republics as “lip service”. A demonstrable fact would be if there was a disconnect between the desired outcomes of a policy and the state goal of a policy. Example: insider trading still happens or wild cougar populations are still decreasing despite new laws. Calling a policy lip service implies a knowledge of the policy makers intent. And while you may have such knowledge, is this knowledge or judgment something widely agree with and where do the promises of government break down? Isn’t reality in the cosmic era, and certainly at a game table, part of a collective agreement? Does it matter why the policies break down? Is it truly lips service or just systemic failure to the systems of government. If the cosmic era is as duplicitous and double speaky as you assert that it should be than how can you present a cosmic era reality with demonstrable facts? Nothing is real.


Second the idea of finding demonstrable facts beyond borders and the measurable events regarding geo-political stuff like this is sophomoric, unintellectual and diluted. Take this statement “The Atlantic Federation has as it's greatest strength it's Space Program.” Could you say for certain what the USA’s greatest strength is today? Is it that the USA has a lot of natural resources within its boarders? Is it the size of the USA’s military? Is it the number of middle class that fuel the economy? How would you respond to somebody who told what the USA’s greatest strength was the Hollywood media empire? Even if they had a convincing argument would you believe it to be a demonstrable fact or just a conclusion gained from single perspective? Do you want your readers to view this as the word of God or a piece of perspective?
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Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-01-17 01:17 AM
where is this written? Can we revisit it? Go to Comment
Omni-Consumer Products
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (World Wide)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-14 02:18 PM
First, the one has a lot of fun imagery and a punchy bemused wording that I really enjoyed.

"megacorp sprawled like a kraken flailing around the Great Lakes"


"These are not automatically human brains, but some are."

"megacorporation to make all the stuff that people needed, but really didnt need to be marketed, like the afore mentioned asswipe, toothpaste, furniture, and so on"


The format of the wedding limerick also was both accessible and clever.

Fun stuff.

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Union Aerospace Corporation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-14 03:40 PM
Also a fun one, I think we just mapped the Kessel run! Go to Comment
Pacific Rim Coalition
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-14 12:24 AM

Useful stuff, if I were to play a character from there what was the PRC stance on Neo-ethnic group and mystics? Who benefitted from the PRC's formation? Any noteble personalities?

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Pacific Rim Coalition
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axlerowes's comment on 2017-03-09 10:31 PM
what is going on with Thailand, Laos, and that area? Go to Comment
North American Congressional Army (NACA or Nay-Say)
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (World Wide)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-11 11:35 PM
Update: Just joined Drunk writer's guild, there is no way this comes out formatted....holding my breath and my drink while I hit submit. Go to Comment
North American Congressional Army (NACA or Nay-Say)
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-11 11:36 PM
Update: Just joined Drunk writer's guild, there is no way this comes out formatted....holding my breath and my drink while I hit submit. Go to Comment
North American Congressional Army (NACA or Nay-Say)
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-12 10:08 AM
made few changes, I am okay with it Go to Comment
North American Congressional Army (NACA or Nay-Say)
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-02-08 09:59 AM
Update: I just happen to look at this an realized a whole paragraph was missing. Go to Comment
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