Strolen\s Citadel content. 
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-25 08:17 AM
I enjoyed this one, solid idea and original details. A good launching point for future explorations of the people and the setting.

With great humility and acknowledge of mine lack of proof reading: I think this sentence came out wrong
"Though they are seen in the great cities of man where they come to play and trade as urbane - if somewhat strange - the rural towns along the edges of the Great Tangle." Go to Comment
Conventions of Galactic Cartography
Systems  (Geological/ Geographical)   (General)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 09:37 AM
I have not been able to load graphic! Go to Comment
Conventions of Galactic Cartography
Systems  (Geological/ Geographical)   (General)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-24 08:56 AM
I have inserted lots images in the past, check out my old post ;), but when I have done it with links they often fail eventually (i think most of the links in "magical songs" are now dead. . So in the past I have uploaded the images to the citadel and then selected the image from my catalog of images. I have been able to use that function. Go to Comment
Fainter Stars: Blackwatch
Locations  (Regional)   (Space)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-23 08:57 AM
It is the same setting. After I created this setting, which has been sitting in a notebook for years, I used the Traveller rule book to randomly generate solar systems. Those generators and tables give you a planet type, star type, star port type, population, politic situation (civil war, monarchy), tech level, and number of factions on the planet. Blackwatch started as a series of numbers that indicated a planet with low gravity, no atmosphere, no water, less than a 1000 people, a star port, three factions and a civil war. I enjoyed expanding on these Traveller randoms. I suggest you try it.

I may put together a submission region. Never done that before, wish I could do an interactive graphic like we almost did for Decathros. Go to Comment
Fainter Stars: Ang's Crater
Locations  (Regional)   (Space)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 09:37 AM
It is a little railroady. Go to Comment
Utterblack Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-18 05:47 PM

This is a good one! I like the plot hook elements of this item tempting the eldritch beings by distorting reality. It makes the wearer seem not only "kind of invisible" but also kind of bad ass. Wearing an Utterblack cloak about town says "Not only could be I standing unseen in the corner of your bedroom with several inches to play with, but I am willing to tempt the elder gods to do it."

This line kind of shows your age though

"stylish blue and gold mage's robe exterior"

All the stylish mages are wearing animal print this season.

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A Brief History of County Siogal
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-15 07:19 PM
This is a nice note, and the setting has a nice mixture of the mundane and the fantastic. You laid out the bare bones of county with history, pride, mystery, unorganized power and perhaps a long history of internal strife (assuming the people at the time this writing still remember all this stuff). Are you planning to build on this? Go to Comment
Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 12:27 PM
This is fantastic (more people should read it). I am a fan of novel creation myths for the "D&D hetro normal" setting and this is great one. As I can see it you took the typical fantasy cannon-dwarves Dragons an so on-and worked backwards to create this myth. I also like how subtle yet dramatic the value embodied by each " diety" and instrument is, this is really great. I loved the magical song examples. Go to Comment
Degrees of Possession
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-10 10:35 AM
Simple, well structured, concise and has great narrative quality to the write up Go to Comment
Cloud in A Jar
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:39 AM
Nice, I like the details Go to Comment
The Book of Holding
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-02 11:22 AM
That is fun and clear Go to Comment
Fainter Stars: The Sorraba System
Locations  (Regional)   (Space)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-19 06:43 AM

Update: Thanks to Valaadar for working the formatting problem.

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7 Medics
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:14 AM
'DIrty' killed president Garfield ! Go to Comment
7 Medics
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:17 AM
As series of archetypes this is solid, but I don't think adding a little specific personality or story to each guy...kind of like you did for Shipman...would take away from this. There is an argument, made by real writers not myself, that an irony of prose is that the more specific a description the more accessible it becomes. Go to Comment
Dress Code of the Guild of Adventurers Upon Return
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:27 AM
I can imagine, and I feel like this post embraces, a game world that incorporates the game jargon into the narrative and world building. Go to Comment
Dress Code of the Guild of Adventurers Upon Return
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:27 AM
This was fun, nicely detailed, and a good side long view of the 'organization'. Go to Comment
7 Canyons
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 08:35 AM

This is a good thread of idea seeds. Each of these is a little plot, story or encounter and I enjoyed reading over them. I really liked the Canyon of the small idea and the Canyon of the Gallows.

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Unique goodiebags for players
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-25 01:09 PM
This has the elements of GMing that I expect in a game. I often wonder if people prefer the generic game where everything is as it is described in the rule book. Go to Comment
Brothers, Gods and a Giant Skeletonize
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-09-20 09:11 PM
I did do that, thanks for the catch. Go to Comment
Able Blank
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-27 10:11 AM
This is really good one, it is fairly clearly written and the idea touches on all the aspects the major themes of of the cosmic era: saddism, ruthless corporate pragmatism, militarism, and surrealism. I'd like to see one of these guys as protagonist in a plot or narrative. Go to Comment
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