I like this one, but what I like about it is less the character (she is almost all history and equipment with no direct view of personality. Very much a Scras character.) and more the glimpse into a world. I'm with Mageek, the use of Remora title was cool.
This reminds me of that god awful Battletech novel, "Close Quarters" in which the main character was a female scout who ran along side the mechs with a rifle and a radio (looking for the mech that killed her parents). But unlike this character, the battletech scout does wear a bikini (at least in the first battle).Go to Comment
The rich live at the top, the coarse and the criminals live at the bottom, got it. A quick survey of the idea here, I like the time you took with the Myojin shines and the hints at culture that come through. But are the people down here still wired into the virtual reality of the CogNet? Do your surrounding matter that much if you program yourself to experience whatever emotions or sensations you prefer?Go to Comment