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Kranno the Skulker and Vonyich Festelgabber
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-20 04:21 PM
I like this idea a lot.

Adventure Idea: The PCs meet Kranno and Vonyich and they become fast friends. Maybe even have an adventure together. Kranno then hears something he shouldn't and Vonyich publishes it. As soon the story hits the public the powers that be put a hit out on Vonyich and Kranno and the PCs have to help them get out the Kingdom

Adventure Idea: A PC becomes their new favorite subject. The PC finds that he know has undserved reputation, a fan base and further more can't take a leak without finding it public knowledge the next day. This all becomes a problem when the PC become associated with the backdoor man/mistress of a local Warlord and at the same time is contracted to carry a subtle spy mission. Go to Comment
The Great White Dragon
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
axlerowes's comment on 2010-10-08 07:21 AM


My only thought  about the writing style is that the tone is not held constant. Cliche and poetic are fine, they suggest a time before the media over saturation.  Colloquial and modern is fine too, just because were describing dragons, jousts or an iron-age agrarian lifestyle doesn’t mean we need to use middle English (or our approximation of middle English).  I think the author was going for a classical theme here and achieved that in the first few paragraphs.  (After all what modern man would name his son Gale?)



I didn’t see the original, but what I read today seems like a solid post that achieves its goal (telling us the back story of the dragon scale).  Also, for the most part, it sets a mood and a tone.



 


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Cult of the Red Pantheon
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-04 03:02 PM
Not overly drawn out. They are solid one dimensonal villians that a group of heroic PCs could really sink their teeth into. Go to Comment
The Enori
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-14 03:03 PM
Is the animal intelligent?

But I like the idea as whole, these animals could also be a form pest. Imagine your PCs are giving an ogre chase through the forest and accidently startle a heard of Enori.

This could also be a great tool for a DM desperate to keep their PCs from doing something stupid. Go to Comment
The Enori
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
axlerowes's comment on 2011-05-12 10:14 AM
I guess I never voted on this and it looks like it isn't going to change any. Despite all the flaws I do like the idea. Go to Comment
Daltorz of the inferno
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-14 01:31 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Priests of Droven
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-28 09:45 PM
Updated: I going to try this fake letter thing Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-05 02:33 PM
Nice Villian with clever, interesting but not sufficating details that links him to all sorts of possible plot hooks. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-23 07:19 PM
I agree with Muro for the most part. Overall there is rapid fire laundry list of places but I enjoyed that you didn't present them as a list-lists are the the citadel's greatest vice-and stuck to single narrative flow. You have a created vibrant and energetic setting. Thanks Go to Comment
Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-17 07:46 PM
Brilliant!

Man, I love the story's you use to write into your subs.

The "Can I take that back" plot made me smile

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Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-18 01:23 PM
now in the top 20 muro. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-07 05:58 PM
Updated: I thought I'd change the format a little. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-12 02:05 PM
Updated: Updated: People mentioned some changes that should be made. As for the term generic, I meant it was associated with no specific world. But I will never try and get into symantics agruement on a message board. So I changed the title.
As for this Eliminster clown, when did he enter print. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-14 09:30 AM
As a whole do you feel the depth of the Forgotten Realms world has been good for gaming? Not the business, but the way hobbyists approach and play the game. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-03-26 07:56 PM
Updated: it is so hard to get all the errors out of a piece of prose. Go to Comment
30 People in a Crowded Dockside Tavern
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Travelers)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-05 01:55 PM
Very Good, and useful. This was the first of the 30 lists I read and it is still one of my favorites. Go to Comment
30 Assassins necromancer
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-03-24 02:18 PM
One-bad mother:

She has never had much ambition. Oh she has dreamed of things and imagintined things; her oldest daughter marvels at how creative her mother is, but she never really sought to better her station. As a young woman she realizes in retrospect that she was waiting for a caretaker. She was never a beauty, but she had a honest face with eyes as warm and round as her face and a smile so sweetly shy that men soon found comfort in her. They just never found a wife in here though. So by the age of 34 had given birth to eight bastards. By 35 was mother to five and gravetender to three. The broken promises of minstrel boys, the loss of her youth and the tragic loss of her babies to plague and hunger left no room in her heart for anything but her children.

She found she could make a living as a mother; at a brothel. The whores had their own bastard and many of the girls were little more than children themselves who didn't know what tits were for. When one day a john refused to pay up and slapped on of the girls around, she found it soe easy to slit his throat. The family ate well that week. Over time she found she had a skill with poisons, blades and traps, and nobody saw this broken down middleaged mother as a threat. Now her sons go to school. Her daughters have promising marriages in their futures and for a few days of work a month.

As a killer she is cold and meticilous. Often planning her day around as
9am take boys to church for leason.
10am drop off Kara's lute at the repair shop
10:30am pick up Lucina's shoes at the cobblers
11am pick up hand crossbow at "one eyed petes"
12noon "meet" duchess at rose festival
12:30 take boys their lunch. Go to Comment
30 Assassins necromancer
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-03-24 03:09 PM
I think we need more like these. Go to Comment
30 Courtiers
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Political)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-04-17 09:35 PM
useful framework and a handy thing to have, thanks for writing it up Go to Comment
30 Tomes
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2012-02-13 04:33 PM


This one fills me with the joy of writing and word smithery. 



I can only imagine the joy you must of felt when writing such phrases as:



It covers many ursine facts



The two spend the next ten years passionately fornicating, despite all the taboos, hazards, and angry relatives in place. Jombel was a famous four hundred pound eunuch, known for his lascivious tales.



 



An egregious halfling penned this odd journal, which discusses in unecessary detail, what it meant to spend twenty years, living inside maddening walls of 


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