A lone figure strolls out on to a grey field beneath a greyer sky, he vaguely resembles a once great rock icon who is now reduced to a kitsch mascot of hubris and the James Dean principal. The ground before the figure is barren and pock marked. He makes his way between piles of still smoldering conjunctions and broken down adjectives. The air is heavy with the smell of innuendo and in the distance he can hear the sounds of various insults, their motors still idling. He picks up a half empty case of punctuation marks and rifles through it. "Only semi-colons" he says with disgust, but before he can place the case back on the broken earth he sees something. There was something beneath all these broken and misused sentences. Bending down the figure brushes aside some dirt, and finds the remains of some ones good intentions. Examining his find the figure realizes that those intentions had attempted to ride onto this field upon untamed enthusiasm. The evidence is clear though, they-both the intentions and enthusiasm- met their end here. If only there was a place where voices could heard; a Haven for communication and the resolution of opposing ideas. Go to Comment
"The duration does not jive with it being able to survive long enough to become bleached yellow, since the caster will need to sleep sometime and that will stop concentration."
I anticipated this question. I think it depends on the system. In a point based magic system, the PC may just allocate a number of their spell points to maintaining the boat. I wanted to differentiate between actively concentrating on the ship, which was not my intention, and maintaining the ship through a focus of arcane power. How should I rephrase that? Go to Comment
All your questions revolve around system of magic and GM preference. I am not going to get into it anymore then I have.
But you did hit on thing I have wanted to improve about this post, as too spell "Maintaing" I did envision on ongoing pay out for a point system or burning one of the spell slots per day. I wanted to get at that without sounding system specific, but you are the second person to bring this up so I am failing. I changed it once as Manfred had suggested, prior to your post. What do you suggest I say about duration?
Let me start by saying
“vladimir ilyich ulyanov…V.I. F@$&ING LENIN”
Short answer: I was being sarcastic…sort of
At the time this was written, there was another guy posting, essentially trolling, (and I wish I still had his write up-in fact I will send him a PM maybe he gets email alerts and will get back to me) but this guy pointed out a series of events. Anyway what he wrote up was more or less as follows-
First MH responded to two comments I made (one comment I made to his scenes from a modern city-I don’t remember the other one). Then within minutes of responding to my comments on his post he made two rather angry tone comments on my post, he posted to two very negative comments on my two highest rated posts. They were old posts, not on the main page anymore, so he would have had to look them up. Anyway this third party guy, wrote a long write up about it and PMed it to me-Moonhunter and some other people.
I told the guy, his name/handle was non-contrived name (cute-huh), to stop messing with me. Because discussions about what somebody meant on a message board are generally banal. And despite the clear and convincing evidence that Moonhunter was being retaliatory or vindictive, there will be nothing gained by making a big deal about. (You have to own it Moon) Cause it was obvious this third party was just trying to stir up crap and Moonhunter and I agreed to drop it. So my comments that Moon was being vindictive was a statement to the moot nature of such vindictive gestures (whether made by Moon or by contrived name). At worst I have to ignore a vindictive post and at best, I respond to it and it makes my post better. But you are right, it is a distraction from the post I will remove it. Go to Comment
well the post does say flesh and bone corpses? How would you word it and what limitations would you put on it.
As for the spell working too fast, I do remember one time almost getting into a exchange about whether or not is was reasonable for somebody to move 30 ft and cast a fireball spell. Then it hit me....
Finally, I did envision this as a high level spell or expensive spell if you are using a point system. I tried to indicate that with the flavor text describing to obviously powerful individuals who out lived everyone else. So you think the sub would be stronger if I said this can only be cast by high level/power necromancers. Go to Comment
Ah when I submitted this on the Grey Citadel (bracket) strong (bracket) translated to bold but now on Sepia Citadel I have to go back to the old bold ....I don't even want to look at the order of the single cut. still need to change all the s to s. But first I going to go back up my old 3.5 floppies. Go to Comment
I like it, and I would use it. But before I used him I would have to answer some questions about kaide, a least for myself as a GM.
First are there things he will not do? I would imagine betray, his family, country men or those who trust him.
How does he see his victims? My first thought is he dehumanizes them. He kills from a distance and seems to kill people who have not put direct trust into him. He kills strangers who have no reason to trust him. But that is a slippery slope. Society is built on a trust of all those around us, so does Kaide only kill those from outside his country?
What are his ambitions?
How would Kaide respond to his counter part?
What are his other interests beside books, politics and murder? Go to Comment
The image of hero's cowering beneath a land slide that turns out to be a bunch dwarf kids is a great one. That is what bumped this up to a 3 for me, because otherwise this seems like a very esoteric toy. Go to Comment
There is a similar submission to this somewhere on this site in which an NPC has ring (that he can't remove) which attracts monsters/evil and his traveling from town to town like a plague. At least I think it is on this site somewhere, at any rate I used it twice as a GM.
Other possible hooks:
A chance for the PCs to proactive instead of reactive....
The PC are following Asdas and Horlord not specifcly but were tasked by the sovergin to find out what was causing this series of crimes along the frontier. They would move through a couple of towns and find stories of tragedies which correlate with the arrival of Horlord. I used this basic premise as a GM a couple of times, both times my PCs were stumped as to what to do with a passive threat.
Saving Private Horlord...
Horlord's brother (or close relative) is the blacksheep of the family, and has become wealthy and powerful by unethical means. He hires the PCs to free his brother of this item and return Horlord to home community whether Horlord wants it or not. (any harm that befalls Horlord will be 5 time revisited upon the PCs and all that) In this case you may get more into Horlord as a character. Perhaps while he doesn't enjoy his task the weight of the burden may have warped his psyche. His whole self-image may be wrapped up in being the barer of the Asdas and he refuses to give it up and can't believe there is a solution to the problem. Or the PC may find only a temp. fix for the problem, something Horlord will be opposed to, even though he is only a temp. fix.
A bigger threat...
A powerful wiseman (priest or leader) knows that the Asdas is moving through his kingdoms. He hires or commands the PCs to make sure it gets through the Kingdom okay. Thus they have to travel with Horlord and protect him. The adventure could fold into a few of the other plot hooks. At any rate the PCs learn the nature of the Asdas and Horlord. Little do they know that the Asdas is only half of an item that got seperated in the void. The other half landed in this country and wants to rejoin. The other half has the greater intellect while the half Horlord carries has the great power. The PCs are finally confronted by being (perhaps the wiseman) in control of the other half who promises if it is given to him he will destroy it. The joining of the two items would be a much greater threat than either alone. Thus what had been a roving minor threat is now a direct threat on a much greater scale. Go to Comment
Don't those space elves -I can't even recall their name well enough to even look it up*, but their accessories include battle bears, the embassy on Venus with the hyper-sexual ambassador/huntress, a giant organic space ship-have a type of living fabric?
*say what you want about the Drow but at least their creator had the foresight to name them something everybody could remember, spell and pronounce. Go to Comment
I know how hard it is to edit a piece based on your own ideas. The words on the page on the words in you head keep overlapping. Second, I think GM often write things with style better suited to the spoken word in which tone, rhythm and context can make a huge difference. It is a trap I often fall in.
Nice idea, the Orc as Native American's and all, but it is just awfully written. I have posted a marked up version in the "in work" section. Go to Comment
I can't say enough good things about this post, but I will try.
First the tree is wonderful contraption for sci-fi setting as well as fantasy. It is widely believed that early man (Homo Erectus) didn't make the earilest controlled fires, but rather maintained and manipulated it. At at the very least it is believed that fire based industries such as cooking developed before fire building technologies. In order to develop fire dependent industries and cultural behaviors homo erectus and/or early man would have to have obtained fire from some natural occurance such as a lightening strike or a small geological event. These trees would be of limitless use to early human-like cultures. Furthermore the idea that a tree burns as a way of controlling competeing plants is also a wonderful idea, and while we haven't seen it in evolution, I think any a species that could evolve it would be extremely successful. Polynation might be a problem, so perhaps the tree would only do this part of the year or not depend on animal born sex. Anyway the fact that we can talk about these options makes it a wonderful item.
Second the silk, also a wonderful item for gamers. One of the problem with a fantasy setting in which almost everything is flamable and every other spell causes things to go up in flames is that it is impossible to get sense of security. I am sure in a european style setting this material would be the preferred book binding material.
One question when start a flame on flame silk does the silk run out of fuel eventually? Go to Comment
Well some plants spread by budding, but certain trees (many pines for example) excrete a poison into the soil around them that kills other plants. There seeds can then take root in this soil without out competition from other plants. Thus burning the surrounding the trees would be similar approach and would have a benefit the offspring of the trees. Indeed forest fires can often have a positive effect on the propagation of some species such as pines. Pine cones are fairly resistance to damage from forest fires and indeed when caught in a fire they explode spreading seeds. The seeds have also been pushed toward germination by the heat. Forest fires are a regular enough occurence in nature that some trees have evolved to exploit them.
But if the tree reproduces like you say, asexually then wouldn't all Kogish trees be identical (or almost identical)?