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axlerowes's comment on 2016-10-15 10:24 AM

Point of Order, young man I feel the need to point out the Bedazzler existed long before the 1990s.

Nice footnote, as some color to the setting (and for some reason strikes me as icky).

Might they use this technology in prisons, militaries or cults. If you can tie the color threads to the CNS it might make easier to control and monitor the moods of your members and/or prisoners. What is the underground city you made up? The one in the middle east run by a torture cult that uses human suffering to power their technology? I could see those guys putting this stuff into themselves and their prisoners (ie show off how much pain they are really in and push button suffering complete with black light effects and strobes)

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Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-10-15 10:25 AM
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Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Space)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-10-15 10:17 AM
This is a fun idea, nice reminds me of reading info card on the back of a hasbro toy box. In that way the post succeeds as after reading it I'd like to see this incorporated into a story or game. Go to Comment
Options for expanded character backgrounds
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-31 12:28 PM

This is as good (if not better than) as any gaming advice that I've read on the citadel. I admire the way you seek to incorporate the characters' stories directly into the campaign. Would love to play at your table. (Not CM are you?

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The Houri
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-21 10:13 AM

......I guess the author came face to face with one....

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Rumpelstiltskin in the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-21 08:12 PM
Thanks Mag,

i'd love it if you'd try and write some short fiction for the nascent citadel fiction magazine. Go to Comment
Holy City of Enoch
Locations  (Fortification)   (Desert)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-09-22 07:18 PM

This is a neat one. I like the torture fueled technologies...

well I am not literally fond of or excited by the idea, but I like seeing sadistic evil finally having practical applications...

well not that I think we should find practical uses for sadism-seriously Scras all praise for this may put me on a watch list.

There are all also some really great pieces of descriptive writing in here as well. Example: "The walls are metal that sweats, there are damp pools, there are scuttling things, and the constant grind of hum of alien machinery"

Animism and tribalism are also interesting concepts that present one with something that could be expanded upon.

It took me a couple of tries to get this, the structure is a little clunky and it lacks a human touch aka lacks characters or personality. It would be enhanced by more detailed ethnographies of the notable tribes, subcultures or some notable figures.

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Items  (Transports)   (Campaign Defining)
axlerowes's comment on 2017-02-23 09:58 PM
This is a fun idea, nice slice of life piece sort of thing, Go to Comment
Items  (Transports)   (Campaign Defining)
axlerowes's comment on 2017-02-23 09:58 PM
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Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-29 11:01 AM
This an excellent gaming resource article, wish I could play at your table. Go to Comment
Ring of Endless Bottles
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-28 09:46 AM

I like items, such as this one, that might encourage non-linear problem solving. I might attempt to engrave my ring with the "rune of two fisting"

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Fluorescent Alcoholic Fungus
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-25 05:04 PM
The core idea is fun and the write up amusing. I could see these being a pain if you Accidently sat in a pile of these at the tavern and then tried to duck into the shadows with a glowing humming pile of fungus stuck to you rum soaked tunic.

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Pain Technician
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Technical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-12-29 01:31 PM
Basic idea here is a good one. A guild of people trained in torture. People who believe that torturte is useful art, but one that should be treated with caution and respect. This could be a great jumping off point for many ideas or s useful device in story telling. I have never encountered this specific idea before, pain guild.

But the write up feels more like notes on a write up then an actual write up. Facts are tossed in at seemingly random points, there is little structure, a poorly developed voice and little attempt at either world building, story telling or gaming integration. Focusing the above facts on one or more of those three things would make for stronger post.

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Twin Eye Spectacles
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-25 09:55 AM
Solid, I could see this being used to coordinate actions so that you can split the party without splitting the party. Or alternatively you could have a bit of a horror yarn with these: seeing somebody you care about face their doom without being able to intervene. Or alternatively you have a bit of detective yarn. The wearer of the spectacles could wittness a crime, but only get a few details: an oval shaped door painted yellow, a dagger with a rams headed hilt and a figure with long blonde hair present at the scene of the crime. Go to Comment
Life in this So Called Cosmic Era
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-08-17 09:08 PM

This is a good article, makes me want to write some Okelai about a cosmic era family. I love the shout you gave to Gengis Khan...the most successful human male since Adam.

This is really well written, the voice is solid, the asides are kept as asides...really nice article, nice format, and most importantly fun ideas.

Three Questions;

1) Cybertronians: how does family work with them, do they have souls (should I be worried about Starscream's ghost and can Arcee and Springer have a babybot?)

2) Value of children. I read a lot of history, and one the conceits that most historians make is the we must assume that people loved their children in the past just as much as we do now. While I am sure this is true, I think this looks over the fact that I think modern western society may value children more than historical western society. We rarely hear about "bad children", but we do hear about bad parents. Question, how much does the society-full recognition that their are different cultures in the CE-value children. Where do they put the weight of family responsibility?

3) Education and Career Choices: I may have missed this, but does the Monolithic and personalized education program attempt to respond to the perceived economic needs of the society. For example if the society needs welders (not likely in the CE, but bare with me) do the VR teachers try to push more kids to technical programs and away from academic or creative careers. How much choice does one have in choosing a career assuming you have the talent? How good are the educators at predicting and directing career path based on the pyscho/genetic analysis of the student?

I didn't proof read this, I am sorry.

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Secret Wizard Bases with Your Peace of Mind in Mind
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-09-23 05:55 PM
A couple made me snicker, I am a sucker for anything that mocks gaming tropes. Go to Comment
25 Things to Find in a Nook, Alcove, or Grotto
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-05-29 11:46 PM

Ah! That had a refreshingly classic feel. Made me want to dig up some graph paper, pencils and a copy of the monster manual. I enjoyed the none-to-serious tone and I liked the straight-taking unaffected voice.

Enterolans, nice one, I hope the PCs packed a lawn gnome*.

Oubliette has always been a disappointing word for me. It is just a hole in the ground! But the way Oubilette rolls of the tounge makes me think magical puzzle box, chamber of secrets or torture room. What is the etymology on that one?

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25 Things to Find in a Nook, Alcove, or Grotto
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-05-30 01:18 PM
Caught in the Vortex
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-09-01 01:28 PM
This is a nice piece of prose and it does a damn excellent job of giving is the perspective of the vortex. The first few paragraphs really put me in the vortex. I wonder if this was what it was like for Dr. Manhattan when he trying to assemble his body after the accident? I agree with valadaar, it lacks an ending or a pay-off. Go to Comment
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
axlerowes's comment on 2016-05-10 08:21 PM
Really great idea 5/5. I like the ideas and the idea that archeology residents go through withdraw. Philosophy in a bubble like the 5Ss is also something I enjoy reading.

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The PCs are sent with a diplomat to another country to protect him and do his bidding. There may be some espionage, rescuing, downright bullying, etc. Could make a nice medieval, special operations background.

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