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Quill of Fine Writing
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-27 08:35 PM
Good solid idea. I'd love some more details, but it's a good start with what it has. Not every post has to be a full library! Go to Comment
The Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-24 10:14 AM
I like the writing style, but this is incomplete to me.. like an appetizer with no main course.

Cube is very cool, if that's what I am thinking about (minor spoiler) the main premise is that people are put inside of a room thats like a box and has doors on all 6 walls. There is a large array of these boxes all linked, and together they make a giant cube. It is like a Rubik's (sp?) cube, and like that item, it moves, so you can get chopped if you are between when it moves.. make every room have a little special something (some monsters, traps, a room where no magic, or an antigrav room, etc.) and you've got a nice little dungeon. And because it moves, going back through a door is not guaranteed to bring you where you started. Go to Comment
Honest Wrekk
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-20 10:05 AM
I like the story, and I think it's just sort of meant to be a cute idea/play on words/seed. Go to Comment
Doom Tea
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-12-03 12:39 AM
It's a good post, with some strong parts and some weak parts. THe obvious question is why the title? Any time people are left with that question, you know you should have answered the question. Other than that it's a normal and good post I would say. Go to Comment
Carpenter's Ring
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-27 08:12 PM
Great item, I love it. Mundane, but very useful if you're clever. Go to Comment
Whiffle Accelerator
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-13 06:31 AM
Now all of my demon-fighting halflings will have a much more effective weapon. Wait. Go to Comment
Steam Gun
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-30 09:51 PM
I'm not overly into steampunk, but this idea is written up very well. Go to Comment
Thunderstrike
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-17 11:53 PM
There is some description of the history, but a richer description of its history and of the device would be nice. It's a pretty standard item, so you need to inject more creativity into ths post I think. Go to Comment
Cold's Will
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-29 09:30 PM
Clever item. Simple, but very appealing. Go to Comment
Mea, Dea. Fea
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-10 04:15 PM
It's a simple idea, but I like it a lot. I wonder if your GM ever read the DarkSun Tribe Of One series ... the main character has multiple personalities that he is not initially aware of, but some of which take over when he is in stress, and then he can not remember what happens, etc. I liked it (but I'm easy to please with the fantasy books). Go to Comment
Bloody Vines
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-15 10:49 PM
I like it and I like the two notes at the end. Maybe its not completely original, but honestly almost all the posts here are taken from/strongly inspired by something else... it's how we come up with ideas. Go to Comment
Itching Dust
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-12-03 12:34 AM
It's not a bad idea... but, it does exist in real life pretty much... and you need to give way more details to get a higher score. Go to Comment
King Inturt's Chain
Items  (Armor)   (Non-Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-15 12:43 AM
I like the description of the armor, but you should give more rich detail of the back story and the motivations. Go to Comment
Ole Faithful
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-27 08:32 PM
What do the initials O.N. mean? That seems like an important detail. This is a good item, but it needs more background. Go to Comment
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