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Mech-Undead
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Victor-N's comment on 2008-11-07 01:09 AM
I'm not really a fan of steampunk, but I can see these things marching on civilization and its mildly terrifying. They definitely fit the feel of steampunk and like Gorgon said, as long as the technology exists in a game they could be easily adaptable. Go to Comment
The Twelve
Locations  (Ruins)   (Plains)
Victor-N's comment on 2008-11-07 01:03 AM
If it were easier to adapt to a game perhaps I would like it more, but I do not want to detract from how cool of an idea it is. Any other remark I would have has been said. I like this idea. Go to Comment
The Timed Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-10 07:49 PM
Everything I can think of has already been said, nice golem. Go to Comment
Silverwood Fighting Knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-09 02:31 AM
Since everyone else is holding off on voting, so shall I. I do like that it is a racial weapon, though I would like to see a write up for the race they belong to. I see you are intending on doing so, so I will just wait and hope you link the two for maximum enjoyment. Go to Comment
Silverwood Fighting Knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-10 07:48 PM
Well, if people are going to vote, so shall I. I like mundane items as much as any other items and these seems to be an ingredient to the flavor of elves in Railus' game world. I would love to read more about them, especially if its a new take on elves. Go to Comment
Copper Mantis
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-09 02:28 AM
This is amusing to me. I don't care if the animated token thing is overdone, I like how it is used in combination with a quirky history. Go to Comment
Tongue of Demons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-07 12:00 PM
I haven't seen many whips around, and this one seems fairly powerful, but from what I can tell its the only one that exists so that can be the balance. I like the concept. The back story seems to provide a fair amount of intrigue as well. Lets hear more about Cedir, but this is a nice item. Go to Comment
The Abandoned Temple
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-09 02:29 AM
Solid. Concise. Go to Comment
Bargorl, The Ringmaster
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-09 02:32 AM
Everything I can think of has been said, so here's a vote. Go to Comment
Fate
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-04 02:38 PM
I like this as a follow-up to Bloodmail. I like the roleplaying possibilities and like Valadaar said, the teaser text is a little misleading (but that is the only downside to the post in my oppinion.) Excellent sub. Go to Comment
Arrow of Missile Attraction
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 07:15 PM
I like the back story. Nice item. Go to Comment
The Towers of Wisdom
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 06:10 PM
I agree with siren. unpolished, more of a template than a finished work. Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:50 PM
I agree with penguin; funny, cool and very original. I like it. Go to Comment
Bloodmail
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-03 09:29 PM
Its a little different take on how vampires are created, I would love to read more about the other rings and the creator. The story intrigues me a bit. Well done. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:49 PM
Kind of creepy when I put more thought into this, well done for creeping me out. Go to Comment
Of Pines and Roses
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:42 PM
I like it and I think I will alter it ever so slightly to be an opener to my next campaign. Very nice job. Go to Comment
The Mausoleum
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:52 PM
I am definately using this is my next game. It fits the feel I am going for perfectly. Go to Comment
Star of the Iron Spikes
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:44 PM
I like using some of the less-than-popular weapons, and weapons from Iron Spikes seem worthy. Go to Comment
Blade of the Redeemer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:39 PM
I like it. I agree that undead should not be mindless. Go to Comment
The Necronautilus
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-03 09:40 PM
Nice concept. The assassination plot-line i mentioned in your scroll comment has to do with necromancy, the flavor this would add is excellent. well done yet again. Go to Comment
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       By: ephemeralstability

The Forest of Throck:

Throck forest is divided into three parts: a region of twisted black magic, which is dark and hemmed in with the legions of sable pine. This is Spindel, and is occupied by the hideous Ettercaps and their spider-pets. The second area is the chaotic elfin-wood, where the druids work their wyrd magic amongst the oaks. The last part is Udnalor, the home of the gnomes. Finding themselves surrounded by these chaotic forces they dwell as quietly as possible beneath the surface. Their culture is a fascinating one to visit, and in the next few miscellaneous ideas, I shall examine the ways and customs of THE GNOMES OF UDNALOR, with a view to role-playing them.

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