Kingmaker has been submitted. I know the first two have seemed fairly stereotypical, but some fun surprises await. Trust me.
First thing first. Organization and grammar. Your submission is difficult to read due to your formatting and grammar mistakes. I'd suggest breaking it up into smaller paragraphs, and carefully looking at how your sentences are composed.
Maybe someday I'll have an idea or a use for these to throw into the mix. We can hope!
I'm sure such blades would be rare- and correspondingly hard to defend against without proper knowledge.
Plot Hook
I am Justice:
A vigiliante wearing a strange set of spectacles has plunged criminal and innocent alike into terror as his zealotry for the forces of good endangers all.
I disagree totally and completely with Cheka's aversion to having the stats included at the end. As a DM, I enjoy seeing the implementation of mechanics, and there's a great deal of information to be found within the mechanics you've provided. I don't run pathfinder, but the information is still useful and completes my understanding of the item. I suspect you'll encounter a great deal of hostility from most of the citadel- you might want to throw them a bone and generalize some of the information in a less mechanical light by making a section that discusses the weapon in a system-free way.
I'm sure many players will feel that these are cursed, and I can't imagine much use for them within a campaign outside of their detrimental effects in battle.
GOOGLE DOCS, GOOGLE DOCS, GOOGLE DOCS.
Seriously, Google Documents is amazing. It has been a godsend for my online campaign. Any of my players can open and edit their Campaign Google Doc, and they've used it for session summaries, listing their inventories, quests, rumors (which I actually post to twitter for them to find), and so on. I even have a few documents that only a few players can see so I can dynamically introduce them new information as the campaign progresses.
I feel there should be a spell to instantly create a map, based on what the caster sees. Then, using this map which only applies for a short time (up to two hours, perhaps), the caster can then cast using the map. In this way, cartomancers aren't entirely left behind in combat.
I can picture a cartomancer drawing their own battlemap in the midst of a battle and using that to direct their magic :)
Plots (Crisis) (Campaign)
Anyone have any suggestions for better sword names? That was the biggest stumbling block I had. (Wrathbringer and Kingmaker are finalized; however.)
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