Moon Hunter, thank you for the advice and for the mark.
I didn't expect such a high one - a very pleasant surprise!
By the way, I gave this module to my players and they liked it. The most interesting was to watch them drawing caverns and the dungeoin itself! Three of the six were doing it in turn and three times they had to re-draw the main dungeon level. :) Go to Comment
I liked the idea of another demon in town.
Suppose, that demon was made up by the drunkards and the real one (with his devoted followers) gets really angry. In this case the situation may turn such a way: first the town is filled with rumors and those brothers feel like heroes. Then comes the priest - they successfully frighten him and begin playing those little tricks to amuse themselves with the folks' panic.
At this stage PCs may got interested and perhaps make some night sorties to learn the truth. But then the real demon comes onto the stage. He begins a bloody hunting for the brothers and the widow. Their death can be really terrible and ritual and PCs may even become witnesses of it if they are going out at night.
So, when only one is still alive and hiding. He may come to the PCs asking for help. He tells them the truth about their fake and about the real bad things that are now happening. He is almost mad because of constant chase - it may be dreams, noises, shadows of some pursuers etc. And now it's for PCs to investigate the whole story.
That priest might help them or turn out to be a follower of the real demon (then he was not frightened of course, just pretending and finding out). If PCs are not good at thinking and planning DM can "panish" them - they may be a second late for saving the last survivor, the priest fled, the demon is not showing himself - so, all the clues are lost, the quest is lost.
I think sometimes it's a good lesson for PCs to lose. But I'm not for killing them, so this would be a nice variant.
I'm going to use it in one of my nearest sessions. A great idea indeed! Go to Comment