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Magic System based on Fengshui
Systems  (Mystical)   (Historical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-30 12:52 PM
I didn't see it preupdate but I can definitely see how you actively responded to the comments. This is a nicely formatted and pretty thorough sub. Some of the signature spells are pretty hardcore, but I guess that is why they are SS!

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Vartanadel
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-15 06:15 AM
This was my new test edit post. If everything in the citadel was going to be written over, I wanted it to be better than the graphic upload test. So those ddd were leftover from my test editing phase.

And I do want to spend more time on this. I needed a quick sub to test the submission scripts so used this. There are at least two more subs coming associated with this. When I bring those out, I will update this to give it a little more flavor. Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-03 11:18 AM
You need to take the ideas and throw them up as an idea comment instead of down here! Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-03 12:07 PM
Good Golly. If its teeth are made to tear flesh and it is 20 feet tall, I am loathe to meet what it eats vs. gulps down. Go to Comment
Argnid
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-10 03:15 PM
Tentacles! Outstanding.

Is it bad that I pictured the armor more like a garbage bag type? Kill the creature, remove the teeth and guts, step into it and cut out holes for arms. :)

Love it!!!!

Almost want to issue a challenge to see what others could describe about the picture. I feel the picture is the centerpiece allowing many interpretations. Great job on it!! Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-30 01:15 PM
An order of blind monks? That got me curious. Decent sub with all the fix'ns. Go to Comment
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-28 01:04 PM
Though shalt go over 100 words if you must to make the submission read like something readable in a readability reading type of readery way.

Sacrifice the 100 word challenge before you sacrifice clarity!

If you left a lot unexplained I think you just dump the 100 word attempt and make it a normal sub, even if it is short. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-11 03:23 PM
That was pre-graphic. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-11 03:25 PM
Fun gift for grandma! Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 06:56 AM
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Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 07:50 AM
I was supposed to get those in her will! Go to Comment
The Chain Arrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 08:25 AM
So it goes all the way through the enemy to continue its hunt? Ouch. Go to Comment
Kalimon - An Overview
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 01:05 PM
Good overview. I am still waiting on a post that goes deeper into the magic and how it works. Got me very curious about it. Go to Comment
The Highway
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 03:23 PM
Holy crap, is that Stephen King? What a wickedly insane idea!

I am a rare person to vote so high but when a sub grips me, it grips me. I want to read the book NOW. Go to Comment
The Hidden Library Of King Hiram Blackburn
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 03:27 PM
I can instantly see the use of this and, I must admit, the organization of how to find the information was what intrigued me. That is definitely a great resource! Go to Comment
Flowers Of Innocence
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 12:37 PM
I added the Oekaki graphic to help identify these subs a little better. Go to Comment
Flowers Of Innocence
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 03:33 PM
I think it is a fun idea. The idea of it entrapping the victims and attracting the enemy to kill them is pretty darn neat. Go to Comment
30 Devils
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 03:37 PM
Holy crap. I almost feel guilty that this is a 30 when each one could definitely stand on its own. What a great list. Excited to see this one continue!!
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Elementallion
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 12:57 PM
Oh.

I really like this idea of the magic being absorbed (kinda) by living creatures, driving them mad and creating instability in the magic around them.

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Finding The Kings Arms
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-02 01:11 PM
At first I thought of the pranks that military or colleges play on each other; steal each others mascots or guidon amongst other things. Then the guards being upended sort of ruined that thought and upped the maliciousness of the entire thing.

If they guards could be that easily subdued and the castle that easily robbed, this king would most likely be mocked and nobody would fear him or his armies. Ripe for takeover. He may have to do a show of force just to get some respect back and prove he isn't that defenseless.

The kid one, without some crazy magic, seems a bit too far fetched to be likely but I do love the idea of the pacifist shaman!

A very original idea and one that definitely contains some great inspiration! Go to Comment
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