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The Chain Arrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 07:25 AM
So it goes all the way through the enemy to continue its hunt? Ouch. Go to Comment
Kalimon - An Overview
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 12:05 PM
Good overview. I am still waiting on a post that goes deeper into the magic and how it works. Got me very curious about it. Go to Comment
The Highway
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 02:23 PM
Holy crap, is that Stephen King? What a wickedly insane idea!

I am a rare person to vote so high but when a sub grips me, it grips me. I want to read the book NOW. Go to Comment
The Hidden Library Of King Hiram Blackburn
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 02:27 PM
I can instantly see the use of this and, I must admit, the organization of how to find the information was what intrigued me. That is definitely a great resource! Go to Comment
Flowers Of Innocence
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 11:37 AM
I added the Oekaki graphic to help identify these subs a little better. Go to Comment
Flowers Of Innocence
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 02:33 PM
I think it is a fun idea. The idea of it entrapping the victims and attracting the enemy to kill them is pretty darn neat. Go to Comment
30 Devils
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 02:37 PM
Holy crap. I almost feel guilty that this is a 30 when each one could definitely stand on its own. What a great list. Excited to see this one continue!!
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Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 11:57 AM

I really like this idea of the magic being absorbed (kinda) by living creatures, driving them mad and creating instability in the magic around them.

We wantssss more....precioussss Go to Comment
Finding The Kings Arms
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-02 12:11 PM
At first I thought of the pranks that military or colleges play on each other; steal each others mascots or guidon amongst other things. Then the guards being upended sort of ruined that thought and upped the maliciousness of the entire thing.

If they guards could be that easily subdued and the castle that easily robbed, this king would most likely be mocked and nobody would fear him or his armies. Ripe for takeover. He may have to do a show of force just to get some respect back and prove he isn't that defenseless.

The kid one, without some crazy magic, seems a bit too far fetched to be likely but I do love the idea of the pacifist shaman!

A very original idea and one that definitely contains some great inspiration! Go to Comment
The Oracle Of Ein
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-02 12:14 PM
Should throw the 100 word challenge freetext on it to identify it as such so it gets the proper review. Go to Comment
The Oracle Of Ein
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-06 12:01 PM
A decent quick one. Go to Comment
A Collection Of Friday Freetexts
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-01 01:33 AM
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-20 05:46 AM
Update: Updated formatting. Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-20 05:57 AM
Update: Updated some formatting. Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-23 01:35 PM
I don't like the path this conversation is taking.

I didn't take axle's comments to be too accusatory. More that he fixed the issue and was requesting a comment on the actual content vs. his spelling. (From my recollection, he admitted posting this while joining the Drunk Guild). Don't correct me if I am wrong axle. ;)

The interwebs does not transfer context or the intention of the comments very well. Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-23 06:16 PM
Now THAT is funny! Go to Comment
The Knife of Eternity
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-14 06:31 AM
Wow. That is some powerful magic without much defense against it! Would the person instantly age or would it be a slow, cumulative affect that has the chance of being stopped somehow?

I generally don't like instant kill weapons, if you scaled it down a lot, say dump the centuries and take it to years, it would be more fun to use and more fun in gaming. Having the possibility of it going up or down would also be pretty sweet. The fountain of youth with the danger of aging too.

Either way, I think you concentrate too much on the aging and not enough on the weapon and the actual use of it.

I do love the idea of it causing the birth of a dragon though, that is an outstanding idea!

Going to withhold my vote as well because this needs some work, but there are quite a few good ideas in there!

Congrats on your first submission!! Go to Comment
Pendulum Puzzle
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-14 06:43 AM
With me being dumb and all (and while I enjoy riddles in game, when I read them I am impatient and want the answer almost immediately) I would love if you told us the time that each one describes with a short explanation, if not obvious.

With a group, I think they would be able to figure this out with a little skill which is about perfect for a dungeon crawl. I like it! Go to Comment
Commercial Armor
Items  (Materials)   (Combat)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-13 04:43 AM
The only part that confused me (and it is probably just me) is when you say armor defeating weapons are its weakness and then say "critical threshold effectively doubled". This, to me, reads that it is twice as hard for armor piercing bullets to get through it. It seems like you meant to say that the commercial armor max puncture threshold for piercing bullets is half of their max? Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-09 10:44 AM
Pluses for originality and the name Whrrrm which is awesomely mechanical sounding and just fits perfect.

Intro gives us a small taste and the description, while limited, is plenty to get the idea across. Some things I want more details and such, but for this one, I think it was enough.

A DM's deus ex machina (literally) for resolving certain incidents. Go to Comment
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