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A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 01:53 AM
Update: Did a reread and edit. Not sure if I made it better or worse though. :) Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 08:26 AM
Sounds like an outstanding idea for a huge line of plots. All leading up to the ghosting of another noble house. I am having some fun thinking about this place and you idea is brilliant! Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 08:28 AM
I wouldn't disagree. I have done some briefings on it and the country and their history have fascinated me. Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 09:56 AM
I loved the idea of having to beach himself. The idea of a large shark on the beach is one thing, then the thought of a man ripping through its skin and walking away is almost priceless! Go to Comment
30 Plumes in the Distance
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-05 12:19 PM
It was probably a bit of a struggle to come up with 30 but this idea for a 30 is outstanding, Just by reading the title it forces you to think of a scenerio.

Thumbs up for originality and giving us pause to think of putting a plume of smoke in our own game! Go to Comment
Calypso of Caspia
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-30 11:22 AM
I think I got here after the edits and I absolutely loved it. The brilliant deception and rise to power was the type of tale you love to read in a book. Reminds me minimally of Kvothe and such where he simply outsmarts everybody.

The things the others pointed out seemed to be cleaned up very well because I especially enjoyed the idea of their part of the city growing important through his actions.

It wasn't clear till the end that he could actually do magic. I was actually a little surprised that he could actually cast and that took away from it a little bit.

Overall, loved it. Great NPC! Go to Comment
Lich Scroll
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Villanous)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-30 12:54 PM
Awesome origin. Makes me sad that Calypso died doing this though. Go to Comment
The Kingmakers: The Locust
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Political)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-28 09:17 AM
I have read these half hazardously over time and always planned to start at the beginning and work my way through them.

Just wanted to say that I love that you are sharing your campaign even though I don't comment on all of them! Go to Comment
Magic System based on Fengshui
Systems  (Mystical)   (Historical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-30 11:52 AM
I didn't see it preupdate but I can definitely see how you actively responded to the comments. This is a nicely formatted and pretty thorough sub. Some of the signature spells are pretty hardcore, but I guess that is why they are SS!

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Vartanadel
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-15 05:15 AM
This was my new test edit post. If everything in the citadel was going to be written over, I wanted it to be better than the graphic upload test. So those ddd were leftover from my test editing phase.

And I do want to spend more time on this. I needed a quick sub to test the submission scripts so used this. There are at least two more subs coming associated with this. When I bring those out, I will update this to give it a little more flavor. Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-03 10:18 AM
You need to take the ideas and throw them up as an idea comment instead of down here! Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-03 11:07 AM
Good Golly. If its teeth are made to tear flesh and it is 20 feet tall, I am loathe to meet what it eats vs. gulps down. Go to Comment
Argnid
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-10 02:15 PM
Tentacles! Outstanding.

Is it bad that I pictured the armor more like a garbage bag type? Kill the creature, remove the teeth and guts, step into it and cut out holes for arms. :)

Love it!!!!

Almost want to issue a challenge to see what others could describe about the picture. I feel the picture is the centerpiece allowing many interpretations. Great job on it!! Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-30 12:15 PM
An order of blind monks? That got me curious. Decent sub with all the fix'ns. Go to Comment
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-28 12:04 PM
Though shalt go over 100 words if you must to make the submission read like something readable in a readability reading type of readery way.

Sacrifice the 100 word challenge before you sacrifice clarity!

If you left a lot unexplained I think you just dump the 100 word attempt and make it a normal sub, even if it is short. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-11 02:23 PM
That was pre-graphic. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-11 02:25 PM
Fun gift for grandma! Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 05:56 AM
If you have issues with the usability of the site, or anything else off-topic, please take it to the forums and leave these comments to discussing the actual sub.

The previous 4 comments will self-destruct in 24 hours. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 06:50 AM
I was supposed to get those in her will! Go to Comment
The Chain Arrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2013-05-12 07:25 AM
So it goes all the way through the enemy to continue its hunt? Ouch. Go to Comment
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