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Lawbane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-07 10:45 PM


Was wondering why there weren't any comments yet. I fear they are being nice right now. Give it a good read. Maybe read it out loud. Many ideas bounce in and out and I had difficulty following the third paragraph. I understand what you are saying in that first sentence...but you aren't saying it.



I don't really see any need for the rape/sex parts at all and it threw the entire sub off for me. What PC party is going to do that? Maybe rape is used as a long ago back story but I have yet to see it used in a game...if I did, well, that would just be weird. I would change that to something more entertaining or difficult to resist. Maybe simply that he always had a deep respect for women so he would be gentlemanny polite to females and that continued in the knife.



Needs a bit of work before you get some attention on it I think.


I do like the premise. Good backstory that holds the item up and all that. Will be good!

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Lawbane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-18 02:57 AM


Is this the same post? Welly, welly. Say Brother, viddy a kind bit of the old ultraviolence on the chelloveck.



My keeshkas said a 5 and I am sticking to it. Love it!


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CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-15 02:07 PM


Going to be fine tuning this to make it a little more useful. I think we can get much more organized and useful with some of this!


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CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-16 01:01 AM


It is a wiki so feel free to mess around with it a little bit and put up some other demonstrations. If you want something changed, just let me know. Figure this would be a decent start. Much better than the old anyway.


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CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-16 02:41 PM
Oh dear. Cursory glance. Is this going to spur a redesign? Go to Comment
CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-16 10:43 PM
Ah, now I get it. No...I grabbed a few css demo templates off some random sites and mixed those. But now that I recognize the blockquote...makes perfect sense to me. No, haven't used it...probably should have, but didn't. :) Go to Comment
CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-17 12:59 PM
Bold, got it! Go to Comment
CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2011-06-12 04:01 AM

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Table Header 1Table Header 2Table Header 3
Division 1 Division 2 Division 3
Division 1 Division 2 Division 3
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Pocket Realms of The Sundered World
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2011-06-02 10:35 AM


Not sure why there aren't any comments but I couldn't take seeing it without anymore. 



Fairly basic creationalism with all the race stereotypes. That might be why the lack of comments. I will admit I haven't dug into the others but this just doesn't draw me in. There is no hook or uniqueness that really sets it apart and it makes it difficult to comment on.



I am certain once I dig farther there will be those things, but this main post doesn't draw me in.


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The Mask that Grins and Lies
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-14 12:33 PM


Yeah, basically...I want more!!



You had me hooked. Awesome intro and great mood set. Now I just want a few details on how you invision it and how to use. As is I can definitely do some things with it but I want your spin. On target, just want to be spoon fed a little bit more! Feed me more blood!


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The Undead Knights of Knonii
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-14 12:51 PM


Random thoughts: Wonder why the god didn't come back and save his loyal priests or put some kind of order against their killing. But it could always be said that the god was in a juvenile temper and made his curse in haste...but then that is not a very worthy god if he didn't try to correct his mistakes. Followers dying might not be the greatest propaganda.



As for getting new bodies for their armor, would think they might want to shed the body once it started getting hard to manage (falling apart). It would make sense, if they are intelligent, that they would place themselves (armor) somewhere they will be picked up and utilized in a rather quick manner. So was thinking that they would have some means to throw off the body away from the armor. Finding empty armor might be more appealing to some than one with random body parts in it....maybe. :) Otherwise I would work the buddy system. Need a new body, go get one and have a friend help put you on it. 



Fun idea!


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Romero Coultier
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-10 01:37 PM


You all know how I am a short post kinda guy but I was wrapped up in this to the end.



I want more!


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Everything I learned about life from role-playing games
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-01 12:18 AM


Great list! :)


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Everything I learned about life from role-playing games
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-01 12:34 AM


#22 Just because it is called The Sword of Dragon Slaying doesn't mean it will.



#23 Don't challenge a GMs ruling with a rule. GM is always right and he will prove it to you the hard way if you wish.



#24 Never trust that the dead are dead...even when they are burned and their ashes are scattered to the four winds.



#25 Magic doesn't play favorites. Get out of the way of anybody trying a new spell or testing a new item.

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Everything I learned about life from role-playing games
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-15 01:54 AM


Still funny and I want more!


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My Favorite Characters
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2006-05-06 07:54 PM
Grothar: Dwarf

Probably because I played him the longest. A miserly, gold loving mercenary dwarf that worshipped the god of chance. He was so infatuated with money that of course he kept track of party treasure...which was never as much as the others thought it was when they gave it to him in the first place.

Once, they had a good run with an earth elemental that just dumped a load of gold on them for helping it with a crisis. Danger was still in the area and everybody was in a hurry to leave but Grothar would not leave till he saw how much they pulled in. A day later Grothar had the tally and his companions had fought off dozens of the enemies they had hoped to evade.

This miserly bit was constantly contradicted by his interpretation of his god of chance. In drunken stupers it was typical for him to wander drunk out of the bar, continue to wander out into the surrounding woods and bury the parties treasure in a random area and then leave in homage to his god. In the morning he would wake up, vaguely remember what he did and ina flurry of yelling and crying storm out to try and find it again. It would be a day of struggle for everybody trying to track and find where the treasure was buried.Chance was NEVER on their side when they tried to find it and I forgot how I convinced them to continue to allow Grothar to carry most of the money. Just had a lot of fun with him. Go to Comment
My Favorite Characters
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2006-05-07 11:32 AM
I don't think there will be any complaints about submissions for each type. If you can pick your top couple, I am sure that is doable. Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-21 01:27 PM
I nearly spit my drink a half dozen times....and haven't really read the entire sub. In my current state it got too complex once the second clergy was added. I need to print and study it, but the bastard running this site has no "print" button so what the hell!?

Still, I think this is a fantastic idea and probably due a change to the wiki since the deadbeat webmaster finally made that at least.

No vote because I need time to figure it out. However I KNOW it is a HoH post so done! Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-09 10:54 AM
Directions I see that this could go:

1) The unfaithful "chosen one" stole the original and replaced it with the more powerful fake...which was also stolen. So there are two items missing. However, it took the "chosen one" many attempts to get to the point where he could truly make a good duplicate that could stand the scrutiny and be accepted as real. This stash of duplicates were not destroyed and were found. Their are upwards of 10 of them, each being sold on the black market as the "true" item. They were dispersed quickly and expertly as a know scam by the Criminal's son to make finding the real one even more difficult to find. All these items have different levels of power since even a "chosen one" mistake can be powerful.

2) The unfaithful "chose one" is long gone from the city with the original. By the time he is done with it, it will be much more powerful than anything left behind.

3) Almost any of the fake items made by the "chosen one" are strong enough to cure the Criminal Lord. The PCs will find that the "chosen one" is gone from the city and that word will get to the son. It would be suspicious if he couldn't get his hands on one of the items so he is able to find one and claim that it is the "real" one. He knows it is one of the random duplicates and expects his father to die when they use it on him. Much to his surprise, the junk item actually does heal his father. Go to Comment
Constellation Myth
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Defining)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-12 10:22 AM
Plug and play constellations and legends. Outstandingly useful! Something that should be used in any campaign just for that extra flavor while you spend yet another night of "I will take first watch." Now you can throw some interesting details in there about the sky and the legends that surround it. I love the thought of that opportunity. Go to Comment
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