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Adam Smith
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-20 03:12 PM
I loved the intro story but then the actual person kinda fell flat for me. He is insanely difficult to use and the plot suggestions are very specific and require a lot of set-up. I like the mood it sets up A LOT and would enjoy it much more as fiction in its current state and would love to read a bit more about the crimes. Go to Comment
Rune Lore
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:28 AM
Good solid start to a magic system. Would be even more awesome if you had a graphic with the different symbols on it to use as reference. But a somewhat normal rune system.

Where does the magic for the runes come from would be good to see. And can anybody draw the runes once they know them? This isn't that complex so not hard to memorize. What keeps others from using it, what needs to be done to complete the rune to make it active...stuff like that.

Excellent start though! Go to Comment
Takamoto's Dogs
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-16 01:33 PM
Amusing. Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 01:45 PM
Four shure! Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 01:46 PM
This was one of those ideas I wanted to write to get it out of my head but wasn't enthralled enough with it to give it the full treatment. I made a conscience decision to stop worrying about things and just do it! I will start posting more and not worry about being Scras. ;) Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 01:58 PM
Update: Forgot to add Strolenati Guild to my freetext. It is NOT cheating damnit! Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-21 02:57 PM
Those are outstanding questions that I have no intention of answering. ;)

1) No magic inherent in the bush. Given to it by those that use it.

2) You have to touch the bush and only the bush. Roots are useless as they are only small branches whereas the bush is the central nervous system so to speak.

3) There are empty spots between the bushes. (good plot point I didn't think of earlier) Those that understand the bushes and know the pattern of the roots in that area can use the dead zone between the bush's roots to move unnoticed. Not sure that you couldn't replant. Didn't think of that part, interesting.

It maintains a distance just cause. I was of the thinking that the roots are so invasive that there wouldn't be room for another to overlap so they avoid each other after a root probe identifies another plant. They would react somehow with each other and just naturally not grow any more in that direction. Go to Comment
Avian Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-10 02:57 PM
Release it to the Citadel!! Go to Comment
Avian Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-26 01:55 PM
I do love this idea. Great set of arrows to start and somebody who uses this idea in a game, the options are just endless. Go to Comment
7 Things to Run or Hide From
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-10 01:14 PM

Good start, good idea. Just need to power through it!

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7 Things to Run or Hide From
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-10 02:46 PM
Psst. Turn it into a wiki and donate it to the Horde. :)

Plus I need some subs to test that format to see if works. Go to Comment
Ko Girls
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (Area)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-07 11:03 AM
Could only think of Akiabara x 100. Go to Comment
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-04 02:52 PM
Tower of Forbidden Cats. LOL

"All of our agent-retrievers can perform all of these stroke-passwords in merely twenty minutes of petting a cat, in order to determine if it is indeed a normal cat or a powerful tome of destruction."

Is it a cat or a powerful tome of destructions. Here kitty kitty kitty. HA!

This was a great post and had me smiling all the way through it. Outstanding idea!! Go to Comment
Holoke Carter
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 05:03 AM
Creepy with an outstanding background on the change. Really liked the ability to adjust her poison. Makes so much sense. Plot hooks are fun as well. Go to Comment
Tumble Melon Tree
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:53 AM
This is great. They will approach them and roll around the feet like a cat looking for a scratch is a fantastic visual. I loved this idea and think it would be great fun to use! Go to Comment
Anophelite, Male
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:47 AM
A boost for all the awesome plot hooks. What a crazy twist to the mosquito and doppleganger!! Really fun! Go to Comment
Andrew 12
NPCs  (Minor)   (Technical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:34 AM
My emotions are confused by this post. I find the background and reasoning gruesome and I am undecided if I think that this was a proper punishment for him or enough for the families. Maybe that is much of the point. Whacked is a good word I think. Go to Comment
Plague Dragons of Tameltyne
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:19 AM
Good apocalyptic cycle for a world to have to go through. One of those ticking timers you can put on a campaign or story that forces action before the coming of The Plague.

Like it for that aspect especially! Go to Comment
The Electric Chapel
Locations  (Establishment)   (CyberSpace)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:15 AM
Great atmosphere. Gives me a Gibson vibe with all the cool tech speak. I need to go back and read some of you other stuff! Go to Comment
Soul Gazing
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 04:09 AM
Hmm. I think you waste a lot of your 100 words. The first sentence is unnecessary, all that is inherit in it being a submission, same with next intro directly following it and telling us it is unlike others. Just jump into it and give us more.

As it is, with the word restrictions, it still doesn't give us much on how it works, accuracy, how it is interpreted. Not sure how to use it still... Go to Comment
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