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Clypse
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Strolen's comment on 2012-06-27 02:18 PM
With the reformat it is definitely easier to find and read! Good work with the changes. I must still agree it might be a little too heavy on the information but perhaps not. I think what is missing is a unique voice that most subs have. It is so drenched in detail that your creative style isn't coming out in it. Perhaps that is what I am sensing. But it is a great idea, just missing a little flair. I think each submission here requires fifteen pieces of flair. ;) Go to Comment
Eyre Magick - Introduction
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Strolen's comment on 2012-06-25 10:36 AM
Oh boy, I am liking this idea...A LOT. Mana, yeah, OK but this ore thing is a fascinating idea. When you hit surface-ore I physically moved closer to the monitor.

Can't wait to see how it is used in the world! I think the concepts will become much clearer and make this make more sense. Now, I am intrigued and want more and will almost immediately go to your next sub I noticed.

(PS. My inner hope is that every bold word/phrase will eventually be linked to another sub. :) ) Go to Comment
The Nexus
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-08 04:29 AM
This is incredible. Sorry I missed it till now! I want to read a novel about it. Makes me think of the style of King or Koontz with all this crazy goodness and awesomeness. Go to Comment
Tuner Mages
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 01:57 PM
These are a great idea! Wonder if you could hire out some outcast Turner mage mercenaries for certain adventures when you know you will need a little more oompf to you mages current list of spells.

Love your thought that they could fix a cursed item!! Bonus points for that idea! Go to Comment
30 Ways to Cheat Death
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-21 01:20 PM
Where has this been all my death?

HAHAHA. I kill me! Go to Comment
7 Things I've Learned
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2013-04-30 12:14 PM
I enjoy these types of tips. Go to Comment
Justice Served
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-28 06:43 AM
Not sure what is happening as I had no issue editing it or expanding. When you paste from an outside program, use the buttons instead of just pasting. There are three Paste, Paste from Plain Text and Paste From Word. Try one of those next time as the software does some cleaning and paragraph formatting stuff for you. Also, when you edit, try and click on source and that should allow you to get to the bottom of a few things. When you use source you can see how odd the formatting is of your submissions from using a mix of paragraph, divs and line breaks. Normally all you should need is a nice paragraph tag around each paragraph. So the pasting is probably the root of the problem. Go to Comment
Justice Served
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-28 01:01 PM
Start a thread in the forum with all the difficulties and I will see what I can do. Hate clogging up a submission with all these technical complaints. Go to Comment
Death of a King
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-28 02:05 AM
I understand your reasoning for finally joining! It matches the purpose we made the site in the first place.

Overall it was a great, bitter tale with an interesting twist at the end.

There are some small inconsistencies (he couldn't fathom 5000 years but you said he ruled for 3000 years for instance) and the thy's and thou's are more disrupting than mood setting to me, especially when the writing doesn't really conform to the usage (and doesn't use thine or thee instead of thou) without the rest being written towards that style. There is a certain change in language cadence when you use those words but these seem more a search & replace. It would do better without them. But practice makes perfect and I am thrilled you were brave and shared!

Overall it was a quick entertaining read for certain! Was happy to read it and greatly enjoyed it.

To further impress us, you may want to write another sub with the description of the Star Blade, the creation through the destruction, and that would be cool. Go to Comment
Surgeon Birds
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-22 12:59 PM
They should give you cookies and orange juice. Go to Comment
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-23 12:13 AM
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-23 12:22 AM
WENCH, ALE! Go to Comment
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-22 12:54 PM
WENCH...ALE! Go to Comment
T/S Bomb
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-18 04:03 PM
I want some of what you have had lately. What a bunch of odd submissions. :) Go to Comment
Sheen Leech
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-14 01:58 PM
I like it. Simple, nothing crazy, just a fun twist to confuse and confound. Go to Comment
Sheen Leech
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-14 02:03 PM
I would love to combine this with another bug that takes advantage of the missing sheen though. It attracts a mate, why not something else that may react with the blade.

Perhaps a fresh sheen removal attracts a certain spider that will spin a web cocoon around the "leeched" equipment. Chemicals in the web interact with the leeches excretion and solidify in some kind of uber hard reaction. The web can be removed but it is left with a reddish discoloration that is now much harder than the weapon/armor was. If it is leather, it is no longer supple or bendable. Works best on bladed weapons...but hope it is already sharpened. It will never lose its sharp blade but if it was dull or nicked when wrapped, it will be impossible to sharpen as well. Go to Comment
Neko Augmentation
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-14 02:18 PM
This about sums it up "...a girl with a tail is weird man, it's damned weird!"

I have no idea what to do with this. Just makes me think of the CSI episode where they were all dressed in furry costumes and were dry humping all over the place....and then I got more confused. Avatar? Go to Comment
The Cane of Abdication
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-13 09:28 AM
I like this one a lot! Fun and entertaining to think about how it can be used. I would be tempted to go with Mourn's comment as well so the players could use it. Hate to see them die "by accident." Go to Comment
Robes of the Heartmender
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-13 07:50 AM

Pretty cool. Like a good backstory for a magic item that can be very useful to a group...or to a village.

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The Sea of Snot
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Strolen's comment on 2012-06-16 02:34 AM
Ha, I was expecting something silly too and found something quite ominous. Love the idea that all ogres go there to give birth. Has a tribal, magical quality to it and then the whole ecosystem came alive with great creatures and the perfect amount of detail allowing us to use it effectively. I thought this was awesome! Go to Comment
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