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Shivenhusk the Unliving Refuse
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-25 01:35 PM
I like the church war plot aspect of it. Having a demi-god, of that sort, actively going against his Aunt's church makes for great indirect conflict in the world! PCs would be affected by odd parts of this war and may, in scenarios, even get involved. Decent history and reason for coming into being as well. I find this very usable. Go to Comment
Treatise on Necromancy
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-25 01:23 PM
Normally I try and leave comments about spelling and structure alone but this is a rough draft. An excellent rough draft, but in dire need of another read through. I see the voice you are trying to get out and I love it, however if you read it out loud you will find many errors that make it difficult for me to get through.

I think you can up this .5 to a point with a quick rewrite to make things more clear! Go to Comment
Four Forges: A simple board game played by Dwarves
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 12:23 PM
Took me a second to get the hang of it but your description explained it very well. Will have to put this together with my eldest and see how it turns out!

Excellent background on the game as well. Felt it was perfect and gave a lot of personality to it. Great sub! Go to Comment
Four Forges: A simple board game played by Dwarves
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 12:25 PM
Crumb, out of votes for the day. Wondering why that was. "I'll be back." Go to Comment
Four Forges: A simple board game played by Dwarves
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-26 12:55 PM
Got my votes!! Go to Comment
Bacon the Dog
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 09:37 AM
How can you not like Bacon?! Go to Comment
ScrasTech Templates
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 12:22 AM
I would call this more of a "General Submission template". We would do well if we all followed them to a point...or at least asked all those questions.
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Riddlerock
Articles  (Area)   (Water)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-22 03:33 PM
What is in my pocket?

The names of the wizards were my favorite. :) Need a link to a riddle thread so we can use this easier. I sure as heck won't be able to come up with any riddles by myself. Go to Comment
Moonology Manuscript
Plots  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 01:45 AM
Link it to the books thread or freetext for extra usefulness? Go to Comment
30 Wacky Wedding Customs
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 01:43 AM
Took me a couple tries to read the entire list (life, not inability interrupted). There are some absolute gems in there and I was dazzled by some of the creativity. Awesome!! Go to Comment
Generating Fear: Darkness
Articles  (At Table)   (Gaming - Genre)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 01:42 AM
Need some sweet plot seeds or more examples to make this truly useful. I see the direction but I am lost in the dark. Go to Comment
Bow of the Astormen
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-21 02:31 PM
I am turning on the negative votes again. ;) Go to Comment
Bow of the Astormen
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-21 02:31 PM
No speaking troll in the comment section. Go to Comment
Yethamerands Stonecloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-20 12:27 PM
Sweet.

Once destroyed would be a royal pain. I like the idea that gargoyles in this world could be those in that trapped situation. Magic is able to allow them to take other sigiled statues forms but they would remain stone. Once destroyed they could continue to inhabit others. Slim to nil ability to communicate or write because of the difficulty of using the other statues. Perhaps they can even be summoned into the new styled gargoyles by wizards. Perhaps an incentive for a wizard to trap somebody in there too.

Is each styled rune a different "room" then? That is how I envisioned it. Go to Comment
Adam Smith
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-20 02:12 PM
I loved the intro story but then the actual person kinda fell flat for me. He is insanely difficult to use and the plot suggestions are very specific and require a lot of set-up. I like the mood it sets up A LOT and would enjoy it much more as fiction in its current state and would love to read a bit more about the crimes. Go to Comment
Rune Lore
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-03 03:28 AM
Good solid start to a magic system. Would be even more awesome if you had a graphic with the different symbols on it to use as reference. But a somewhat normal rune system.

Where does the magic for the runes come from would be good to see. And can anybody draw the runes once they know them? This isn't that complex so not hard to memorize. What keeps others from using it, what needs to be done to complete the rune to make it active...stuff like that.

Excellent start though! Go to Comment
Takamoto's Dogs
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-16 12:33 PM
Amusing. Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 12:45 PM
Four shure! Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 12:46 PM
This was one of those ideas I wanted to write to get it out of my head but wasn't enthralled enough with it to give it the full treatment. I made a conscience decision to stop worrying about things and just do it! I will start posting more and not worry about being Scras. ;) Go to Comment
Tracker Bush
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2012-09-18 12:58 PM
Update: Forgot to add Strolenati Guild to my freetext. It is NOT cheating damnit! Go to Comment
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