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7 Things Wrong with Transformers: Age of Extinction
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2015-04-07 08:03 PM
Comments removed as totally inappropriate.

You forgot a couple things in the review.

Many big bang. Show. Boom. Make big noise and much confusion. Fight, gooooooood.

I really wanted to like them but the main thing that turned me off was the huge complexity of the robots themselves. They are only Transformers in so much as they can alter themselves into any form vs. actually transforming into the form they have parts for. Might as well be Terminator and it loses the childhood enjoyment I had in the complex parts that would form the gun, truck, etc.

I love action movies, but I like them more when the effects support the story vs. the effects being the story.

I lost interest after the second one.

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Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Strolen's comment on 2012-03-06 01:28 PM


Honestly, Haukagaron was my favorite part of this. I would have been willing to learn much more about him! I feel similar about the difficulty of the location but it is easy enough to pull out of the abyss and use it as is in some other random location. Enjoyable location. Would be willing to visit but wouldn't spend the night.


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Gark'ng, the Man who Burned
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2014-10-20 08:08 PM
Wow, what an insane idea. Was drew in and wondering what was going all the way to the end.

But this is just the beginning and it begs for more. We can come up with the answers but I am very curious as to how you thought to handle it. Who gave him the power and his new name? Why? Would he not be shot by archers at some point? Arrows made of wood have the obvious ending but how? How is at happening.

You have me by the throat gasping for more. Go to Comment
Seven Forms Ascendant Hunter
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2014-10-21 06:12 PM
I think Hunter is an awesome character. The story is well grounded and well explained. Gives us enough information about the societies that it didn't leave me with any nagging questions about it, gave me what I needed to keep up with her progress.

Very enjoyable and would be a fun character to encounter and RP. Love the internal complications synopsis at the end too. Great character! Go to Comment
Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2014-10-21 06:14 PM
Dang. And an extra boost for being an author of bunches of them! Go to Comment
PrimaryAssociateProfiles.tex
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Strolen's comment on 2014-09-01 01:49 PM
fuzzyfuzzyclickclack

Some of the names were very fun!

Awesome list that I can see holds a lot of thought! Plenty of possible plot points and teasers, relationships. I like all the little details that you can't help but wonder about. Fascinating list! Go to Comment
Necropolis
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
Strolen's comment on 2014-08-17 06:56 PM
I actually don't mind this type of sub when it comes down to it. A warning that it is a 52MB zip file might help though. That is huge!!

I would have liked a few examples from the attachment though. The purpose of the site is to share ideas so not having some examples and such in the submission is a little annoying to me.

If I had my way, I would ask that you pick a riddle or a portion that represents the attached. Then at the end invite the reader to download the file after giving some content. Go to Comment
Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-08-17 07:00 PM
Couldn't put a 30 on this one. :)

A bunch of awesome ones in there and enough variance to entertain anybody with a sack of beans!! Go to Comment
Constantine Mauro
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Strolen's comment on 2014-05-24 06:26 AM
Cult of Done!

Glad you put it out in the wild. It does need some work but being about a devout of Mathom in a sub about Mathom, I don't think there is any other better offering than this. :)

I can hang with the rest, but that last sentence tugs at my curiosity. Go to Comment
Inns to remember
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2014-05-25 02:05 AM
I enjoyed reading these as well. Inns with personalities that can help any world grow. Often times, places like these turn into player comfort zones where they will continue to return too because they enjoyed the experience of it. Go to Comment
3 coins
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-03-28 03:55 AM
Well thought out idea I thought. I had a few questions that were quickly answered and it all came together for me. I had a distinct Twilight Zone voice over effect in my head during the first bit and the intro. That set the tone for the rest of the piece for me. Go to Comment
3 coins
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-03-28 03:57 AM
Since these are magic, I just figured that the coins would understand the intent of the gift or help. So if the coins are with a person, the coins will know when it is time to move on and urge the owner to pass them to another deserving of the luck...and an enhanced version of the luck at that. If a greedy many did something to further himself then I doubt the coins will urge the passing. Pretty self-regulating as far as I could tell. You get them in the wrong fashion...bam....cursed. Go to Comment
Bjonak
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2014-03-28 04:12 AM
The dark version of Jim Carrey's The Mask? :)

A fine cursed item. I found I had to reread a few paragraphs to get the gist of it, which affected the understanding, but overall pretty clear. I also like that you put it in many genres and simple scenarios. Not everything has to be epic and this is a good reminder of the possibility of using it in many different ways.

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Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-03-02 12:31 PM
Wow. That was super fun to read. Did you make most of that up or is there lore associated with that character? Go to Comment
30 Judges
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-23 03:41 AM
Another great 30 Cheka. For all the times PCs get caught by the law, I could easily use these judge's personalities as the sheriff or Guild leader that gets crossed. Most any authority figure that has the power to pass sentence for a digression. Some fun judges with good twists. Get out your dice, lets see who the law is in this town. Bonus for wrapping in some other subs! Go to Comment
NCO Zak 'Zed' Leterrier
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-03 03:28 AM
I wish you didn't have the author's note so I could be brilliant and correctly deduce the mash-up. :)

You don't talk about UW-1!

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Creating Generators from 30s
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-03 03:30 AM
Could we build a converter to automate this? Go to Comment
Grug The Exile
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-03 03:34 AM
Assuming he slaughtered the elven farmers? Or was he about to when something stopped him and he spent time with them and learned how to cook? Can't imagine an orc warrior knowing which herbs to use at his orc encampment.

This one leaves me hanging a bit. Interesting back story and I want to accept it all, just doesn't have all the justification that gets him from a to b so a feeling of things missing stays with me. Go to Comment
Organic NPCs (and PCs)
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-03 03:55 AM
This is a fantastic NPC template. I put it on par with the 5 Room Dungeon in usefulness on getting out a fully fleshed submission.

Will have to see about a Organic NPC quest....

:)

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A New Pass...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2014-01-26 10:47 AM
I like the abandoned pass type posts. Always have liked them. Undead is a cool spin and a good base to work on. Enough here to be fun! Go to Comment
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