I have read these half hazardously over time and always planned to start at the beginning and work my way through them.

Just wanted to say that I love that you are sharing your campaign even though I don't comment on all of them! Go to Comment

I didn't see it preupdate but I can definitely see how you actively responded to the comments. This is a nicely formatted and pretty thorough sub. Some of the signature spells are pretty hardcore, but I guess that is why they are SS!

Go to Comment

This was my new test edit post. If everything in the citadel was going to be written over, I wanted it to be better than the graphic upload test. So those ddd were leftover from my test editing phase.

And I do want to spend more time on this. I needed a quick sub to test the submission scripts so used this. There are at least two more subs coming associated with this. When I bring those out, I will update this to give it a little more flavor. Go to Comment

You need to take the ideas and throw them up as an idea comment instead of down here! Go to Comment

Good Golly. If its teeth are made to tear flesh and it is 20 feet tall, I am loathe to meet what it eats vs. gulps down. Go to Comment

Tentacles! Outstanding.

Is it bad that I pictured the armor more like a garbage bag type? Kill the creature, remove the teeth and guts, step into it and cut out holes for arms. :)

Love it!!!!

Almost want to issue a challenge to see what others could describe about the picture. I feel the picture is the centerpiece allowing many interpretations. Great job on it!! Go to Comment

An order of blind monks? That got me curious. Decent sub with all the fix'ns. Go to Comment

Though shalt go over 100 words if you must to make the submission read like something readable in a readability reading type of readery way.

Sacrifice the 100 word challenge before you sacrifice clarity!

If you left a lot unexplained I think you just dump the 100 word attempt and make it a normal sub, even if it is short. Go to Comment

That was pre-graphic. Go to Comment

If you have issues with the usability of the site, or anything else off-topic, please take it to the forums and leave these comments to discussing the actual sub.

The previous 4 comments will self-destruct in 24 hours. Go to Comment

I was supposed to get those in her will! Go to Comment

Fun gift for grandma! Go to Comment

So it goes all the way through the enemy to continue its hunt? Ouch. Go to Comment

Good overview. I am still waiting on a post that goes deeper into the magic and how it works. Got me very curious about it. Go to Comment

Holy crap, is that Stephen King? What a wickedly insane idea!

I am a rare person to vote so high but when a sub grips me, it grips me. I want to read the book NOW. Go to Comment

I can instantly see the use of this and, I must admit, the organization of how to find the information was what intrigued me. That is definitely a great resource! Go to Comment

I added the Oekaki graphic to help identify these subs a little better. Go to Comment

I think it is a fun idea. The idea of it entrapping the victims and attracting the enemy to kill them is pretty darn neat. Go to Comment

Holy crap. I almost feel guilty that this is a 30 when each one could definitely stand on its own. What a great list. Excited to see this one continue!!
Go to Comment

Oh.

I really like this idea of the magic being absorbed (kinda) by living creatures, driving them mad and creating instability in the magic around them.

We wantssss more....precioussss Go to Comment