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Fun gift for grandma! Go to Comment

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I was supposed to get those in her will! Go to Comment

So it goes all the way through the enemy to continue its hunt? Ouch. Go to Comment

Good overview. I am still waiting on a post that goes deeper into the magic and how it works. Got me very curious about it. Go to Comment

Holy crap, is that Stephen King? What a wickedly insane idea!

I am a rare person to vote so high but when a sub grips me, it grips me. I want to read the book NOW. Go to Comment

I can instantly see the use of this and, I must admit, the organization of how to find the information was what intrigued me. That is definitely a great resource! Go to Comment

I added the Oekaki graphic to help identify these subs a little better. Go to Comment

I think it is a fun idea. The idea of it entrapping the victims and attracting the enemy to kill them is pretty darn neat. Go to Comment

Holy crap. I almost feel guilty that this is a 30 when each one could definitely stand on its own. What a great list. Excited to see this one continue!!
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Oh.

I really like this idea of the magic being absorbed (kinda) by living creatures, driving them mad and creating instability in the magic around them.

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You need to take the ideas and throw them up as an idea comment instead of down here! Go to Comment

Good Golly. If its teeth are made to tear flesh and it is 20 feet tall, I am loathe to meet what it eats vs. gulps down. Go to Comment

At first I thought of the pranks that military or colleges play on each other; steal each others mascots or guidon amongst other things. Then the guards being upended sort of ruined that thought and upped the maliciousness of the entire thing.

If they guards could be that easily subdued and the castle that easily robbed, this king would most likely be mocked and nobody would fear him or his armies. Ripe for takeover. He may have to do a show of force just to get some respect back and prove he isn't that defenseless.

The kid one, without some crazy magic, seems a bit too far fetched to be likely but I do love the idea of the pacifist shaman!

A very original idea and one that definitely contains some great inspiration! Go to Comment

Should throw the 100 word challenge freetext on it to identify it as such so it gets the proper review. Go to Comment

A decent quick one. Go to Comment

Fun!! Go to Comment

Reads like a nice convoluted plan that is complex enough to leave plenty of room for PC interaction yet easy enough to follow. Not sure I could add anything without knowing which way you are intending to go with it. But as far as that, it seems you have a solid plan for it all already. Go to Comment

Seems like I got to it after a lot of edits because I think this is a great NPC. I haven't read the linked plot yet, but I don't have to in order to enjoy the use I could get out of this person.

As is, he is an honorable knight thrown from his order and now an escaped convict. Still honorable from what I gather here, with a past he needs to hide out of necessity. Shouldered with guilt and probably with a need to track down the truth and clear his name he will always have an alternate, primary motivation besides what the PCs may expect from him. A very nice background for a complicated NPC.

You could use the betrayed background to good effect in many ways and, while the initial setup is specific with the knights of thrul and all that, it would be a very simple thing to make it fit in almost any game.

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